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heaven abhors a vacuum
sexless adoration
dried up.
Pinpricks of prostitution
threatenó
fistula remains unfazedó
cemented
ceaselessly.

(I'm proud of myself, I actually kept to the original concept of this poem)
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vespera Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011  Professional Writer
I like your handwriting :)
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schriftsteller Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011   Writer
Thanks, you. I'm pretty fond of it, but no one can ever read it haha.
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TwistedAlyx Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I like this one a lot!
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schriftsteller Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011   Writer
Thanks! :)
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sunshinegypsy Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011  Professional Writer
You write like I do. Half print, half cursive-ish. My handwriting is terrible too you know. :) And I liked this one.
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schriftsteller Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011   Writer
Yeah, exactly. That's why I can read yours :)

People can never read my writing and I'm like "WHY IS IT SO HARD." But I guess it takes a certain eye to pick it out. I don't know.

Thank you. :heart:
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sunshinegypsy Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011  Professional Writer
Yeah, because I can read it fine! I think I made my writing purposefully difficult in college because I'd sit in the class and write and I didn't want anyone to accidentally read what I was writing. Journals and stories and such. Plus I thought so fast that I had to learn to write fast because my hand needed to keep up with my brain.
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schriftsteller Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011   Writer
Haha I never tried to make it hard to read, it just happened. The funny thing is that my mom found this note she wrote in high school and our handwriting is really similar. I always wanted to write like her when I was growing up.

But yeah, writing fast is a must.
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sunshinegypsy Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011  Professional Writer
I always wanted to write like my mom!!! She has pretty writing. My dad is totally illegible. Even for me. I mean, WTF.
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