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What if? Part 1: Mapleshade's VengenceWhat if Mapleshade’s kits didn’t drown, and Darkstar accepted them into riverclan?
(This means she isn’t evil… but still out for revenge. Sorta like Ashfur)
‘Patchpaw, Larchpaw, Petalpaw, from this day forward you shall be known as Patchpebble, Larchwhisker, and Petalspots.’ Darkstar announced. Mapleshade felt her chest swell with pride, as Darkstar nosed the newly named warriors. ‘Patchpebble, Larchwhisker, Petalspots!’ The Riverclan cats cheered. Mapleshade turned to stare arrogantly at Reedshine, whos kits were stillborn. Reedshine had been Larchwhisker’s mentor, but she still hated Mapleshade with a passion. The red-orange cat threw her a dirty look, before disappearing into the Warrior’s den without congratulating her former apprentice. Mapleshade saw Appledusk approach her, his eyes were soft, glowing with deep pride. ‘Our kits are finally brave, strong warriors. Just like you promised.’ He said.
woooooaaaah, this is pretty
Beautiful! And you have improved a lot too.