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Commission for :iconxeranad:
Here is his OC, Xeranad !


Hey I was a bit intimidated by this commission at first, since I absolutely don't know how to draw creepy characters owo" But it turned out way better than I thought, and it just makes me so happy ! Even though I struggled with that sword orz xD

Anyway, I hope you'll like it !
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wisahkecahk Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
A powerfully armored figure that seems strangely troubled....!!!!
Are those floating drops of blood around the main character!!!??

Stunning stuff!!!
I like it!!!
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh thanks, I'm so happy you like it <3
Yes, they're supposed to be drops of blood !
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MoondropTheIceNight Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2018  Student Traditional Artist
The colouring looks great and the shading is really nice! However, this isn't my style, so it wouldn't really catch my eye. You did a stellar job though!
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh I see, thank you for your support though <3
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Peridoti Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I think your lineart is great in this. really clean and nice to look at ^^
Also really nice sword 707 Mystic Messenger 8 
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww thanks :D
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guigadj Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2018  Student Digital Artist
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it's great, but the lineart, even if clean, needs some improvement, and maybe some blood strains would make it more creepier
great sword =P
hope it helps
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww thanks, but how could I improve the line exactly ? ;w;
And I didn't put blood strains on the sword because red on red wouldn't work well IMO !
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guigadj Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2018  Student Digital Artist
try not letting the lines cross each other where they can't and try to keep them aligned where they need to. 
and i don't know if you do this, but i did some time ago... don't rush to the end of the drawing, it's not about finishing it. just love each line that flows out of your pen. and the final result, even if takes a while will be the fuit of you love for your drawing. after this is the training and the dedication that will help you to improve <3 
the sword is red? well... maybe i'm a psychopath that sees blood everywhere =P
maybe...
i hope those hints helps you as much as they helped me =D good luck and be determined
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww I see, thank you ! I should be more careful when it comes to line ^^;
Yes this helped me a lot !Thank you for your support <3
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ioanabart Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hi!Hello ! This comment was given to you because you put your work in :iconhow-do-you-see-art:

I like the overall character design, your line art is clean and the sword turned out great. I also like the little details that you added, the little crosses in the background and also how your character stands out from the background, nice use of contrast there ^^

There's always room for improvement of course, maybe a little more shading, highlights and reflections would make it look even better but you definitely have some good skills and a good basis =3
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww thanks *w*
Where could have I added more highlights ?
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ioanabart Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Some reflections on the blade of the sword would have looked cool. You cood just generally add little reflections of lights on the mask, clothes, boots depending on the material I think that would look pretty cool
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohh you're right o-o I usually don't pay attention to the material when I color ! Thank you for your insight :D
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ioanabart Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^ Here to help
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AngeKrystaleen Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Hi! Hello ! This comment was given to you because you put your work in :iconhow-do-you-see-art:


Arrow Right by ArbuzoweArchiwum 【About the general result】
I think your deviation is attractive enough to look at =)

Arrow Right by ArbuzoweArchiwum 【About the lineart】
I think that your lineart is clean but it can be improved ^^

Arrow Right by ArbuzoweArchiwum 【About the coloring】
You've good bases but it can be improved to, just keep practise ;)
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D
How can my lineart and coloring be improved ?
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StarFishii Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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This looks absolutely amazing!
As many people have said, the posing is a little stiff, but if you're ever stuck on poses, don't hesitate to search for references!
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohh thank you !
Haha yeah, I actually used a pic of myself as reference for the pose.. but since I'm a girl and I needed male anatomy reference, I guess this wasn't the most relevant choice xD
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ShinyVaporeon258 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
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Hey! This is awesome and really cool, I'm a fan XD. I love the coloured lineart and the sword especially looks cleanly drawn and coloured. The eyes and hair also stand out quite well. The anatomy is good, and nicely stylized, though the hand near his face looks a little awkward.  The background in the bottom half looks amazing, nice highlighting/silhouetting. My first impression of the top half is that it looks a little busy, I think because of the different kinds of spots mixed with the crosses, but I like the idea. Really nice work and impression overall, well done! :D
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow thanks o////o
Haha you're right about hands, they're so hard to draw, but I'm improving !
Thanks again ♥
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ShinyVaporeon258 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! I really can't draw hands at all, so I admire your effort XD
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RoadToDusk Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
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The colour palette was a REALLY good choice, in my opinion. The lighting especially is a good touch and helps with the eerie feel.

My biggest worry, however, is that the character looks a bit too... stiff. I know I've had my fair share of "Choirboy Syndrome" -- as I personally like to call it -- so don't be too discouraged. One thing I would recommend to combat it is to, while working on the pose sketch, draw a line on how you would like the character to move, and don't be worried about curving too much; your mind will know the difference between the curve of someone on legs and the curve of, say, a naga or a mermaid. Trust me. ^w^

Again, though, really neat piece! <3
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh thank you so much Excited Blush
Hehee thanks for you advice too, I still struggle with anatomy when it comes to drawing boys but I'll improve with time !
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D-KLiKS Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2018  Student General Artist
Hi! Hello ! This comment was given to you because you put your work in :iconhow-do-you-see-art:
Very nice!
The character looks a little stiff, but the stance is good.
The color scheme is good as well.
Overall, it was good and I liked it! : D
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much for your advices, I'll keep them in mind *w*
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D-KLiKS Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2018  Student General Artist
You're welcome!
I remember having that issue when I first began drawing. I still sometimes have the issue. You don't know how many I erase and redraw things ^_^
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Cyber-Sinner Featured By Owner Edited Apr 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Super cool dans l'ensemble ^^

Mais ses jambes sont un peu trop fines... J'espère que ça pourra t'aider à l'avenir ^^)


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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Merci beaucoup :D
(oh et je sais que les jambes sont assez fines mais j'aime bien les dessiner comme ça~)
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Cyber-Sinner Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, je vois...
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pas de souci hein x3
Ça fait plaisir de voir des français par ici btw !
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Skryd Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2018
décidément très classieux ! owo
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Shizuko-Akatsuki Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Rahh merci Happy 
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