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045c94db-6868-48b8-a1a3-120585ed255b by SFC78767

Let me set the scene, Marie and her friends are having a girls only sleep over, Tim and his friend think it will neat to see what the girls are upto, lets put it this way it was never a good idea to hide in a closet across the landing near Marie’s room...

“Let me see its my turn”

“No wait! you had longer than me”

“Shes my sister”

“Thats just weird man,” as his friend tries to see over Tims shoulder they both tumble out to the floor.

”What the hell” says Marie,

Tims friend throws him under the bus and does a runner, as the girls start to tie Tim to a chair they ask him what hes doing spying on them “What a perv” says one of Maries friend.

I told her “I just wanted to see Sara you know I've always had a crush on her Marie”

“She not even here, shes gone to the drugstore to get some more supplies” said Marie

“What do you think shes going to say when she finds out you were spying on her?”

“You cant tell her Marie she will never go out with me if you do that”

“Just let me go I promise I wont says anything”

“Im sorry Tim but I cant let you get a way with this, even if I didnt say anything, one of my friends might tell her, then she would fall out with me”

As Marie was saying this she pushed her brother tied to the chair into her bedroom where all the other girls were, “So what are we going to do with him girls?” She asked, “Lets give him a make over” says one girl, “No lets dress him up like a baby girl”

“Please dont do that sis I’ll be so humiliated,” said Tim.

“Ok so make over it is then” all the girls start to giggle they didnt think they were going to have a model to try out all their new make up and hair extensions on.

“Please dont so this to me, I’ll get you all into the movies where I work free for a month” 

“What do you think girls a free month of movies or a free makeover for my brother?”

They all chanted en masses “Free makeover, Free makeover, Free makeover”

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“If it makes you feel any better Tim I think you look pretty good” my sister told me.

By the time they had finished with me Sara my crush, had returned with more soda and chips, “Who is this? she asked, all the other girls left the three of us to explain who the new “Girl” was, “Erm” my sister started “Shes an exchange student from France, Tim has gone to live in France and Tina has come here”

“Hi Tina welcome to America” said Sara, I was glad that Marie hadnt told her who I was but now I have to pretend to be a girl from France???

All the other girls started giggling again, knowing I was stuck as a girl at least for tonight, I didnt think my night could get any worse but it seeemed like Sara took a shine to her newest friend “Tina” she talked to Tim for most of the night, he had to pretend he had a sore throat and Marie told Sara that I couldn't speak much English but I could understand most of it, I couldnt wait till they all fell asleep and I could sneak off, then disaster struck, Mom came home early.

She shouted upstairs, “Keep the noise down girls,”

As she started to climb the stairs Marie went out to meet her before she got to Maries bedroom, I was so grateful, Mom came in after talking to Marie for 5 minutes,

“Are you having a nice time girls” she asked, I tried to keep my head down but it wouldnt have done any good, Marie had told her everything,

“Are you having a nice time at your first sleepover Tina?”

I was trapped, I just nodded.

“Listen, how would you girls like to go to my salon tomorrow we can really go to town on you all then, my treat, would you like that Tina?”

I couldnt believe it my mom was enjoying this.

“And I have the perfect dress for Tina” said Marie

As I stood overlooking the city I vowed I would never let myself get into a situation like this ever again, just then I turned when I heard my new name being called it was Jeff my best friend that did a runner and left me at the mercy of those girl

“Hi Tina you look great.”

E42d3b1e-ec15-4aa1-8555-a663a8626f32 by SFC78767






Tina and Jeff sitting in a tree k.i.s.s.i.n.g

Thanks to my very dear friend ZepherStranded for this brilliant idea, and many more to come.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner May 14, 2018
He makes a very pretty girl i would love to trade places with him so i could dress up like a girl and go to the salon
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner May 14, 2018
True
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
I love the story and i love what they did to him and i wish that it was me instead of of Tim /tina
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2018
Nice name Tina I have never used it before
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2018
Nice choice
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2018
Thanks
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jeanettentutu Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
Cute story
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
Thanks Jean I appreciate the feedback
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SubTommy6 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018  Student Writer
She makes a cute girl....  Me next??
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
You mean “He” makes a nice girl?
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SubTommy6 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018  Student Writer
Yes, I do
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
Typo ha ha
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018
This is awesome! I love it :)
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
Your idea man, sorry “Miss”
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
hahah man, please.  
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
You never know these days, wouldnt want to offend anyone, lol.
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
I know, right?  The other day I got called, "them" by someone talking about me in to a group (not in real life, thankfully, in a chatroom).  It actually was really annoying.  If people are allowed to specify how they want to be referred to, then I'd like to be referred to as a "he" since I chose "male" on my profile.  I think my photo throws people off though.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
No kidding your profile picture throws people off, you gorgeous girl.
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
*blush* you stop it
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
You stop it ha ha
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