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the day they first met

just a s a break from the xmass series i wanted to do this one for a while... just a fun character moment of preparations for their first encounter so to speak

just an insight into the nature of these things... no matter how intense, it is after all roleplaying, and going too far too fast can lead to an utter and epic fail... being a dominant one means taking alot of responsibility and knowing when to stop
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DragonmanX-90's avatar
Ally's outfit makes me think one half Baroness from G.I. Joe and one half Bayonetta.  ...Damn Lisa is a lucky woman.
I’d like to say that this is as far as I got before I had to stop reading... to go buy the four-book Kindle bundle on Amazon, because holy shit you are an artist I need to throw some money at. Now, if you’ll excuse me, my documents have downloaded and I’ve got a bit of binge-reading to do. 😉
i just love and addore your  series
AlicesDollhouse's avatar
I love it too. Very relatable for me personally.
Looking forward to the next Mercy update!
EcchiDragon's avatar
Thank you for making this comic. It always brings a smile to my face (for many different reasons) when I read what you've made :)
runewuff's avatar
Had this bookmarked "for later" for-ever. OMG it's brilliant so far, you made them real people. This is got to be the first erotic thing I've read where the people act like you know we all really would. (And that's sad.) It's also dangerous because I'm about to burst out laughing, and, if I'm asked what's so funny...
Hi, great story, there are parts I like more than others but in general, you got me. Though I haven't experieced most of the BDSN art my own, I can feel with the caracters and find one to identify with. Especially the fucing up between Lisa and Ally sounds pretty familliar to me.
Go on!
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greent64's avatar
Wow, just great!  Loving the story and characters.  I love how this one uses composition to build the tension.
Gotta go, the next panel awaits!
universe1919's avatar
Dam, what a anticipation. 
LilithAlmighty's avatar
omggggg this story has me by the....well....this story has me. by the something.
OIamwon2's avatar
Did they talk about their personal lives at all, or just positions they enjoy? I mean, why aren't they wondering whether they're in love. If its just sex, then what the hell are they worried about - it either works or it doesn't [disclaimer: I have no experience in this area]. But if they're worried about whether the love connection will transfer from the screen to real life - that I can see.

But either way, I like it.
shiniez's avatar
there is gonna come a time when you will remember these questions and you'll laugh your ass off  XD

trust me, keep reading,  but remember this note XD
rafigomez's avatar
That is a great panel. I love all the outfits.
sophhiee's avatar
"Crap! I still gotta pee!" 
Haha! Lisa is adorable. Her being nervous was making me nervous!
The lip biting in the last two panels are cute! Love the outfits, too.
0mniessence's avatar
omg they are so cute !!!
dax25012000's avatar
Easily my favorite so far!  Seeing their fantasy selves juxtaposed with their real-life worries makes for such potent imagery.  I love how confident and powerful Allison is in the top frames, while below she is just a massive ball of nerves.  Framing their roleplaying selves in mirrors helps add to the contrast of their state of mind.

THIS is why your story works so well as a comic!  No other media can really display the inner battle these two are going through during the most terrifying, yet exciting moment of their lives!

On the simpler side - You are fabulous at outfit design!!  And your use of color is so eye-catching!
chinsuru's avatar
These characters are so unique in their own way. Love it :)
The-SilverLining's avatar
Love the mirror panels!
Jackatwar's avatar
Happens to the best of us, meeting new people. Always awkward.
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K-D-Bryson's avatar
I might be going through this soon.... sigh
44NTW44's avatar
Did it go well?
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