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It was a lazy summers day in the Thompson family home, Mom, Mandy, and Peter, lived a modest life, Tom, the father left them pretty much set for life when he died in a car accident 3 years ago, Mom still worked, she said she enjoyed her time working at the real estate office, she liked the people she worked with and it was only part time after all.

Mandy the eldest was training to be a hairdresser, her teachers said she could go all the way to the finals if she set her heart on practicing different styles, Peter was the youngest of the clan, he was just finishing school this summer, which was only a few days away, he wasn't very popular but had a core of friends he could rely on, mostly Mike his best buddy.

Peter sat on the couch watching his favorite movie, Jason Bourne, he loved the action and the fighting, "I'm going out for the day, please don't annoy your sister, Peter" his mom pleaded before she left, and here's $30 get you hair cut before the summer break from school" Peter took the money without even looking up to see his mom leave,

"Finally" he said "I can play my "Call of Duty" game, his mom didn't like the game, said it was too violent for a 16 year old.

Mandy came down stairs, his 18 year old sister, "Has mom left already'' she asked,

"Would I be playing "call of Duty" if she were still here stupid"

They got on most of the time, like most brothers and sisters, "Wanna a drink?"  She asked.

"Yeah pass me a beer why don't ya" He sarcastically answered, knowing there wasn't a chance in hell she would let him drink one.

The day went back and forward with the barbs coming out fairly even on both sides,

Peter got up to go get changed, he was heading into town to get the haircut his mom asked him to get, "Where are you going? Asked Mandy.

"Not that it's any of your business but mom gave me $30 to get my hair cut"

"$30 eh! I could help you keep that for yourself if you let me cut your hair for you,"

Mandy was in college learning hairdressing, she was due to have her final exams in 2 months, she already had quite the clientele and made some money for herself on the side.

"No chance" he said, "I'm not letting you near my hair with scissors."

"Look if you don't like it I will give you a buzz cut and you will still be up $30, what do you have to lose?" Countered Mandy.

This was a no brainer to Peter he had let his hair get too long, mostly just to bug his sister who always wanted to "Practice" her hair cutting skills, but it was coming round to summer and a buzz cut sounded great, but he wondered how far he could push his older sister,

"Give me another $30 and it's a deal"

$60, Hmmm that was about the same money that they wanted for the new "Call of Duty 2" he thought.

"I'll give you $20, my exams are coming up and I need a model to practice a hairstyle for my finals, so let me practice this style on you, I think your hair is long enough, then I will give you a buzz cut and no one will be the wiser."

Mandy showed him the picture, it was a hairstyle for a bride, Peter almost fell out of his chair, "There's no way sis, that's a girls style, can't you get one of your friends to practice on?" Mandy answered, "Look there's no one here, mom has gone for the day right, so when I finish, I can give you the buzz cut you want, you will be $50 better off and everyone's happy, I really just need the practice"

"No way, the deals off" he answered, "Ok, Ok I'll give you the extra $30 you need for your stupid game, but I don't want any complaining, ok?" Said his sister.

Peter sat on the couch knowing how much he wanted to get that game before his best friend Mike got it, Mike always got the newest games first, just once he'd like to beat him to the draw, "Ok said Peter, but no pictures." He ran over to the front door and checked it was locked. "Ok" said Mandy, "Now go upstairs and shave that fluff you call a beard off your face." He was reluctant to do this but he just kept saying his mantra "Call of Duty"..."Call of Duty."

Mandy brought her salon chair which she had bought along with all the equipment she had managed to buy with her hairstyling on the side, Peter placed the chair in the kitchen, so it would be easy to clean up the hair after his buzz cut, all he could think about was Mikes face when he told him he already had "Call of Duty 2". "Go and take your shirt off so I don't get any of my lotions or creams on it," she told her brother, Peter came down in some old swim trunks, "Is this ok" he asked, "Perfect" she said,he sat in the salon chair and Mandy placed the cape around his neck, he was super glad it wasn't a stupid girls pink cape.

His sister set out all the things she thought she would need to complete the transformation of her brothers hair into a mass of curls, bows, and tiny flowers, just like the picture she had shown him, she made sure no mirrors were in sight of his face as he took on the hairstyle of a woman, she didn't want him backing out halfway through, she washed his hair and as she started to put the conditioner on his hair, he noticed an aroma of flowers, "What's that smell" he asked, "It's just the smell of the conditioner, don't worry it will be gone after I buzz your hair," she said.

The first thing she did was brush his hair straight, she was right about the length, it sat just around his shoulders, quite long for a boy but perfect for the style she was looking for, she brushed it flat then began drying his hair a little before she began with the rollers, she sprayed his hair with setting lotion, she barely had two rollers in his hair when he said "Hurry up before mom gets back I don't want her to think I've gone all weird." Every roller was like a knife into his manhood, they felt tight, even the small ones, she had them all on the back of his head, and large ones at the front.

"You can stop that complaining right now, this is going to take a couple of hours, mom won't be back anytime soon, and if I'm paying you $30 to be my model then you will be quiet, do you understand? Or we can stop right now and you can get dressed and go into town to get you haircut, no game for you then though."

"Alright Alright," he said "Keep your hair on, do you get it" and he laughed thinking how funny he had been, his sister had heard so many hair jokes she didn't even crack a smile, after she had finished with the last of the rollers, she pulled over a portable hairdryer, plugged it in and put a plastic hat over his head and rollers, it was one of the old fashioned dryers, but it was the best she could afford, he started to complain but soon stopped when he saw how serious Mandy's face was.

The dryer ran for about 30 minutes, Mandy used the time to get all the flowers, beads, small diamond shaped jewellery and small pink roses to finish off this particular style, she was pretty sure this was going to be the style she would use in her finals, so it was very important to get everything just right, she removed the old hairdryer and started to remove the rollers, first the big ones at the front, then the smaller ones at the back, he wanted to run his fingers through his hair but knew better than to do that.

Mandy started by pulling his hair into a high pony tail, then she put three elastic bands to hold it in place, these were tight also, but he dare not saying anything since he didn't want her to pull out of the deal now, not after the rollers and the dryer, each curl was held in place by a hair grip one by one he grimaced as his hair was building higher and wider with each curl clipped into place, Mandy reached for the first pink flower, Then it all fell apart. Not the hairstyle, oh no not that, I mean Peters life.
This is my first story in a few weeks I hope everyone likes it.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2017
great story hope nothing go wrong
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017
What could possibly go wrong, ha ha.
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Great first part.
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Thanks
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
You are welcome.
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JamesM1984 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I like to see what Happens, Keep up the Great work 
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2016
Thanks I'll try
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ObsidianHealer Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016
I can't wait to read more, if you are continuing this :D
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2016
I am I hope you got Pt 2
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cinderella123456 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Student Artist
I'm looking forward to this cant wait
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2016
Pt 2 on line
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JohnFromJersey Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016
A particular fantasy of mine in print.....  Very nice.  Welcome back btw
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2016
Good to hear feedback thanks for the welcome back, you wouldn't believe what happened to me in those three weeks.
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TheWriter32123 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
nice story :)
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your welcome
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