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Carmen, Sentry of Pricom by Shabazik

Sentry of Pricom : Choose your Own Adventure
This is a Choose Your Adventure proyect, where you take the role of a Sentry of Pricom, a Henchwoman called Carmen Urrejola in what you expect to be a normal day in the base working for the shady corporation of Pricom. After reading each part of the story, you are going to make choices that determine the main character's actions and the plot's outcome. 

Pricom is a creation of :iconstrangejack:.

Many times on the course of Pricom, people -as Veteran1972 and many others- had suggested instead for Carmen to desert, and join the ranks of Pricom enemies... so finally decided to make such option! : D

Scene based in a pic I once saw in 9gag.




Many people had told you, anywhere but Pricom was a better option. So when you had one chance offered by that scary intruder, you took it, and defected, helping him -and the escaped prisoner- in the way out of the base.

It seems, Donny's agency -Donny was the name of the masked intruder- could always use new employees. Of course, not the highest rank of secret agents, highly trained security operatives. But what you could put as a sort of "cannon fodder", somewhat similar to what you already did in Pricom, but in a less demeaning uniform. 

Of course, this wasn't the perfect solution, as you had to bury you whole old life behind you -but better to bury your life, that being buried yourself!

And staying in Pricom wasn't really an option. Probably even without deserting, you could have been shot -Pricom shot people, right? You don't know for sure-, once they find out how inept you were. 

Here, you have better hours, good pay, holidays off, and of course, more clothing. A co-ed working environment!!

It was your chance at a new career -even since accepting this, you only were used as hostage and distraction by your coworkers only twice! TWICE!-


You still suck shooting, tought.

The End
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pokemorphOmega Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2018  Student Writer
Oh I weirdly like this, great to see Carmen - somewhat - getting a good life.

Used as hostage twice by her allies? How does that work? :o (Eek) 
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StrangeJack Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2018
Good for Carmen! Maybe someday she'll be the one infiltrating Pricom bases. Not sure if this was intentional, but I like how she's still wearing her old choker as a sort of souvenir.

I almost can't imagine them bringing Seline along though :D 
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RemnantComic Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YEEAAAHHHH!!! CARMEN WINS 
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2018  Hobbyist
Hurrah!
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Combin72 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2018
May be that lack of shooting skills somehow connected with the fact that she do her previous job without any gun. Sooo Pricom can think that many shooting trainings are not nessesary and Carmen just haven't any experience it this at all. Thats logical, you dont need to train your cannon fodder, wasting ammo and gun resources if you doesn't give them guns anyway. But in this company Carmen have all that cool tactical stuff and two(!!!) guns, so i hope she had enough practice and time for training. Even if I can't longer stare at her almost naked body .-.
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2018  Hobbyist
^-^
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DBrentOGara Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is probably the best end Carmen could realistically hope for! :heart:
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2018  Hobbyist
XD
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MilitaryStructure Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Probably Fuze would OwO this Grill :D (Big Grin) 
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2018  Hobbyist
OwO
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Cenaya Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2018
Nice shot!
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Jasonawesome367 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2018
Does Selina tag along with Carmen?
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2018  Hobbyist
Yes, but didn't made it explicit here, as other paths can lead to this ending (once properly linked)
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CaptZealot Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2018
I would have said she would be a good Stormtrooper...but she managed to hit someone.....well the guy she shouldn't hit XD
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2018  Hobbyist
XD
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Niribur Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Probably one of the best ends.
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
XD thanks!
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thormemeson Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well at least they won't need to a hostage negotiator.
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
v_v
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Ropeman1 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018
Ha!  Priceless!  :D
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
Thanks!
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macmanussite Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
she's a terrible shot or the fact that she needs laser surgery on her eyes
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
In others of the possible endings, we see Carmen with glasses. So maybe it's the case XD
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macmanussite Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
your probably right lol.
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aniviod2904 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018
seguro darth vader ve a carmen y le pone de una vez una armadura de stormtrooper
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
y ella encantada!
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RazorWest Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018
Nice
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
gracias!
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Melvlo Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Han, treachery!
Carmen working for the enemy. Unthinkable!
Will she infiltrate other organizations, just like Agent Donny?
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
UNTHINKABLE!

Somehow I doubt she will be qualified for that work v__v
At least, not before extensive training!
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Melvlo Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Her needs a little training in the field!
This is the best way to learn the trade. XD
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Kiborg-Graph Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, with those shooting skills I think she'd be better off delivering tactical coffee for the office employees. :stare:
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
Oh, I'm sure they will reach soon similar conclusions! XD
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C05M0NAUT Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Way too adorable, dude! The tactical gear really suits her!
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
Thanks!
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Veteran1972 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018
That’s what I call a happy ending.
Yes......she sucks as a shooter but is a valuable distraction.😁
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
XD
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bunny75 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018
My favourite ending. :heart:
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
Thanks!
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Estragon55 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Holy moly is that a good ending? The clothes really suit her!
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
XD thanks!
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:iconkanyiko:
kanyiko Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She, erm...

...

... yeah, the hostage's dead. x_x
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
... yeah, better to keep her away from hostages. And guns.

XD
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kanyiko Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Perhaps best to keep her in a nice, padded box, where she can't hurt herself or others. >.>
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AdonCa Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018
PRICOM shot people... and occasionally it was even the ones they were aiming at!
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kanyiko Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
More than often though, they manage to only hit themselves... x_x
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noemXXX Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: 
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Shabazik Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2018  Hobbyist
Thanks!
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