thank you so much for the critique, and also for the kind words. the streaks were kind of a happy accident, but they did help add to the title. i will admit, they look like exclamation points (one of the reasons i like them so much ), but felt to me like random pieces on the board. thank you again.
thanks so much for the critique, i really appreciate you taking time to write one out. i understand what you are saying about the vision/communication of the piece (or lack there of ), and maybe that is something i should work on writing out, huh?