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Great concept - this caught my eye amongst a page of other deviations! A couple of areas that could be improved:
1) More details on the things you want the viewer to focus on (e.g. hands, face) - use a sharper edged brush to pick out details and highlights - some of the features are a bit fuzzy looking.
2) Perhaps fewer details on the areas less important, e.g. less strong lines for the cauldron, individual hairs etc

Overall, try and lead the viewer to the parts of the painting YOU want them to look at
You really got the lighting right, I love that the light is coming from the potion :). Nice work!
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
Nice
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SandsGonzaga Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thanks
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Your welcome :)
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josegoncalo Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pretty cool, But I think that the cheeks need some highlights.
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SandsGonzaga Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I think you're right.  agh! 
thanks dude! 
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