ely 1 revision UNFINISHED

well i might as well update:

i ve made changes. i know its obvious. i changed the color of the guy, and added more lights to him, and darks around him to make him pop more. this is the key. popping is what i want. now beforei said i was adding people on the other side, this has changed. i feel that it would take away from the isolation i want for harrison at this moment.

AN IMPORTANT NOTE
i ve only added harrison and the changes to the city, and the text digitally. i still need to make these changes to the original traditionally and with collage. once i do that i can scan it in again and make a few color corrections. the good part is that nothing will be digital or have that digital look that this has here. i think that it will add a lot of substance when i scan the original with all the changes i ve made here. once i do all this ill post it again for our final opinions.

i am constantly back and fourth on this piece. do you feel that it is a good representation of me as an artist? let me know