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Kazumi Magica - Happy Halloween ! by Shizuko-Akatsuki Kazumi Magica - Happy Halloween ! by Shizuko-Akatsuki
Kazumi from Mahou Shoujo Kazumi Magica.

Happy Halloween everyone !
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spacesailor10 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I love the hat! such an interesting shape at the tip <3
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Jujoweh Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
The coloration here is quite well done, but the main problem is the composition and the way you drew the anatomy of her head and breasts.

In  terms of composition: I don't like the sweets that much. I am not sure if they are supposed to float due to the magic of the witch or why they are there at all. It would be nicer to have some propper scenery in the background to make her look believable, something really easy (like a colour gradient) or nothing at all.
Then the anatomy of her head: It's hard to describe for someone who isn't a native speaker... On the left side I think the head is not broad enough, making it seem like she lacks a little bit too much of the back of her head. Then the line of her, by the way quite well shaded, hair is really straight. So if you imagine how the hairstyle looks underneath the hat it seems quite weird.
The breasts seem really flat due to the ribbons of the collar being straight and not following the curves that are naturally supposed to be there. From the one line you can see that the breasts are actually supposed to be quite huge, due to that the clothing would have some more shadows, aswell, to make it look more three-dimensional. :-D


Well... but that's enough critisism for today. What I really like is the overall design of the character aswell as the lights in her eyes.
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks ! I'm practicing anatomy every day so I hope this will look better in the future !^^
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Jujoweh Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Me too. :-D I am sure you'll achieve your goals some day. :-D at least you are quite good even today. :-D
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, it's pretty encouraging ! :)
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Saywinter Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this one ! looks good keep it up ^^
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much !^^
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