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wot a twist hun, anyways this one is gonna be updated into first chapter.

so , why do it this way, well it is simple, through the course of the story i will get into switching monologues, showing stuff from different angles, and have characters state some opinions in hindsight, so i figured this solves my problem and makes the storytelling easie------sure i could have been more clever...buut im a lazy slacker so... what you see is what you get muahahaha
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XadarxBlack Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2018
I think I will start to read it again ^^ sooo this will be my second time reading it, since I just finish this story a few days ago after 2 and some years of letting the book to finish (and then forget the book completely) >.> 

SOOO now I can read it from head to toe :D (let's cry at the end again)
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shiniez Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
that's the spirit! XD
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romanticdreamer13 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2018  New Deviant
Love
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inn3rmonologu3 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018
Oh that lip bite makes me swoon
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The-Raven-Tenken Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
This gives me extreme feels (mostly stress) as an exactly this doing exactly this.
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AlanisTea Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
I've already purchased Vol.1 on the Amazon.
costs me quite a lot _(:з」∠)_
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kroshkarammy Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2017  Student Digital Artist

How do you make such long pages?
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dariansentient Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2017
SO! After having read through the entire story once already, I'm reading it through a second time to see how knowledge of the complete story illuminates past events. Because that's who I am. For the record, this has been one of the most delightfully human things I've ever read, and I'm a Terry Pratchett fan. SO! Here's to a second tour.
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latexaddicted Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2017
Started reading yesterday, and didn't regret a single second! Can't wait to read chapter 5 :3
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GundamMaster53 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2017
Dear lord it has been 5 years!!
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:icon666markofthebeast666:
Intriguing! I dabble in writing and I know exactly how your author feels, struggling to start. You capture the feeling so well. That's art, and I've never seen another writer try to capture the discomfort of the beginning. Brava!
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KieraLavode Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017
Okay, so after reading the entirety of Sunstone about four times, I think it's time I come out of my shell and actually write something.
Thanks for writing this. A lot. I love Sunstone, I love the characters, I love it all. Ally and Lisa are so wonderful and real and their story is so amazing, also my best friend is basically Alan, it's creepy how well that fits.
I'm not lying when I say that this got me interested in the lifestyle in the first place, and I don't think I've ever felt this understood.
So, thank you. Thank you so much.
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Nostalgia-Gamer Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017
Oh, hello... 
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universe1919 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017
Wonderful monologue,coloring, and great thinking. Must read more of this.
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Saddust Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017
I love this already !
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Selphii Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can't wait to read this. It's caught my eye so far.~
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LilithAlmighty Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well I am a fan instantly. I will be checking out the entirety of your DA stuff. After seeing a bit of your work I have concluded you shall be someone to look up to. Thanks for your hard work!
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THenkle61 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016
Nice opening scene.
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mrcasts Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016
For those new to this web comic ...once you start, it will be hard to stop! Compelling, fun and full of humor and great art.
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LP4ever Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2016
Sooo.... my graphic card said goodbye.
Who is re-reading this masterpiece again?
You guesses right! We all do :P
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HarmoneeJC Featured By Owner Edited Sep 10, 2016
Here it is the beginning. Now after 5 chapters and 127 strips in the 1st arc with 3 more strips yet to go, it's very nostalgic to see where it all started.
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DarkHeartPhotos Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
At the time of my typing this comment, I have only read the first two pages...but I can tell quality when I see it. I am gonna collect this and enjoy every moment of it...I can already tell...!
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Vexrapopple Featured By Owner May 22, 2016
Just came here from Go Get A Roomie after Allys cameo good start already great writing and love the realistic detailed facial expressions different from chloes work but variety is the spice of life as they say
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bananalord666 Featured By Owner May 20, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I remember when you first started writing/drawing these, but back then there was still only chapter one. Now that you have mentioned this comic in GGaR I shall begin the adventure anew!
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segura2112 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I thought it was past time to start reading these.
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nekobladen Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just favoring for now. Will look at later.
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Observaty Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2015
I read the first volume of Sunstone (couldn't find volume 2, so sad :'l ) and I got rather curious about the origins of what is sure to become one of my favorite comics. SO here I am, at the beginning ^^ I'm gonna enjoy that ride, oh yeah!
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sbonavida Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely!! This reading is like a sponge absorbent.
Bravo!!
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Shatterpath Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015
I don't find this underwhelming at all. This is the deep breath before setting out on the journey.
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Magick205 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It's that first act of Will that inspires Creation. 
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TheRealLazurman Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2015
As a fellow writer of fanfiction, I can sympathize with this thought process far too well.
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KantyBena20 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 13, 2015
I just started to re-reading this, translating it to my girlfriend, and now I realized of some details that I didn't see the first time I read this... Lisa's long hair, the complain when she cracked her knuckles, Alan with Anne in the photo, the "Forever mine" inscription in the ring... Even the lack of stops, commas in some parts of the text!!!

I went here because of the illustrations and I stay because of the story!!! This story is amazing!!! I will buy this in physical format ASAP!!!
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Bravetiger101 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Wow.

four things:

1. Has any of this happened to you in real life?
2. How did you learn to draw like this?
3. I've only read this, and I'm hooked
4. I'm assuming your favorite color is red...
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Tiffanyiscool Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015
wow,I'm really interested in this now.I like your art style.
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0mniessence Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
i read about this comic in a blog... not sure yet how i feel about it, but your drawings are very good, i mainly just came for the yuri tho ^^
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Mad-Man-with-a-Pen Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Nice :) I just got all caught up with Sunstone and Shiniez have to say you've written a wonderful love story here. Seriously all the images of sexy ladies having their fun aside, Ally and Lisa are so great together. Can't wait to see how things work out in Chapter 5! 
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drakenimmortal Featured By Owner May 29, 2015
The start of ANY project is always the worst...gotta love that procrastination time...
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Leon-Z Featured By Owner May 28, 2015
FUCKING PROCRASTINATION TIME!!!!


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FUCK IT...off to draw some NSWF stuff
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VincentAParker Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Dear God...you just personified what I've been going through for a few years with my own story. Shit damn!
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joekou52 Featured By Owner May 17, 2015
want does the engraving on the ring say
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anthrax117 Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
'Forever Mine'
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joekou52 Featured By Owner May 19, 2015
cool thanks
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Octavian-the-Great Featured By Owner May 16, 2015
too much text
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MickArriaga Featured By Owner May 2, 2015
So true.  I once started an online story in a chat group based on the first sentence: "The frog sat by the door with eyes as big as saucers." It turned out to be a fantasy about sorcery. A wizard lusting after a maiden and an unexpected "prince" to save her. No, he wasn't from nobility, but he was her prince nonetheless. So keep at it. You do a great job!
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Warchief-Sariel83 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ooo... Sunstone ^^
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Yurosoku Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015
I feel her pain, jumping first in to a story writing is NEVER easy. Well done with the story!
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rasterimage Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015   General Artist
Oh, lord.

Not only not underwhelming but I'd say all too resonant.

You're one hell of a storyteller.

Not that it isn't a classic bit of stage business to do a carefully set up and paced telling of how there is nothing to tell.

But yes.
And yes.
And yes.

Oh, and I just love the sunset.
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LadyDarkness97 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You have me hooked from the first page. I love the lighting I love your natural art style and I am already deeply in love with this character. 
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CostaRicaMoskito Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I freaking love the drawing. Teach me.
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GeckosFancies Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
I love the glow from the window, it lends the sequence such warmth. Lots of little details that spark my curiosity. Also I enjoy the meta writing thinking here... ^_^ I like this approach to an intro! it makes it feel real to me. 
A friend told me about Sunstone, the premise makes me really hopeful, the intro more so. I'm gonna read on soon as I have time to sit down in peace. Looking forward to it.
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