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'Attack Of The Teenagers' Ridiculouscake 7

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Laura Baker loves her daughter, but she's too overbearing.
She doesn't let Becca have any fun, or go to any parties.
It's really starting to be a drag.
But Becca isn't going to let her mom ruin another Halloween.
She's got a party to go to, and a way to sneak out on Halloween.
What's the worst that can happen?
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A great story!

Good way of incorporating horror by making the teens dressed as zombies (thus making it feel like the “horde” was coming for the mom).

The mom was also just the right type of controlling that didn’t make her unlikable, but also making her just stuck-up enough that it did feel like she ‘asked for it’ when they inflated her.