ok so I'm guessing they are doing some changes with deviantart lately because I tried fixing this buggy load strip by reformatting the file and re-uploading it, but for some reason it wont display anything above 1k width. it automatically resizes the strip to 600 or 400 px which is completly useless for reading. It also creates a really low resolution in the file for some reason, so if you can't read it, go ahead and download it :/ that's the best we can do for now.
ch 4 here we goooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.
Honestly this one was hard to do, mostly because it is a different format from how I usually do Bloodstain. On would think after drawing comics professionaly I would get used to the vertical normal pages , but nope :/
Bloodstain to me was always about relaxing and just going with the flow and that meant not being constrained with the format so this was... challenging.
Hopefully I'll get used to it soon :/
also special thanks to Veldalis for creating Elly's handwriting font. (it's the one used on the imaginary house map XD)
My handwriting resembles Vlad's chicken scratches XD
chapter 1: sigeel.deviantart.com/gallery/…
chapter 2: sigeel.deviantart.com/gallery/…
chapter 3: sigeel.deviantart.com/gallery/…
and if dA won't open the image properly, either try refreshing the page or opening it in a different browser.
I praise the amelioration of your work. The details, colors, shadowing are really better than at the beginning (which is normal, but after a long time, I went back to read the rest of your comic, and it was one of the first remarks I get in my head). Please continue that way !
Well, I dare say that you accomplished already both of you goals.
The story is deeper and the details are better brought and the amelioration in the art is pretty obvious.
Please continue your improvement!