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"Please dont do this begged Kevin, I didn't mean it when I said girls have it easier"

"Sorry sweetheart but I think you need teaching a lesson," said his mom

Marie just smiled...

"I wont do it" Said Kevin "You cant make me"

"If you mean physically, your wrong and if you mean emotionally your twice as wrong, You have been using your ability to make people do things for you for as long as I can remember, plus the fact Marie has been taking selfies of you since she saw you wearing her clothes, now would you like to see Alan's reaction when he finds out what you did to him, tricking him into putting that bookcase together?

Marie held up her phone with her figure poised over the send button.

"Ok, Ok" he said, "What do I have to do?"

"Thats the best part honey, YOU dont have to do anything, she said
"Everyone else will do it for you, just the way you like it right?"

Kevin couldnt miss the irony in her answer

They arrived at the salon and all got out of the car, his mother led the way to the door and like two ducklings they followed her in, "Just sit there Sara," Kevin didnt move for a minute, until he realized she was talking to him, "Hi Cath" she said to the girl on the desk, I phoned ahead for an appointment for a full makeover.

Kevin even at this late stage still considered making a run for it, but it was no use, he was going to have to suck it up and get this madness over with as soon as possible.

"This is Sara, shes from France, shes an exchange student," she explained to Cath,

"Shes staying with us while Kevin is away,"

"AWAY?" asked Cath,

"Yes, Marie and I came home from shopping in town, and Kevin
was gone, and Sara just appeared from nowhere,"

 "That's strange" said Cath, "Oh you dont know the half of it Cath" said his mom.

"Anyway we're here to show Sara what its like to be a beautiful girl"

Pour la dernière fois, ne me faites pas cela.
(For the last time mom please don't do this to me)

"What did she say" asked Cath,

"She said she cant wait to get started," said his mom,
"I forgot to tell you she only speaks French."

"Full make over it is then" said Cath, "I love doing these
on young girls, she wont recognize herself."

"Thats what we're hoping for" said Marie.

"Shall we start with her eyebrows? It seems Sara's have gone a little astray"

"Which ones do you think?" Cath held up a board of different styles to choose from. 


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"I like the Glamorous thick, what say you Marie?"

"Hmm I was hoping for something more sexy but its upto you mom"

Kevin just sat there, knowing his fate if he said anything

"Ok so Glamorous thick it is, you can pick her hair color Marie."

Marie skipped over to the hair extentions section, "Can we get some of these too?"
She held up a set of extentions for her mom to see.

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"Those are half price this week Marie," said Cath.

Now it was Marie who was begging. "Please, Please, Please.

"Ok Ok" said her mom while Marie started to chuckle. 

By this time Kevin was shaking.

"Ok just her lip color now, I think Pink would be suitable for her age," said Cath

"Ok Cath, now Marie and I are going to pick out a pretty dress for Sara,
can you try and finish everything before we get back?"

Kevin stared at his mom one more time out of pity this time.

When they returned Cath was indeed finished and said, she was so good they never heard a word from her all afternoon."

"I did her eye makeup too I hope I didn't overstep the mark." Said Cath

"Im sure it's beautiful Cath thanks, just add it to the bill."

"May I present, Miss Sara from France"

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Here is a before and after picture of Kevin and now Sara.

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charlee718 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2018
Again i would love to trade places with him
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2018
Wish I had magic wand
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2018
I love what they did to him and wish that i could have a makeover so i could be a girl all summer
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2018
Just for the summer?
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2018
For Ever
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2018
And ever?
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2018
Wish I could look like that if i looked like that i would stay a girl for as long as i could
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2017
Wish I was in his place
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2017
I know sweetie
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Delightful part. Guess by now part 4 is up, but what would change if he/she grows to like the new look and want to adapt/and adopt it full time?
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2017
Yeah If I have my way (and I do cos Im writing it) he wont enjoy any of it, lol.
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Well said and good point.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2017
looks like kevin is gone untill his mom says differint i think they should have used make up that never comes off then kevin would realy be gone plus he makes a pretty gril wish i did
i loved the story waiting for part 4
in pt 4 i think kevin should find out the make up never comes off but you are the wrighter
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2017
I see where your going Charlee, but Kevin's mom is trying to teach him a lesson not turn him into a girl for good.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2017
it makes sense
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2017
Seems to me Kevin is indeed gone...
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2017
We'll see. Nice to hear from you again, hope you are well.
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2017
Doing okay... Hope you are as well :-)
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2017
Yeah I guess so, ive settled in for the life thats been dealt to me, I havent heard from Michelle or Alison since we last "Spoke", I hope shes happy.

Glad to hear your well.
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2017
I haven't heard back from Michelle either, hope she's okay...
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2017
We are leaving today, moving to our Condo in NYC for a while, till the worst blows over, I hope shes ok too
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2017
Ouch, that storm is coming your way there... Hope she's safe indeed.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2017
I will pray for her and let you know if I hear anything, please let me know if she gets in touch with you.
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shoujodana Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2017
Oh my....  Truly a dream come true...  For me anyway.  I LOVE it!
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2017
I knew you would ha ha
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whople Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2017
Me too
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2017
Sounds like most would.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2017
me too
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2017
Charlee is that you jumping on the bandwagon, lol.
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whople Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2017
Uggghhh Sara is absolutely gorgeous. ;) 
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2017
"She" is pretty no doubt.
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FurryKig Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2017
Great story!  Who's the before and after picture of irl?
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2017
Found the picture on Google, but the answer is I dont know.
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jeanettentutu Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2017
Nice story
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2017
Thanks, your too kind.
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