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aaand now for some mature indepth comments...


aaand go!

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btw there is another strip to come before this scene to complete this narrative stream
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:iconinn3rmonologu3:
inn3rmonologu3 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018
Mistress! My mistress!
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:iconuniverse1919:
universe1919 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017
Such tenderness is wonderful feel. I feel a little shaky right now.
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:iconlilithalmighty:
LilithAlmighty Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am all the trembles right now
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:iconcaldorosa:
CaldoRosa Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome
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:icongillspar:
gillspar Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2016
Pervert 
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:iconcreepshow616:
CreepShow616 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2016
As of the time I write this comment, I am enjoying the story so far (despite the typos *arg* so distracting), I'm invested in the characters, and I am a little aroused despite the fact that I am not nor have I ever been into S&M. Just out of curiosity, would you feel accomplished if by the time I get to chapter 5 S&M becomes one of my fetishes?

BTW, I picture Ally sounding like Bayonetta.
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:iconlilithalmighty:
LilithAlmighty Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She DOES sound like Bayonetta in my head too! i knew it
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:iconperunil:
Perunil Featured By Owner May 25, 2016
I would enjoy your work so much better if it was grammar and typo proofed, like your story and characters are great so far, but this would be 2-3 times better with good grammar and less typos, unless you got the book proofed, at which point never mind. Oh well. 
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:iconshiniez:
shiniez Featured By Owner May 25, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
would be kinds dumb to send a book to print without editorial proofreading and fixes :)
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:icondidark666:
DiDark666 Featured By Owner May 20, 2016
What a delicious comic!!!!
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:iconsophhiee:
sophhiee Featured By Owner May 14, 2016
This is such amazing work of art! I really love the storyline and your artwork is... sexy. I can't think straight right now😀
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:iconsexygriffin:
Sexygriffin Featured By Owner May 16, 2016
You should see the finished work volumes 1-4 amazing!!!! But its so cool seeing the differences from this and the books. They are well worth buy!!!!
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:iconsophhiee:
sophhiee Featured By Owner May 24, 2016
As soon as I find a safe place to hide them, I'm getting them all. Thanks. 
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:iconminionofsolitude:
MinionofSolitude Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2016
Me?  Don't need this trick.... now.  I'm 52, and flying solo.  But, Way back when I used a simple box of Wheaties.  Lefty Grove from 1935.  Sure the insides have been gone for a while, but I say `it reminds me of Grandpa` and I keep some stuff that mom handed down to me from him inside, and his picture (in its old 9"x7" frame right there on the dresser.  What was ALSO in the box are vols 1-6 of an old B/W flip-book with Bettie Page.
Its now the 21st century, so try this; whether you are home with family, or are older and have housemates (who mostly honor Your privacy, unlike Ally's mom, or Sister), try to identify perhaps a cereal You like that others are `eehh` about, OR more importantly they have an allergy against because of nuts or other dairy aspect.  Maybe use Kellogg's Special K Nourish Coconut Cranberry / Almond, or just go with Raisin Bran Crunch.  I just tested the crunch, and vols 1-4 sit in it just fine... with room for #5!!!
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:iconsexygriffin:
Sexygriffin Featured By Owner May 28, 2016
I hide them in "plain sight" with all of my other comics I really only get the thick volume comics so they fit in. However, you can make the cliche move and put it under the mattress like guys do with their porn. Or dresser drawers. Depends on who you are hiding them from. :) if you do your own laundry then bottom of laundry basket. mattress. drawers. Any place you might have other things in hiding. Bathroom. Kitchen with cookbooks. My mom never cooked so that was an old hiding place for my siblings and I. In your car. Need any more ideas? :) 
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:iconsophhiee:
sophhiee Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2016
Lmao. I think that's about all the suggestions I need, thanks. I was mostly just paranoid that my little nieces will accidently find them no matter where I happened to hide them but I'm over it. I'ma just stack them up on my bookshelf and be a grown up about it if any of my family happens to find them. 
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:iconnewlover:
newlover Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2016
amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconthaynenova:
thaynenova Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2016
its a beautiful piece of artwork. i love it.
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:iconshadow1136:
Shadow1136 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2015
Very sensual i like it
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:icon0mniessence:
0mniessence Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
tenderness <3
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:icondax25012000:
dax25012000 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015
The power of gentle, tender touches is often overlooked in just how powerful they can be.  When both people are fully lost in being with one another, the slightest touch can drive you wild and you have perfectly captured that here!
Absolutely magnificent!
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:iconnewlover:
newlover Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2016
yes !!!!!!!!!!
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:iconooquant:
OOQuant Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
dddaaaammmnnnn
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:iconjaquina:
Jaquina Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
why they don't have a Safeword? That's irresponsible!
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:iconspudman98:
spudman98 Featured By Owner May 8, 2015
I think the safe word is Apples, if you've ever seen Castle you'll get what I mean
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:iconskadiatrazon:
SkadiaTrazon Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
you apparently haven't read much of it. They have a safe word. It's kinda the title of the whole book. >.>
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:iconjaquina:
Jaquina Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Yes, by now i know it, I was just confused because it wasn't mentioned until this page yet. At least not in the i-net version.
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:iconskadiatrazon:
SkadiaTrazon Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
ahhh. because even before all the pages were posted in order it was around here. lol
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:iconmost-awesome-maker:
Troll Physics: Put this strip in to your survival kit to make wood spontaneously combust in the wild
you jelly survival dudes
(P.S. i did not use the word fag because it is very ofensive to people who are LGBT please refrain from using homophobic remarks on the internet. this has been a public service announcement from most awesome maker reguarding homophbia. And have a nice day : )
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:iconxxdeviousotakuxx:
XxDeviousOtakuxX Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hot
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:iconcaine-of-nod:
Caine-of-Nod Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Wicked!
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:iconbhr3730lhp:
Bhr3730lhp Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
SMOKING HOT !
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:iconlinnymouse:
linnymouse Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Amazing O.O
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:icondarknana:
Darknana Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
OH MY GOd!!
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:iconlittleformosa:
LittleFormosa Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*sobs* so many restricted posts!  CURSE YOU! 
ughh, oh well, back to looking at the rest of your gallery [it's really great, may i add! :D]
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:iconmyrethy:
Myrethy Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I came for a story on human lives and a look at the effect of sexuality on peoples' emotions and developing relationships... Shiniez, you do not disappoint. You have an artful way of telling the story and portraying the sexual scenes in a manner both erotic and strangely heartwarming...
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:iconnewlover:
newlover Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2016
well said.......
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:iconponycumpie:
PonyCUMPie Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
*thumbs up* yeah thats what i like about it, it is oddly relatable and real, so it makes it just the more fantastic
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:iconmyrethy:
Myrethy Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Everything that the Stjepan Sejic does is fantastic!
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:iconponycumpie:
PonyCUMPie Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
well oi dunno the guy, but so far he delivers, cant wait for more, just finished all of the finished chapters
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:iconfr217:
fr217 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014
I came for the sexy, but I'm staying for the story.  And the sexy.

The art and the narrative in this are great! 
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:iconvesicainatrum:
Vesicainatrum Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I was told about these comics a little over a week ago by my sub, and I can honestly say that I am quite enjoying your work.
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:icontenedria:
tenedria Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Professional General Artist
8U me like
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:icontruckturner2:
truckturner2 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
Sweet aunt jemima!!!
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:icondakotadugger:
dakotadugger Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
*blushes* ohh~ ♥♥♥ I so love this so far ~ ♥♥♥
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:icongeorgevanyan:
GeorgeVanyan Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student Artist
nice anatomy :)
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:iconredheart200:
RedHeart200 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Yui Hirasawa (Castanets Dance) [V1] 
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:icondwimerlaid:
Dwimerlaid Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Spazattackplz 
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:iconjujubanzen:
Jujubanzen Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
I am really, like REALLY, enjoying this. The mindset of both the sub and the dom are so eloquently portrayed in this, with just the right touch of comedy. This scene in particular I found especially titillating. I could almost feel her touching Lisa.
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:iconcristosius:
Cristosius Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
This is going to be..... delicious and dangerous, both in a good and bad way, that's what my gut tells me ^^ :D
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