Mayumi vs Rien Page 8 Reworked

"Mayumi vs. Rien: Page 8"
Medium: Ink, CG
August 2008

This is an updated version of the original submitted after the contest deadline, in which I attempt to clean up some of the shading, and add speed lines and effects. The original version is here: [link]

As I said on the last page, as the deadline was looming, I needed to finish shading the last three pages still. Unfortunately I got sick as a dog. I attempted to shade the last page and this one while running a fever and on drugs, but the results were craptastic. So I just went ahead and posted up the craptastic results and didn't even TRY to shade the final page. I figure I'll get around to them in a bit, just for completeness sake.

ANYWAY... Rien is cute. Even outright adorable. And for some reason, when cute is a major descriptor of a young girl (she's 15, as I recall) that automatically gets paired up with "clumsy." One pile of rolly arrows, and down she goes... Poor cutegirl Rien...

Don't worry, Rien! Mayumi won't skewer you!

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Page 8: You Are Here. Original submitted version: [link]
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