E
literature

EVA

6 Favourites
8 Comments
281 Views
A hum in your ear
Reminds you to breathe
Regulated life.

4.3 psi of pressure and
3ins of material
Keep you human.

You are a fetus
Umbilically dependent
In a pressurized womb.

Death is a vacuum
The cosmos are infinite and
You forget to breathe.
another writing experiment. can't shake the space theme going on here. at least this one's about a space walk and not about shuttle crews dying.

I have no idea which category to submit this to. it's not really "prose" but it's not "poetry", either. oh well :V

~VinDeamer

This work is MINE and may not be used or reproduced in any way without my express permission!
Published:
© 2013 - 2020 SaraPlutonium
Comments8
anonymous's avatar
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
MootykinsII's avatar
10/10 Love EVA suits.
SaraPlutonium's avatar
SaraPlutonium Digital Artist
wow, much appreciated!!! thank you so much!
MootykinsII's avatar
You're welcome.
Shinitora12's avatar
Shinitora12Hobbyist General Artist
I love the last three lines.
SaraPlutonium's avatar
SaraPlutonium Digital Artist
Thank you so very much! I re-wrote those lines in particular quite a few times. ;u;

~VinDeamer
Shinitora12's avatar
Shinitora12Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
stormsirens2's avatar
stormsirens2Hobbyist Artist
hhhmmm
SaraPlutonium's avatar
SaraPlutonium Digital Artist
......not quite sure what the 'hmm' is for, but thanks for the fave, anyway ^^;

~VinDeamer
anonymous's avatar
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In