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just a s a break from the xmass series i wanted to do this one for a while... just a fun character moment of preparations for their first encounter so to speak

just an insight into the nature of these things... no matter how intense, it is after all roleplaying, and going too far too fast can lead to an utter and epic fail... being a dominant one means taking alot of responsibility and knowing when to stop
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DragonmanX-90 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2018
Ally's outfit makes me think one half Baroness from G.I. Joe and one half Bayonetta.  ...Damn Lisa is a lucky woman.
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Killersquirrel66 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2018
I’d like to say that this is as far as I got before I had to stop reading... to go buy the four-book Kindle bundle on Amazon, because holy shit you are an artist I need to throw some money at. Now, if you’ll excuse me, my documents have downloaded and I’ve got a bit of binge-reading to do. 😉
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andreasissyswede Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2017
i just love and addore your  series
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:iconalicesdollhouse:
AlicesDollhouse Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2017  Hobbyist
I love it too. Very relatable for me personally.
Looking forward to the next Mercy update!
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:iconecchidragon:
EcchiDragon Featured By Owner Edited Nov 11, 2017
Thank you for making this comic. It always brings a smile to my face (for many different reasons) when I read what you've made :)
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runewuff Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Had this bookmarked "for later" for-ever. OMG it's brilliant so far, you made them real people. This is got to be the first erotic thing I've read where the people act like you know we all really would. (And that's sad.) It's also dangerous because I'm about to burst out laughing, and, if I'm asked what's so funny...
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:iconhomedeviant:
homedeviant Featured By Owner May 17, 2017
Hi, great story, there are parts I like more than others but in general, you got me. Though I haven't experieced most of the BDSN art my own, I can feel with the caracters and find one to identify with. Especially the fucing up between Lisa and Ally sounds pretty familliar to me.
Go on!
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:iconthepersiangod:
ThePersianGod Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
lololololololol
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:icongreent64:
greent64 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, just great!  Loving the story and characters.  I love how this one uses composition to build the tension.
Gotta go, the next panel awaits!
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universe1919 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017
Dam, what a anticipation. 
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:iconlilithalmighty:
LilithAlmighty Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omggggg this story has me by the....well....this story has me. by the something.
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OIamwon2 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2016
Did they talk about their personal lives at all, or just positions they enjoy? I mean, why aren't they wondering whether they're in love. If its just sex, then what the hell are they worried about - it either works or it doesn't [disclaimer: I have no experience in this area]. But if they're worried about whether the love connection will transfer from the screen to real life - that I can see.

But either way, I like it.
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shiniez Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
there is gonna come a time when you will remember these questions and you'll laugh your ass off  XD


trust me, keep reading,  but remember this note XD
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OIamwon2 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2016
I will.
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:iconrafigomez:
rafigomez Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2016  Professional General Artist
That is a great panel. I love all the outfits.
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sophhiee Featured By Owner May 14, 2016
"Crap! I still gotta pee!" 
Haha! Lisa is adorable. Her being nervous was making me nervous!
The lip biting in the last two panels are cute! Love the outfits, too.
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0mniessence Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
omg they are so cute !!!
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dax25012000 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015
Easily my favorite so far!  Seeing their fantasy selves juxtaposed with their real-life worries makes for such potent imagery.  I love how confident and powerful Allison is in the top frames, while below she is just a massive ball of nerves.  Framing their roleplaying selves in mirrors helps add to the contrast of their state of mind.

THIS is why your story works so well as a comic!  No other media can really display the inner battle these two are going through during the most terrifying, yet exciting moment of their lives!

On the simpler side - You are fabulous at outfit design!!  And your use of color is so eye-catching!
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:iconchinsuru:
chinsuru Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015  Hobbyist
These characters are so unique in their own way. Love it :)
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:iconthe-silverlining:
The-SilverLining Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015
Love the mirror panels!
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:iconjackatwar:
Jackatwar Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
Happens to the best of us, meeting new people. Always awkward.
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:iconcaine-of-nod:
Caine-of-Nod Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Great artwork!
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:iconk-d-bryson:
K-D-Bryson Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I might be going through this soon.... sigh
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:icon44ntw44:
44NTW44 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Student Writer
Did it go well?
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:iconk-d-bryson:
K-D-Bryson Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
meh, as well as it could have gone. we did not connect. oh well, better lunch in England. :-) thanks for asking though. means allot. 
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44NTW44 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Student Writer
No prob. ^_^ Good luck to you!
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Livvia-Norsk-Goddess Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist
"Crap I still gotta pee"
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tenedria Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Professional General Artist
most appropriate avatar for said comment.
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jazprimo Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
This is awesome. Seriously.
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FlyingRagePanda Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwww! :3 I love that white and tan outfit too. Heheheh
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avmorgan Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Crap. I can't remember what I was up to in Dec 2011... what I'm wondering is, how far back the :ahem: inspiration for this goes back.
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kurakamala Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
the pee moment was hilarious to me cause i was like omg that happen to me and its something me and Mistress laugh about now
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GlintingClRawrz Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
this page made my laugh so much - ahh, i love this!
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:iconstealth694:
stealth694 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
Vanilla or Dominant/submissive
The first meeting is always the toughest.
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AuskaTarquinEireonus Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Student Filmographer
Shall we assume that you are speaking from experience?
-Auska Tarquin
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Air-KC Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Llama Emoji 10 (Shy) [V1] its pretty right on the point, the nervousness and anticipation....Llama Emoji 02 (Blush) [V1]  its like that for real  
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pittbull44 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
I always notice people (even with a empty bladder) have a strange urge to pee when under extreme stress
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:iconairforcephoenix:
AirForcePhoenix Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's the bodies fight or flight reaction.

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:iconkaolein:
Kaolein Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Awesome art.

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:iconmomomodified:
MomoModified Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Love when they're trying on outfits, LOL
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dt7cz3gj Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
So accurate I'm embarrassed.
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Miextery Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is fantastic. Loving Ally.
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:iconwhetsit-tuya:
Whetsit-Tuya Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconbitelipplz::iconsayingplz:If you want something done right...
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TheeLadyLoLo Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
Mmmmmm, hmmmmmmm!
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:icondanifox:
Danifox Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
I know that feeling, am really giggling nervious at it too XD
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:iconhexproof:
Hexproof Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
PERF! I'm nervous for lisa xD
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
So epic!!
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Mangetsu20 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, nervous wreaks. This is what happens in real life when people try to bring their fantasies alive. Great work on the costume-try-outs, very funny, and very sexy ;) 
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SharksinSpace Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
I just realized that Allycat looks kind of like the Baroness from the original GI Joe. (At least early in the series).
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