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The chemical imbalance
brings him to the brink
of the natural world
and drinking in the cool smell of peace
he nods off
in a drunken sleep of desperation
Drinking because you need a drink? Grab a juice.
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Fool-On-The-Hill Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2004
The last line is powerful. Short and sweet, I like this one too!
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MemoryFinder Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2004
whoa.. another short, but good one. i like what you're saying here. seems sad still tho.
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