Thank you very much! You are right about the abdomen, but I saw and kept it that way anyway for the purpose of keeping it strictly G rated, as anything a bit further away from the wolf would have started showing sheath. But yeah, duly noted.
I definitely see what you mean about the passage from brown to red - it was a coloring mistake with the watercolors, I couldn't fix it anymore as the brown layered a bit too dark in the spot and it's impossible to wash it out from bristol without ruining the paper, unfortunately.
I also see what you mean about the leg! He is leaning on the left leg to the right should be lower because the hip angle is slanted, but yeah, definitely not that low.
Background: watercolor is very very very tricky to work with, especially on this paper. I tried to fix it the best I could.