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Defector of Pricom
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Published: August 18, 2018
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Carmen, Sentry of Pricom by Shabazik

Sentry of Pricom : Choose your Own Adventure
This is a Choose Your Adventure proyect, where you take the role of a Sentry of Pricom, a Henchwoman called Carmen Urrejola in what you expect to be a normal day in the base working for the shady corporation of Pricom. After reading each part of the story, you are going to make choices that determine the main character's actions and the plot's outcome. 

Pricom is a creation of :iconstrangejack:.

Many times on the course of Pricom, people -as Veteran1972 and many others- had suggested instead for Carmen to desert, and join the ranks of Pricom enemies... so finally decided to make such option! : D

Scene based in a pic I once saw in 9gag.




Many people had told you, anywhere but Pricom was a better option. So when you had one chance offered by that scary intruder, you took it, and defected, helping him -and the escaped prisoner- in the way out of the base.

It seems, Donny's agency -Donny was the name of the masked intruder- could always use new employees. Of course, not the highest rank of secret agents, highly trained security operatives. But what you could put as a sort of "cannon fodder", somewhat similar to what you already did in Pricom, but in a less demeaning uniform. 

Of course, this wasn't the perfect solution, as you had to bury you whole old life behind you -but better to bury your life, that being buried yourself!

And staying in Pricom wasn't really an option. Probably even without deserting, you could have been shot -Pricom shot people, right? You don't know for sure-, once they find out how inept you were. 

Here, you have better hours, good pay, holidays off, and of course, more clothing. A co-ed working environment!!

It was your chance at a new career -even since accepting this, you only were used as hostage and distraction by your coworkers only twice! TWICE!-


You still suck shooting, tought.

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Council-of-Magic's avatar
Council-of-Magic|Hobbyist General Artist
hey at least she has actual clothes now
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Shabazik's avatar
Hurrah!
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pokemorphOmega's avatar
Oh I weirdly like this, great to see Carmen - somewhat - getting a good life.

Used as hostage twice by her allies? How does that work? :o (Eek) 
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StrangeJack's avatar
Good for Carmen! Maybe someday she'll be the one infiltrating Pricom bases. Not sure if this was intentional, but I like how she's still wearing her old choker as a sort of souvenir.

I almost can't imagine them bringing Seline along though :D 
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RemnantComic|Hobbyist Digital Artist
YEEAAAHHHH!!! CARMEN WINS 
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Hurrah!
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Combin72's avatar
May be that lack of shooting skills somehow connected with the fact that she do her previous job without any gun. Sooo Pricom can think that many shooting trainings are not nessesary and Carmen just haven't any experience it this at all. Thats logical, you dont need to train your cannon fodder, wasting ammo and gun resources if you doesn't give them guns anyway. But in this company Carmen have all that cool tactical stuff and two(!!!) guns, so i hope she had enough practice and time for training. Even if I can't longer stare at her almost naked body .-.
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Shabazik's avatar
^-^
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DBrentOGara|Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is probably the best end Carmen could realistically hope for! :heart:
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Shabazik's avatar
XD
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MilitaryStructure's avatar
MilitaryStructure|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Probably Fuze would OwO this Grill :D (Big Grin) 
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Shabazik's avatar
OwO
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Cenaya's avatar
Nice shot!
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Jasonawesome367's avatar
Does Selina tag along with Carmen?
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Shabazik's avatar
Yes, but didn't made it explicit here, as other paths can lead to this ending (once properly linked)
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CaptZealot's avatar
I would have said she would be a good Stormtrooper...but she managed to hit someone.....well the guy she shouldn't hit XD
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XD
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Niribur|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Probably one of the best ends.
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Shabazik's avatar
XD thanks!
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thormemeson|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well at least they won't need to a hostage negotiator.
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v_v
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Ropeman1's avatar
Ha!  Priceless!  :D
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Thanks!
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macmanussite|Hobbyist Artist
she's a terrible shot or the fact that she needs laser surgery on her eyes
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