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Geoff sat on the edge of the small table, feeling absolutely humiliated, and almost ready to cry, Kelsey (Girlfirend) and Sarah (Sister)  had a taken him to the mall and fitted him out in a french maids dress, black stockings, high heels and put a pretty white flower in the wig they had forced him to wear, they had invited his best friend (David) over for a drink and he was the one who was going to serve them.

His legs were tired after learning to walk in the heels they forced him to wear, but he had to admit the stockings felt nice on his legs after the girls had shaved them, and he was getting used to the corset being so tight
Looks like this is the end of the road for Geoff, only one person has bothered to answer his call to add something to his story, so unless I get more input to the story. Im afraid Geoff is stuck in his tight corset and french maids outfit, serving drinks to his best friend David.
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skirtkis Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2017
very hot hard for me to read or write about
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2017
Thanks
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2017
kelsey said what can i say didnt want to loose geoff so i told him the truth and now he said he will be my boyfriend and girlfriend then kelsey said i love them both
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brawler65 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 3, 2017
After serving the whole night and David constantly making advances towards him, Geoff got tired of it and walked up to kelsey and pulled her off her chair. He grabbed her really tight and began passionatly kissing her. This turned Kelsey on and the two of them began a make-out session. David's mouth was on the floor and he didn't know if he should be aroused by this. After what felt like ages for David, Geoff and Kelsey stopped kissing and David turned his head towards David and said in a feminine voice i'm sorry David, but i'm gay. I wanted to tell you, but i didn't want to scare of Kelsey. David tried to answer, but only stammered a little. Geoff and Kelsey looked at each other and walked up to David and kissed him on the cheek. After that they took each others hand and went upstairs. After a few minutes David finally collected his thoughts. What about David? he asked Sarah Does he know his girlfriend is a lesbian? Sarah shrugged and said it's up to Kelsey to tell him. Kim stayed until the gel-nails finally came loose, then moved back to her mother, Geoff and Sarah's aunt. At least that's what they told David. When his friend Geoff returned, he thought it was his duty to tell him that his girlfriend was a lesbian and had cheated on him with a girlfriend. Geoff told him that Kelsey already told him the night that he got back and that he forgave her "oooh and actually she's bi". David never saw Kim again, but she does appear sometimes it Kelsey's bedroom. And she did go on holiday travalling through europe with Kelsey and Sarah during the summer break the year after.


Don't often participate or comment on the stories. I just like to read them, but I thought it should at least have a clear and happy ending :)
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2017
Thanks for your help, I hope you enjoy the part you wrote, please feel free to add more in the future, you write quite well.
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brawler65 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2017
thanks for the compliment
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2017
Im not kidding yours was one of the better ones, but everyone's effort was appreciated, I hope to do another one one day, I hope you will join us again then.
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brawler65 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2017
i was motivated, because I wanted it to have a happy ending and because you sounded a little down because it wasn't finished
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2017
Yes its difficult to get people to take the time, most people just like to read other peoples work, this gives them a chance to be a part of it instead of just getting enjoyment from the imaginations of others, without adding anything.

Thanks again, maybe a new one soon, I hope you enjoyed your journey.

And remember its only finished when people stop joining in.
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brawler65 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2017
I like seeing other peoples imagination especially when its imagining other world either future or alternate univers stuff. But the stories you and other tg writers on this site are more of a secret enjoyment to me. I like tg stories as long as the transformation is realistic not magical or heavy sci-fi. So your stories i like a lot
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2017
What did you think of my story called "Jumper?"
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