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05c9a241-dd80-4999-ba51-b4dc2d21ac28 by SFC78767

This is a story about two girls and a guy as the title says,

We have Sarah, the blonde girlfriend of Bernie, and Amanda.

Bernie was a great guy, maybe too nice if you know what I mean he was easily manipulated, he had dated Sarah for three years, she thought the next step for them would be an engagement then marriage then maybe even children, she thought she had her whole life planned out until one night Bernie came to her door crying,

“Whats wrong sweetheart” asked Sarah

“Im so sorry, we cant go on seeing each other, I've fallen in love with another girl.”

Sarah was broken hearted, now she started crying, but she knew there was no going back, Bernie had made his mind up, Sarah was out and Amanda was in.

Sarah started to move her things from his apartment, and into her parents condo, it started innocently, with Sarah asking Bernie if she could store some things at Bernie’s place since there wasnt enough room at her parents, Bernie felt bad about breaking up with Sarah, so being the nice guy he was he told her “Yes of course, no problem.”

Thats when it all started going wrong for Bernie.

Sarah brought over a huge case with her summer things in it, you know mini skirts, hot pants, tank tops, heels, sexy underwear and her collection of wigs, she wouldnt be wearing them again until next summer.

Bernie realised Amanda wouldnt like it if she knew he was still in contact with Sarah so he hid the case in a storeroom, he locked the door and forgot all about it, Two months later Amanda moved in and wanted access to the storeroom.

Bernie was stumped, he had forgotten Sarah’s case was still in there, and when he opened the door he showed Amanda that the storeroom was so full there was no way she was going to be able to put her things in there, Amanda could see for herself that the storeroom was full so she accepted the fact that she would have to take some of her things to her parents house, but before she did that she noticed that Bernie had left the key to the storeroom when he went to work, “Maybe I can make some room in there if I move somethings around” she thought”

She opened the door and moved everything out of the room, it was hopeless, when she removed everything out it looked as if there was even less room, she looked at all the things in the living room, to see if there was anything that could be got rid of, to make room for her things, she saw the case, Sarah’s case, and wondered that if there were things in there that could be moved into smaller boxes maybe then she would have the room she needed, she opened the case, her face turned to shock, in the case she saw womens shoes, underwear, skirts, all womens clothes, omg she thought, Ive heard of men like this, dressing like women, I cant believe it.

When Bernie came home he couldnt believe what he was seeing his living room was full of the things from the storeroom, he looked at Amanda, she didnt look happy, “Whats going on” he asked, “Why is the storeroom empty and my living room full?”

Amanda stayed calm, she looked Bernie in the eye and asked him,

”Is there anything you would like to tell me before we continue?

Bernie was confused, What could she possibly mean, “No” he said “There is nothing I would like to tell you, Now whats this all about?

“OK you had your chance,” said Amanda, “Come to the bedroom”

As Bernie turned the corner to his bedroom, all he could see spread out on the bed was all of Sarahs clothes, “Would you like to “TRY” and explain this?”

Bernie froze, she was right, how was he going to explain a case full of womens clothes, he was about to take a shot at it when Amanda stopped him dead, listen she said Ive heard of men like you who dress up like women
What will Bernie do, admit hes still seeing Sarah? He knew it would be over between him and Amanda if he did.
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Neat start.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2017
Thanks again
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Always a pleasure.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Edited Nov 18, 2017
he should tell her one of two things the stuff belongs to sara or the stuff is his i know what i would say
 is there going to be a part 2
it will be interesting to see what he says
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2017
I think you will like it Charlee.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2017
i am sure i will i have liked every thing else you know what i like to happen you seem to understand me
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2017
Thats nice of you to say, sis.
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TheWriter32123 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
will there be a sequel?
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2017
Yes there will, which part did you like the most?
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TheWriter32123 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
all of it but i wished there would've been him dressing as a girl in it. still you set the stage for the sequel nicely
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2017
Yeah looks like hes in deep doesnt it.
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TheWriter32123 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
yup
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crayle2 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2017
Intriguing start!
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2017
Thats very kind of you I hope I don’t disappoint you.
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