When I saw all those faves you'd put on my commissioned art, I hoped you might take a look at some of the stories. I hope you enjoyed Enhancegirl's first tale!
I actually faved most of these pictures thanks to what you have written below them; it only felt right to go and read the --erm-- source material. It sure was a blissfully charming little read.
As someone who scribbled these kind of stories whithout never fullfilling one, I am sincerly impressed by your writing, and won't stop after reading this first story. It was funny, well-told if a bit clumsy at times (but I'd wager it only gets better), and most of all, among the most enticing, titillating reads I've had in a while.
Wow, thank you! And yes, it certainly is pretty clumsy. I like to think that the prose improves over time, and hopefully it continues to be plenty titillating. I'd love to hear what you think of the other stories in the series!
I hope my feedback has been and will be helpful, or agreable. It would be a pleasure to leave comments when I feel like I have something to say.