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Living to count.
1ne and 6ix
is a slow process [progression].
The mechanics of
harm; abandon (1)
Such selfish act,
such cause. (2)
A reason for the
words,
the paper and departure. (3)
Disperato (4)
and finale.
Tension in the beats [breathing].
(5)
Silence.
[Close your eyes, child.
  You don't need to see this]

Exhale.
Immolation.

(6)
This is a poem i wrote quite awhile ago during darker times. Thought i'd actually share it.
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fuKtHislOVesHit Featured By Owner May 3, 2004   Photographer
wow i luve it
its deep man im still hoping i got it... lol
even if i dont get it i still like it. alot.
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shadezero Featured By Owner May 3, 2004
One thing I love about poetry, at time you can appreciate it even if you dont fully understand it ^_^ thanks muchly for the comment, im glad you enjoyed!
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Tsyoku Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2004
I love it. It's beautifully complex :nod:
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shadezero Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2004
Thanks ^_^ just hope the meaning shows through.
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