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"Lift your arms up Scott while I fasten your bra" Said Kelly, my sister,

"This is so crazy Kelly how long do I have to do this" I asked

"This is not my fault, why did you put your phone in the pocket of my skirt in the first place?"

"Just look at me sis, we have been here all day, and you keep going back to my phone, don't you think I have more to worry about, mom brought us down here to get a "Complete" make over, I have false eyelashes, my eyebrows have been plucked, my nails and lips are now bright red and my face looks like I'm auditioning for a movie called "Barbie's Sister" and now I'm standing here in the most girlie outfit I have ever seen, your strapping me into a bra, could this day get any worse?"

"Look I'm sorry, but you can see how happy mom is, I haven't seen her this happy since before dad died, this won't kill you, suck in a little, I can't fasten it" I couldn't help but smile, It wasn't just mom that was having a great time, I was having so much fun, playing dress up with my brother. In my eyes this day was getting better not worse, ha ha.

I helped him with the dress coat and added the extentions to his hair, and placed the hat on his head with a beautiful rose on the side, next a pearl necklace and matching bracelet, as he turned to look at himself in the mirror he held the edges of his dress and said, "You have got to be kidding me if you think I'm gong out there like this" I've had enough, I let you dress me up, I've won the game, now get me out of here."

"You look amazing sis", I snuck that one in, he was too busy staring at himself to notice the zinger, I was about to get him changed back into my black skirt and white sweater, when Mom came in and started to cry, Oh my gosh, She said, I can't believe it, you look so pretty, I'm so glad I booked us a table at ******* As she was saying this she was going around the room picking up all the clothes Scott was wearing to come to the store, again he was stuck,

"Let me buy you that outfit sweetie , you have made me so happy" Scott looked over at me and whispered, "there is no way I am going to that restaurant wearing this dress and heels" I whispered back, Im sorry to do this Scott, I turned to mom and said "Why don't you phone Scott to meet us there mom"

"Great idea honey now where did I put my phone" Scott looked at me with daggers and again whispered, "I'm going to kill you" 
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 "Wait a minute mom "Marie" wants to know if we can just make this a girlie day, no boys?"

Scott looked at me and mouthed, "Marie"...... "Really?"




Scott gets deeper and deeper, with no escape insight.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner May 16, 2018
When i read this story i always picture myself in his place
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner May 17, 2018
How does that make you feel?
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charlee718 Featured By Owner May 17, 2018
It makes me feel so happy
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2018
I don't care how many times you read this story it is so good and i love that dress
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2018
Glad you enjoyed it
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2018
I love the dress and i wouldn't mind having one like that
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018
So buy one?
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018
Trust me if i wasn't on disability i would
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2017
i still love this story
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2017
I will let you into a secret sis thats me, in the mirror.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2017
thank you for trusting me with that secret
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2017
Always sis.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2017
how come there is no part 4 to surprise
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2017
I think there could be a Pt 4
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2017
looks like fun he might as well go with the flow
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2017
You would say that, lol
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ChalkArtist1216 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sisters can be so-ooo-oo bad sometimes! :mwahaha:
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016
Yeah Where would we be without them, ha ha
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2017
i dont have a a real sister i have a friend that calls me her big sister but as for haveing a sister no i dont have one
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2017
We all need someone 
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Love it. Keep up the fun and great stuff.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2016
Thanks Sarah, I'm working on a story using your name again I hope you don't mind.
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
You are welcome, and it's fine.
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
okay, this is great.  Are you sure you aren't selling these? Your writing is dang fun to read.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
Lol, thanks, but who would buy them?
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2017
i bet a lot of people would
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2017
On here for sure
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
our demographic, but who own kindles.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
Hmmm cogs turning tell me more.
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
You could just sell short stories for a dollar or so (okay I have no idea what the pricing would be).  But if you check out crossdressing stories on like amazon.com, you'll see a ton of stuff like that.  But I'm not sure what the length usually is?
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2016
I don't think I'll be doing that anytime soon but it's nice that you are thinking of me. Hope you and Myriah are well, How is your crossdressing going?
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2016
Right now I'm finishing up a pair of foam hip pads! That's the newest. I haven't really dressed up in a long time, but probably soon to try these out.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2016
You know you can buy padded hips,


I'm just working on a story where by a girlfriend finds a picture of her boyfriend dressed as a girl for Halloween and wants to meet her.
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Jenniandrews Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
What a lovely happy story.  And the photo you found to go with it is perfect.  Well done.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
That's not to say it will end happily.
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Jenniandrews Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
oh my...well i will have to read further 
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JohnFromJersey Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
And I'm loving it!
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
I thought you might, lol.
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JohnFromJersey Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
Oh, very much
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