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K8dzya-l by SFC78767

Brad and Jan were getting ready for their dinner date with Tom and Roger,

Jan - "You really do look amazing Brad, I can't tell you how much this means to me, and to be honest, I don't think I ever looked that good myself, and those shoes go perfect with that dress, we have to give you a name though"
 
Brad - "I've always liked the name "Marie" will that be ok? and can you please take it easy with the compliments Jan, this is only my second time dressed as a girl, and Im a little bit nervous going out for a dinner date, what if Tom tries anything"

(Now that Brad is dressed as Marie I'm going to call him Marie not Brad just to keep it clear)

Jan - "Well hes going to get a big shock isnt he Marie, lol, seriously I will keep my eye on you, if you do anything that doesnt look right I'll wink at you ok?"

Roger and Tom reached the hotel door where the "Girls" are staying,

Roger - "Ok so you know what the plan is Tom"

Tom - "Listen Roger I'm not happy with this plan of yours, Its not right to treat girls like this, you know I can lose my veterinarian licence for giving you that muscle relaxant"

Roger - "Look Tom, I'm getting some tonight, all you have to do is follow my lead, we need to separate the girls, if you dont do what I say then you know what will happen don't you.'

Tom - "Yes you've told me before, you'll tell everyone I like to dress like a girl"

Roger - "You almost had me fooled when I caught you dressing in your sisters clothes" He grabbed Tom by the collar and held his fist to his face, "Don't mess this up."

Roger knocked on the door, and walked in, "You girls ready yet" he shouted,

Jan - "Almost Roger, but could you please wait outside" she turned to Marie who gave her a look of disgust.

Marie - "Who walks into a girls room without waiting to be invited in?"

Jan just shook her head, Roger had booked a fancy restaurant for the four of them, Tom held the door for the girls as Roger barged by, he sat down as Tom pulled Maries chair for her to sit, Roger did no such thing,

Roger said, "Ok dinners finished, what now? You dont look very well Jan maybe we should go back to the hotel so you can rest," Jan did feel a little groggy, Marie suggested they should all go back to the hotel and call it a night, Roger stared at Tom, 

Tom - "Thats a shame Marie, I was going to take you to a very special place,"

Roger - "Why dont you take Marie, Tom, and I'll take Jan back to the hotel, don't worry shes in good hands"

Jan was in no state to argue, Roger had slipped the muscle relaxant into her drink about an hour ago, Marie was very hesitant about letting Roger take her home, but with Roger already getting into his car, he had no way of getting home withhout Tom's help, but he was nervous about being alone with Tom.

As the two of them walked along the seashore Marie was happy to have an excuse to take the heels off, but even in mid thought he was taken aback by what Tom said

Tom - "Do you think Jan will be Ok with Roger"

Marie - "Thats an unusual thing to say, how long have you known Roger?"

Tom went very quiet, Marie knew something wasnt quite right, "Whats going on Tom, what aren't you telling me?"

Tom - "I cant say anything Brad will kill me"

Marie - "Well you better tell me everything, or Im going to the police"

Tom told Marie everything, all about Roger catching him wearing his sisters clothes, the muscle relaxant, the plan to separate them both and how Roger was going to have sex with Jan.

Marie - "Do you have any more of that muscle relaxant?" and do you have any of your sisters clothes at your house?"

Tom - "Yes I have two more vials, but I don't have any of my sisters clothes, I make all my own clothes now

Marie - "Ok then, lets go back to the hotel, I will get Jan into bed, you will get Roger to drink the muscle thingy and then back to your place"

Within 30 minutes, Roger, Tom, and Marie were back at Toms house, Roger was like a scarecow, all limp, he was easy enough to carry between the two of them,

Tom - "What now Marie?"

Marie - "I want you to get your girliest dress, stockings and anything else you can think of that will fit Roger"

Tom - "I have the perfect thing!

Marie started to undress Roger, Tom liked the idea of Roger being dressed as a girl, he was going to make the most of this.

Marie - "OMG Tom where did you get all this from?"

Tom - "Its just something I dreamt of wearing one day, is it too much? lol."

Marie - ''No its perfect, Ok you put the dress on him while I put these stockings and the gloves on him, then we can glue this wig on his head, maybe even pigtails and ribbons ha ha, now we need to make his face up, how long will the muscle thingy last?

Tom - "Well I gave him only a quater of a vial, so about two days, but if I give him the rest he wont be able to move on his own for a week, but he will still be aware of whats happening"

When they had finished, Roger looked like a beautiful, if not completely over the top girl, Tom and Marie did an amazing job with the make up, and they took pictures as they went, "What now'' said Tom?

Marie - "Sit him on this stool while I glue his lips together"

Tom - What if we put his finger to his mouth, he will look so cute" 

Marie - "Lets get him in the car I know the perfect place for him, and bring the stool"

77a599f5ff6c08bd29378c599fa60d30 by SFC78767

Ten minutes later they had him set up in front of the Comic-Con arena where everyone would see him when they went in and he would see them, Marie made up a sign that said "Have your picture taken with me."

The next day was opening day for Comic-Con, everyone was stopping to look at the pretty cosplay doll at the entrance and having their pictures taken with "Her," by 6 O'clock the place was packed, Comic-con was so popular they had a crew from the local T.V. station.

Reporter - "Im here outside the comic-con arena, the crowds are amazing and you can see why, even outside we have a mannequin dressed to make the day so much better for everyone attending," with that the camera panned over to where Roger was sat on his stool, "Look at the detail" said the reporter as the camera zoomed in on rogers face.

By the end of the day, security came and pushed the stool with Roger still sat on it, inside the door, no one knew where the "Mannequin" had come from, but the convention people were very happy with the response it had cause, they decided to put it  out front again the next day and everyday till the end of the convention.

Tom never needed to worry about Roger bulling him or the threat of outing him ever again.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2017
love the story nice twest tom got even with roger with marys help
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017
Yes he did
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I could never be bored your work. Sorry, Like my latest journal said I was away from D. A. awhile and only now am I getting caught up with your stuff. :hug:
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015
Hmm this has taken for ever to answer all your comments, please don't fall behind again ha ha
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
:giggle: I can not make any promises on that. Sorry, but keep up the good work.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2015
Thats ok I was just joking
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Alright. No worries. :D
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CaptainHook13 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015
Nice part 2
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2015
Thanks
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015
Thanks for the comment Mega, It seems like im getting less and less comments, I wonder if people are getting bored with my work?
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2017
that will never happen
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017
Aww thanks Charlee.
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Jaybird196 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015
Well, I can only speak for myself, but I'm not bored with it :) . I've just been drunk, and relaxing, for the last two days (B-day party stuff). 

I THOUGHT Roger sounded like an ass. Now, I know it. I hope Jan found out about him, and his ways, in the end. What a creep!
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2015
Happy days, Roger is an ass but he got what he deserved, that picture was perfect.
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Jaybird196 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2015
:) 

So, did Jan find out about him? I'd hate for him to try to make another bid to get in her pants.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2015
He'll never get into any girls pants while those picyures of him dressed as he was on on Facebook.

Jan knows, she watched the 9 O'Clock news.
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Jaybird196 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2015
Well, good (on both counts)! 
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2015
I knew you'd like that.
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Jaybird196 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2015
^_^
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MegamanMaster64 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice job
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