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You Come and Go

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You Come and Go

In the room You come and go, Adrift in desolate disgrace And barely show your face Although I see the markings of a tomb imprinted in Your somber guise, A stony statue of remorse. I wonder which is worse - To be alive, Or live unfeeling in your skin. Out on my street, In weeping rain, In bleeding snow, you come and go Floating to and fro In pain, In final spasms of defeat. Inside my crypt I come and go In air weighed down by sweetened dreams. But through the haze, it seems, You glow, Like hollow silky golden script inscribed upon An empty shell, Discarded once and never found. I wonder how I'll ever tell - Are you
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You Come and Go

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You Come and Go

In the room You come and go, Adrift in desolate disgrace And barely show your face Although I see the markings of a tomb imprinted in Your somber guise, A stony statue of remorse. I wonder which is worse - To be alive, Or live unfeeling in your skin. Out on my street, In weeping rain, In bleeding snow, you come and go Floating to and fro In pain, In final spasms of defeat. Inside my crypt I come and go In air weighed down by sweetened dreams. But through the haze, it seems, You glow, Like hollow silky golden script inscribed upon An empty shell, Discarded once and never found. I wonder how I'll ever tell - Are you

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Ubuntu 8.04 - Hardy Heron

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Artist // Hobbyist // Photography
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Llama: Llamas are awesome! (9)
My Bio
I'm a student at Northwestern University studying psychology. I dabble in photography in my spare time.

Favourite Movies
Star Wars
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
U2, Keane, Coldplay, Travis, The Beatles, Hot Hot Heat, Michael Buble, James Blunt
Favourite Books
Too many
Favourite Writers
Too many
Favourite Games
TF2, Civ series
Favourite Gaming Platform
Wii
Tools of the Trade
Notebook, pen, camera
Other Interests
Reading, writing, music, photography, science

Hm.

Hm.

About time to resurrect my old DA account...I've been doing a lot of photography lately, so I'm changing my slant from writing to photography...

My Short Story

My Short Story

I just submitted The Revelation of the Time Machine (The Revelation for short :D). It's a big achievement for me because I haven't written any prose for a while, and the first time I do, it turns out that good. It's my best short story yet, even though there's a lot of room for improvement. So please read it and tell me what you think! I'm definetly going back to writing fiction now... ~M~

Poetry

Poetry

Last night I wrote a poem and I submitted it today (just now, actually). Then, I decided to submit some of my older poems. Now, I'm not submitting even close to all of them, because they're just too embarassing. But I've found ones that I actually like and would like to share with people. I've also realized how much I've improved at poetry writing. I could never consider myself a "good" poet, but it's reassuring to see this much improvement. Good thing DA is here...

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isang-peministaStudent Traditional Artist
Hi there! You commented on my latest fbomb article (the one about "Maggie Goes On A Diet"), and I found your blog that way. Just wanted to tell you that it looks AWESOME. :omg:
shrewdcatHobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :D
sebeProfessional Interface Designer
thanks for the fav !
HunterDogStudent Digital Artist
Llama!!! =D
dorinaOoProfessional Photographer
thank you for the fav :faint: :D
MattLanhamHobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the fave.