The curve on the first one was nicer, rounder, bolder. Now it's little bit of a wet noodle. I do like the lack of nonsense that was in his nose originally. Holding them side by side, you really see how awkwardly straight this version is. I think that if you just got rid of the million nose bubbles (yes, I know, it's only three), then you've nailed it. This version is just too... boring.