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A simple life: the beforetime by Serrara A simple life: the beforetime :iconserrara:Serrara 2 3 Willondony by Serrara Willondony :iconserrara:Serrara 42 19 Dank Souls by Serrara Dank Souls :iconserrara:Serrara 16 6 ball by Serrara
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Among Haze, Comes Hope (made in March 2015) by Serrara Among Haze, Comes Hope (made in March 2015) :iconserrara:Serrara 52 31 Another ad? by Serrara Another ad? :iconserrara:Serrara 5 10 Transcription is hard... by Serrara Transcription is hard... :iconserrara:Serrara 4 2 Tree by Serrara Tree :iconserrara:Serrara 9 2 Really? by Serrara Really? :iconserrara:Serrara 5 15 for big sis by Serrara for big sis :iconserrara:Serrara 12 12 Flockdraw by Serrara Flockdraw :iconserrara:Serrara 7 12 OMG by Serrara
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Sad by Serrara
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nO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO- by Serrara
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My Old Tumblr by Serrara My Old Tumblr :iconserrara:Serrara 1 0 sad theatre by Serrara sad theatre :iconserrara:Serrara 3 8

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on this site still...it's just, i don't know what to draw.
Just got rid of a LOT of things that are no longer needed on my account...they were old and no longer useful.
(It's been forever since I've done a critique, but I'll try anyway. I would have done this sooner but school got in the way :/ )

To be honest I do really like this piece because of how simple yet funny it is; just looking at his face gives me a good chuckle. :)

Anyway, one of the things that catches me off guard is that while the face is smooth & well done, one of the eyes is a bit bigger than the other. I'm not sure about whether or not that's good or bad in this context, just what I felt like needed to be pointed out. (That being said the eye shading is great)

The shading on Drache's vest (or, shirt?) is very nicely done, being somewhat realistic while also having charm. The pink and brown shades remind me of dyed leather, with the added in fluff usually in some jackets. Warm and cozy, it must be. :D

His position is nothing exceptional, but it's not overused at all; Drache looks quite pleased to simply be relaxing under a calm lavender light, and the emotion in his face and hand gesture match that...almost perfectly. The anatomy is rounded and slim, but realistic, too.

However, the couch he's sitting on has edges (the black lines) that are way too sharp, though, I can understand if that's nitpicky. Regardless the shift in color from a light brown to an almost greenish tinge makes me wonder what he's doing...perhaps simply looking out his window, or watching something? Still pleasant whatever it is. :)

Overall this piece is well-made and one of your best ones, Mia.
Nothing more needs to be said, just keep at it; you're certainly better than me! :D

~Serrara
My toe is so messed up that my podiatrist says that I'm going to need minor surgery for it (since the toenail is being removed)...
but, the thing that scares me is that I'll need to be put to sleep for it, and I've never felt it before....

Can someone tell me what it feels like?  I really need to know...
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evangeline40003 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2018  Student
Thank you so much for the favorite!  emote : Dino approves 
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RuffCarly Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2018  Student General Artist
hello
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moonlightsparkleYT Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
h e l l o
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NicKittyCata Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello
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Giygasonic Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2018
FUCK! I feel so bad that I missed your B-Day!! (Been BUSY AS FUCK!) But Happy Late Birthday my fellow misanthropic friend!
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Serrara Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
I'm...not a misanthrope, but thanks.
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Giygasonic Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2018
I know I'am... lol.

But sorry I missed it.
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SawuScimitar74 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2018
Happy late Birthday! Hope it was a good one! :D
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JJJMadness Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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AceOfSpadesProduc100 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy birthday!
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