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A Day at the Carnival by SatsumaLord A Day at the Carnival by SatsumaLord
My half of an art-trade with :iconomega-warior: and while I was coloring this, he came up with a small story to go along with the pic. You can read his story below. :)


The ball clattered against the tin cans, taking the last set of ten out easily. "Ha, gotcha!" said Jake, placing the last ball on the counter in front of him. The two brothers had decided on a long night out at the carnival, bringing Omega's wife and Jake's girlfriend to enjoy the night. The girls had gone to get some food, while the boys had decided to try and win some prizes at the can stall.

Jake looked over at his brother and sighed. The tall wolf was struggling, and had hardly taken any cans out from the first row. "Dude, what is it with you?"

"I'm not very good at knocking down cans, OK!" said Omega, throwing the ball in his hand and taking out another two cans. "You're just a show-off!"

Jake sighed. Omega lacked the special awareness that Jake had when it came to geometry. "Ok, aim at the bottom left." said Jake.

"I don't need the help." said Omega. He paused; then with a sigh, took aim...


"Want some?" asked Jess, offering a tray of nachos and dip. Sarah's muzzle wrinkled slightly.

"How CAN you eat that..." she paused. Jess was MUCH bigger than any other woman she knew, vertically and horizontally. Her tubby belly was just visible under her huge breasts, which had completely thrown Sarah at first. "I'm not a huge fan of dip foods, really."

"Why not?" asked Jess, taking a dip. "They're fun."

Sarah was about to list the other things her friend thought of as being fun, when she spotted the boys coming back. "Oh look, I think they've won something!" said Sarah.

Jake was smiling widely, and carrying a teddy bear as big as he was; Sarah laughed. It was dressed in a tie with neat hair, something she always found cute on Jake. He smiled, and offered it to Sarah. "For me?" she asked.

"Well, just incase I'm a bit busy one evening." he said smiling.

"Oh, sweety." she said as she blushed.

Omega was also blushing, and held up what he'd won. "Sorry dear, all I could get you was..."

He was cut off by Jess' happy exclamation. "A PONY!?" she squealed joyfully, taking it from his hand and hugging it while beaming gleefully. "I love it!" she said as she hugged the pony tightly.

Sarah and Jake smiled as they watched. "Well, we both know it's not the size, it's the thought that counts..."


all characters copyright :iconomega-warior:
artwork copyright SatsumaLord
original photograph copyright its respective owner
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Moqffea Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2018  Professional Interface Designer
Good !!!!!!!!!!!!!
arcadunato Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
.... perecane?
Frozenvolf Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Professional Writer
Ok, I nearly passed out from laughing, seeing the expression from Jess herself. This is a very well job done.
bubbles46853 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
Awww, cute! I wanna hug Jess!
CandyCornHusky Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
great job
crosserdog1 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009
thought it was cute. what did you ask him to draw?
SatsumaLord Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'd rather not say just yet, but it does involve Bonnie, Gina, and his vixen Jessica. ;)
Barkis1 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
MasterToymaker Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009  Professional Artist
Very cute, and well-written. Made me smile. :)
Omega-Warior Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2009
I wrote the story, glad you like it.
Omega-Warior Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
LOVE it! Especially Jessica's expresion!
Omega-Warior Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
LOVE it! Especially Jessica's expresion!
wyanewill Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009  Hobbyist Filmographer
Cool art trade, and very creative story.
McSteel Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cute. =3
Aerospine Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
Very nice, and liked the mini story.
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September 20, 2009
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