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A family feud has kept the parents from telling the grandparents that they actually had a son, not a daughter. The son's name is Kelly, which is traditionally a male name, but nowadays is commonly a girl's name.  The protagonist, Kelly, is shocked to learn that when the grandparents are coming to visit for the summer, his parents are willing to go all the way to keep this secret that they really had a daughter, just because the grandparents are rich and his mom and dad dont want to miss out on their inheritance. Is his social life ruined, or just turned upside down in the best way,

Lets be a fly on the wall of “Kelly’s” life for a while.

“I cant believe what your asking me to do” said Kelly

“Its not just you Kell, we will have to change your room and clothes” said his mother”

“Please don't call me Kell, you know I hate it,”

“Im sorry dear but Kell sounds more feminine”

“Ok Tim” said Kelly’s mother, “You will have to get started on Kelly’s room while we go shopping for some new clothes for our daughter.”

Tim went all out on his sons room, he had his eye on a sail boat
when he inherited their money.

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When Tina and Kelly had got back from the mall, Tina told Kelly to go to her room and start hanging up her new clothes, Tim had finished his/her room just in time.



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His mom laid out all the new clothes Kelly was expected to wear

“OMG it looks like a girl bomb went off in my room” said Kelly.

“We cant take any chances honey, we only get one chance to make a first impression”

 “Oh its perfect” said his mom, “Just as I imagined it would be, great job honey.”

As his parents went down stairs, Kelly looked around his new room,
I hope this is going to be worth it, he thought.

Even though it was still a week before his grandparents arrived his mom wanted Kelly to be totally in character before they came, She took Kelly to her salon to get his nails done and hair extentions added to his ready blonde hair, and she brought a very pretty dress for Kelly to wear on his way home.

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“Really?” said Kelly, “You expect me to wear this in the street? What if I see someone I know,” he asked. “You seriously think someone will recognize you?” asked Tina.

He had to admit there was no chance anyone would think he was Kelly the boy.

“Tina held Kellys hand as they walked back from the salon, “I’m really sorry you had to do this but Im enjoying having a daughter for a short while,” as she smiled at him.

Aside from all the dressing up Kelly loved his mom and how bad could it get?
 A couple of weeks of dressing as a girl then the family will be set for life.

One week later his grandparents arrived, he hugged his grandma and kissed his grandpa on the cheek, “Hi guys” he said “Its great to see you after all these years”

“Oh my haven't you grown,” said his grandma, “Last time we saw you, you were wearing a little pink ballerina dress, you were only three then though.”

Kelly shot a look at his mother, just how long had they pretended to have a daughter? a pink ballerina dress? he had no recollection, and why would he, he was only three, but it did make him wonder why he was so good at walking in high heels.

Two weeks went by quickly and it went really well, Kelly learned a few more things about his childhood, which he wasnt happy about, but it was time for his grandparents to go home wherever home was for them.

“Before we go” said his grandpa, “We have a surprise for Kelly, “What is it grandpa? he asked. “We arent really going home because we have sold up and are taking a round the world cruise and we want to take Kelly with us, we feel it will be a great lesson for her, and she wont be alone, we have asked her cousin to meet us at the dock, Kelly almost fainted, A round the world cruise? As a girl? 

But Kelly’s grandparents were not going to take no for an answer, Tim and Tina fell silent not wanting to rock the boat on their inheritance.

As Kelly and her grandparents got to the dock, she could see her cousin waiting for them, OMG its a boy, she thought, Im going around the world with a boy. 

“Hold his hands while I take your picture Kelly,”  said his Grandpa

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She turned to her husband and said

“Dont they make a lovely couple honey?’’

And he said “I still think you should have told them they weren’t cousins”

“Maybe I’ll save that for the wedding.”
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Good one.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2018
Thanks
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
You're welcome!
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charlee718 Featured By Owner May 11, 2018
I love this story for a second time i love what they did to his room and i love all of the clothes and shoes that was bought i would love to trade places with him and be a girl
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner May 12, 2018
Hes not so keen as you though.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner May 12, 2018
I know that is what makes the story so good
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner May 13, 2018
Glad you like it
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2018
Haha! Maybe not a happy ending, or is it? I like it!
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2018
Now I know Im writing it all wrong if you agree, lol.
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2018
Hehe. I didn't know I was a tough crowd...
I have faved many of your stories without happy endings ;-)
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2018
Thanks sweetie, I know your a good follower, Hmm maybe theres a story in there somewhere.
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2018
Oh oh.. should I get worried now? 🤔
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2018
Most definitely.....
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2018
I love this story and can't wait to see part 2
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2018
No part two sis sorry
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