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OC Xereptis: W.I.P by Silent-Neutral OC Xereptis: W.I.P by Silent-Neutral
My fanOC? based off the original Alien...

I was encouraged to work on some original characters for my major in artclass this year, soo...I decided to draw my OC Xereptis. (Seh-Rep-Tiss)

This is just a really bad sketch for now and was drawn on um....a really big piece of paper xD.
It's 4 A4 sheets big. (dunno what that size is called, lol)
Anyways, that's why the body is cut off, my scanner is only a4 size.

I'm quite pleased with how Xereptis came out...I wanted it/him to resemble a balrog, hence the bull horns. I like to describe Xereptis as a 'Xeno-Balrog' hybrid thingy. I think I'll make him more complicated though, coz the lower body not complete.

Until I fix the perspective of his barbed tail and possibly the legs, that you can't see sorry, I'm going to go ahead and ink it.

I have one question....
The arm in the foreground; Is it in proper perspective...?

TT___TT I admit I copied that hand from a still of the AVP film. I thought maybe I should make the elbow smaller...
Ey I'm not sure, Hell, any suggestions at all, I'll keep in mind for when I fix this.
I might end up erasing that whole hand and try again though
>>to be scrapped<<

Xereptis Silent-Neutral
Original Alien creation H.RGiger ~:heart:
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Fireydude12 Featured By Owner May 15, 2010  Student Artist
Gandalf: YOU-SHALL NOT-PAAAASS!! *Crumbles the ground*

Balrog-Xeno thing: *Roars.. And as it falls, it grabs Gandalf.. Beginning their epic battle*
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Silent-Neutral Featured By Owner May 17, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
rofl! X'D I liked that balrog from LOTR. Would be funny if it were a giant alien instead xP
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Fireydude12 Featured By Owner May 18, 2010  Student Artist
Totally
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SOTDcorp Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Professional General Artist
I really like the design and it is a great pose.
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Silent-Neutral Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thankyou~ :aww::thanks:
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SOTDcorp Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional General Artist
you're welcome
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xx--dark--angel--xx Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009
wow thats scarily awesome XD
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Silent-Neutral Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aha thanks 83
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Paiopa Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009
Wow that's a pretty unique design Silent! I'm sure you'll have a better version for us to see (not that this isn't good). I think the forearm looks well positioned and proper perspective, but then again I'm not an expert on the subject lol.

I like the details of the scales and the horns are awesome too!
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Silent-Neutral Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thankyouu :D
I might make that arm shorter/smaller though.

hehe, thanks again :thanks: I'm happy you like it
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Paiopa Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2009
Always happy to help :D
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martyn-leon Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009
I think the hand seems a little big, but the rest of it seems very in proportion, and :omg: this is beautiful!
How the hell do you do it?
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Silent-Neutral Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^; well, to dramatize the perspective,I think either the hand should be bigger,or the arm should be smaller.
lol thankyou~! :thanks:
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zzzett Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I think it's cooler than the original alien :D
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Silent-Neutral Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol aw thankyou :love:...still, credit to HR Giger for first creating this sleek creature ;p
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Coolgirl1314 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009
Cool but Where dose this Alien Came from?
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Silent-Neutral Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
uhmm... o__O...I'm not exactly sure what you mean by that...
are you asking if this is from an actual movie etc? or if I made a story about where it came from...?

Well... It's not from anywhere, besides my mind. :XD: So far anyway. It has no story atm.
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Coolgirl1314 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009
ok very mind
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freedoms-fire Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009
The arm in the foreground looks fine, to me, although it could be a bit closer to us. But the one in the background looks a little off...the hand? The wrist should vanish behind the joints and the carpals should be a bit more emphasized.

I want this thing, though. *¬*
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Silent-Neutral Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yes it should be more 'closer'. hmm...
Maybe if I made the elbow area a bit smaller, could that work... o_o??

aha, yeah that hand was a bit difficult...drawing fingers frontally viewed at the tip is....uh challenging lol. I might have to avoid that and pose it differently.

hehe ^___^ happy to know you like it 8DD
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freedoms-fire Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009
I understand. Hands are quite annoying... XD But oh so fun at the same time.

I like most your stuff, by the way. :3
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Silent-Neutral Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ooh I agree :nod: haha.
aww reallyy, thankyouuuu~<3<3 -huggle-
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freedoms-fire Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009
:3 <3! -Hugs on.-
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Nicxter Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009
I must say it looks awesome! What do you mean "really bad"?! I wouldn't even manage to do so if I tried my hardest! XD

About the elbow... Hm.. I think you should make the "inner part" of the elbow smaller (you get which part I mean, right?)

I have never seen Alien, or Predator, nor Alien VS Predator TT-TT
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Silent-Neutral Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks lol.
I think you're talking about the end of the arm where it makes a 'hill'? mm yeah I'll have to make that smaller
thanks for critting it 8)

haha aw, the movies are fun xD just sometimes the humans are annoying and hog the screen too much TT__TT....
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Nicxter Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2009
You're most welcome :)

Well, I hopefully will see the movies someday, and then I can use this "warning" I got to be prepared XD

I think that I someday maybe will draw a fanart of him, he's so cool!

Sorry for the long time it took for me to respond
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Silent-Neutral Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha cool 8D
aww really?! that would be so awesome if you diddd O__O :glomp:

haha ish okay <83
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