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How can you live life?

Nobody, no one, no where.

Your feelings are trapped inside you.

How can you bare?

Being all alone,

With great pain inside.

It's like you're a lone wolf.

You say you have someone,

But you lie.

You cry within your heart,

And never shed a tear.

It's like you're a lone wolf,

Who deep down, lives in fear.

You conceal yourself you you're not seen.

You are always quiet and never mean.

You'd do anything needed to survive.

But now look at yourself, as you're still alive.

Nobody there, to tell about your pain.

It's like you're a lone wolf,

If you just spoke, it would be your gain.

The pain dwelled on you.

And you couldn't go one.

You took that dagger and pierced your heart,

As the night turned to dawn.

But why? I was there for you.

And we were there for each other.

And now with you gone,

I guess I am now a lone wolf too...
This is a poem I wrote dedicated to a friend of mine who has passed away by suicide. This is a very emotional poem and it has always had a powerful affect upon people.
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AYLA-SECURA Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice work I loved it
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Firepaw456 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
i know how it feels to lose a friend witch is why i keep to myself. nice work btw
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SpaksTheClown Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2010
When I read your lyrics it was like I was looking at a painting of myself. Thank you
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asianlunarprincess Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008   Traditional Artist
This is brilliant, it kind of reminds me of myself ... I was always quiet and I seemed like I was always happy and I was wearing a mask for the world to see but inside I always have this pain in my chest because of a certain sumone....But I've learned to truly be happy again. When I read your poem It made me shed tears, it was beautifully written. And I'm sorri about your friend.
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GiveTheMoonAHighFive Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008   Traditional Artist
This is affective. Sorry for your friend. Nice poem good job.
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LONEwolf30 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2007
That was beautiful. I'm sorry about your friend.
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Kysa-of-Dreams Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2007
Very moving, it stirs something deep inside you....
So sad but so true...
Beautifully written, amazing peice of poetry...
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chidori-101 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2007
nice poem i like it
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Erigon Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2006
O_O WOW!!!!
I Absolutely love this!!! <3
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