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Frustation a feeling of hopelessness
indecisions cooled off, replaces
by hot heat sizzling past sins
but not eradicating them from memory
memory
memory is what haunts us taunts us
keeps us awake at night
if only recollections would fade disappear
let me fade away
away from what I did but also
to what I will become
Let me be the present.
The past is alive, and so is the future
only the present eludes me
there yet not there
keeping me awake at night
and not awake enough in the day.
Frustation..
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Fool-On-The-Hill Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2004
I can really relate to this, and I also love the structure! great work I'll have to check out your others!
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MemoryFinder Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2004
this is a really good piece. Captures what I think we all feel from time to time. THere are few emotions worse than frustration... seems there's rarely anything you can to do to lift that away when it's there. :hug:
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