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.remember when.

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By ScornedEmblem   |   Watch
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Published: June 26, 2005
remember when we used to play
hide and seek and laugh all day
remember when we used to say
there is nothing prettier than the light of day
remember when we used to talk
about dreams about life, when we'd take a walk
remember when, way back then
we lived to see and fall asleep to the perfect sunset
remember when, you used to smile
and the world could stop revolving,
and tears could rain down from the clouds
remember when we could barely understand
why it was fun to kiss and hold my hand
remember when we used to fly
and live our life and never cry
remember when...
we believed staring at the sun would make us blind
and being a responsible was no fun, and an awful state of mind
remember when we used to feel that way?
wondering why everyone was sad when someone passed away.
remember when we were innocent
remember when it was taken away
remembering is all we have left
remember when we used to play?
© 2005 - 2019 ScornedEmblem
i do. i remember more than i give myself credit for. i remember everything. i just play blind/dumb to see how far you would go to take advantage of me. but not anymore...
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I remember everything, and feel sorry for the rest of those who remember to, sometimes memories bring happiness, but they can also bringt alot of pain :nod:
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alas that they do
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:chainsaw: don't you hate people like that!
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ScornedEmblemHobbyist General Artist
yes, i hate them with a squirly wrath
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evil
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lol could say that again
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I like this poem. Simple, yet beautiful. Bravo
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thanks so much man
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airmega23 Writer
Not a problem. I just hope you can check out my new piece whenever i get it fnished.
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awsome, let me know when you have them up
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awsome, let me know when you have them up
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awsome, let me know when you have them up
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awsome, let me know when you have them up
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thank you
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i agree.. a lot of people can probably relate to this.. i know i do.
it's a really nice poem.
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thank you very much :)
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it takes crazy awful lot to make me shed a tear after reading a poem... and i almost bursted out crying when i read this.

awesome.
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that means alot to me. even though i always make girls cry. thank you so much :D im glad you enjoyed it
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