BOE book5 10
By Shieltar
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You had a good conflict going here. It's just unfortunate that you didn't push it all the way. Both Grace and Celestia are in the wrong here. Celestia get's her due but Grace does not. That what happens later is because Grace failed as a mother.
I do think you should add a slightly higher element of seriousness to this. Not evil overlords or anything like that but that when a character messes up they will get reprimanded for it.
Grace's father is a scientist so failure would be something he knows all too well. While Celestia has developed somewhat Grace herself hasn't.
It would have been better if Grace struggled more to be a good mother. Had her ups and downs. Moments where she felt like a failure and where she doubted herself.
Can you please post book six to deviant art. When I tired to register onto the other sight. I so,show got blacklisted.
Well, what'cha gonna do, banish her to the moon?
Green eyed monster time.
I think at the last panel philomina said"What?!" 
where's the next page?
I ran out of pages noooooooo
Yep, the trend keeps going. Im still getting increasingly more pissed with Grace. Now its gotten to the point that a robot bird needs to give Celestia the jealousy talk instead of her so called mother
banish her to the moon
Grumpy Celestia is cute
When young, sibling rivalry tend to happen.
celestia can talk normally now that was fast xP
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yeah or is she going to go micro nightmare celestia?
Yes, listen to Philomena. Really nicely done, great work.
I totally agree with you, Philomena.
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