As for a specific aspect, however, I would like to know what you think of Alice's narrative. Do you like, dislike, or feel indifferent toward her character? Do you enjoy reading from her perspective, and do you think you could continue to enjoy it for the duration of a long game (50,000+ words per path)? I know several otome protagonists take a backseat to the bachelors (often so the player can project themselves onto the protag) but I do not want this for Alice. I want her narrative to be distinct; this is her story.
My top three favorite characters I wonder if they will stay the same it is Steven, Ivan and Cath. Why they are my tops well that's hard to explain. It's a mix of personality and looks. Like I like Steven's personality it's just I loved interacting with him like it made me laugh and be like hrm haha. Ivan ooh I don't know how to explain that. One I like his updated look you have for him and (i'm sorry have played the game in awhile) but I know I liked his personality. And Cath I think he is just a narky nark. It's kind of funny interacting with him and of course he has nice looks. I have told you before you have an unique drawing style and I really like it. Dang now I feel like playing the demo again.
I sincerely hope you're able to progress and reach your goal in finishing the game.
I'm a pretty big otome game nerd and I have to say, this is one of the most interesting I've played.
You've created a female character who, though honestly I didn't like at first, has really grown on me. You've created characters who are set up for immense growth and have their own unique personalities.
Not to mention you've successfully created a world where you can honestly feel the impact of what's gone on around them.
I look forward to being able to see more from you! :3
Ps. I have a feeling Steven is and will be my favorite <3 ...though Linus and Cath have begun to pique my curiosity as well for different reasons~
I'm glad you ended up liking her, but to be honest, demo Alice grates my nerves, too. XD After further developing the characters, I think I've gotten a better grasp on her and hope she'll be more likeable in the finished game - pssh, I hope everything will be more likeable in the finished game - but it already overjoys me that you liked the demo.
I really hope I can make Steven’s route awesome for you, then. I know I enjoyed outlining it; now it’s just a matter of making good writing and art happen XD At least Steven isn’t that hard to draw //slapped. And I've tried to give all integral roles in improving the ruined world, but I'd say Cath and Linus play the biggest part in the central plot. So I'm glad they interest you ;D
I look forward to playing the finished product!
One piece of criticism: Occasionally the game would run through a couple of dialogue scenes by itself (not while in skip mode)-- They were mainly continuations of the same person speaking
But really, I was hoping you'd have it up before I uploaded my little Cath I drew. C: That way I can advertise.