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Wolverine page 6 by santiagocomics Wolverine page 6 by santiagocomics
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StudioCombine Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
great art as always, my friend! in particular, i like the arrangement of your panels, which are distorted while the action is going on, and become more standard, at what appears to be a break in the tension. if that is what's happening, it's very nicely done! some feedback: i think, it needs to be more clear what happens between panel one and two. I think this could be done by including part of the open door in panel one. OR, maybe just add some motion lines (in panel 2) showing that the door has just been closed, coupled with a sound effect like CLAAANNNG!! to reinforce the event?
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Lexeaus1234 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010
His head's a strange shape, but awesome comic page nonetheless.
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