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Distant Star by Shizuko-Akatsuki Distant Star by Shizuko-Akatsuki

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You're just above, shining amongst the stars
I need your warm light, in a such cold and dark place
But you remain so distant, unreachable

The stars are falling, carrying with them my dead dreams
If I could wish upon them,
I'd ask to be back to these days.

Enjoy..~
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oceansigh Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful and portrays some strong emotion~:heart:
The thing I didn't like about this was the curving platform and the girl's sitting pose x.x ;
You could have done a better job on them uwu;
One thing you can do to improve the sky is by putting more stars closer and have more variety in their size (like maybe you could use a spray brush or something, it does the job quite well ^^)
Since they all seem to be of the same size , you're getting better at it tho and great colouring~ also good attempt for making a galaxy behind it xD
Keep it up! :)
(Sorryimprettybadatgivingadvisern)
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Edited Nov 5, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sorry, but I can't really see where are the mistakes on the pose and the ground, could you help me please ? x__x
Thanks for the support-
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