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Published: January 18, 2014

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holkok's avatar
Dz dz. Should've trie warrior cats style, sneak around so you can catch it when it tries to make a run for it.
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Uh huh XD
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ScorpioGalaxyWolf|Hobbyist General Artist
Yep, that's why you don't make a loud approach xD
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Furecho|Student Artist
I'm just on page 8 and I already LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS COMIC
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Misstyx|Student Traditional Artist
Poor wolf kinda funny though
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ColorWolf06|Student Digital Artist
Just some constructive criticism, but rabbits don't actually have paw pads. Also, on the previos page, the rabbit's eyes should be on the sides of its head. It looks depry, but it's correct.
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Sally-Ce|Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! ^^ I guess I should've studied hares a bit before drawing this… Too late now, but thanks regardless! :) I'll keep it in mind! 
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ColorWolf06|Student Digital Artist
You're welcome! Glad I could help!
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Sally-Ce|Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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The first panel looks truly amazing !! I really love the perspective you gave to the bunny ! He really looks like he's running away from us o3o Anyway, you really showed the best perspective x3 And those action lines are amazing ! I love also the ground between the spines ... the textures look amazing. 

Omg those clouds in the second panel look amazing and sooo fluffy *-* I love fluffy clouds x3 Anyway, the pose is really amazing here. We can really feel the movement, and those action lines, again, give a even better impression ! :3 I like that all the grass were made one by one o.o It must have took you a long time, but it really worth it ! It's amazing !! Meya's expression is awesome, like everything actually xD

On the third and fourth panel, Meya really has a face that fits well with what she thinks xDD The ears position and the half-closed eyes really showed well the expression ! The perspective on the fourth panel is really good too :3 And ... amazing shadings x3 Such a cute fluffy neck too :heart: Poor Meya D: Better luck next time !

The last panel is amazing ! You choose, again, the perfect perspective ! I think it really gives a nice mood ... like if Meya would go and never come back ... like if something really special would happen in the next page ... 

Anyway ! Awesome page like always ! Sorry, the comment is quite short :'c Plus ... I commented so late ... I'm so sorry 
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Sally-Ce|Hobbyist General Artist
"Sorry, the comment is quite short"….. Neko… this comment isn't short… it's filled with sweet, encouraging, great and lovely words!! :iconaawplz:
Thank you truly much for everything you said!! ;w; You make me so incredibly happy each time you comment hun! ;v; Once again, thank you so much! Omg, how can I ever thank you enough?? :'3
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Aw, Sally ! :hug: You're very sweet with me, thank you.
You're the most welcome, and you thank me enough ! I'm happy when you reply and tell me you're happy :')
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Acording|Hobbyist General Artist
aaaaw I realy thought she was going to get it xD

I realy see you inproved alot !
on your backgrounds colloring linearts :3 !!

and yet another amazing page !
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Sally-Ce|Hobbyist General Artist
Better luck next time Meya! ;3

I'm really glad to hear that!! :D :heart:

Yay! Thank you!! :la:
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Acording|Hobbyist General Artist
yes indeed :D!

No problems C;
ur gettng amazinger every page

 Your Welcome : D!
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Sally-Ce|Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!! ;-;
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Scyilla|Hobbyist General Artist
Lol xDD
I agree with you Meya, thorns are annoying and hurt, I should know with the damn bruise I have on my leg :I
Love her face in the 3rd panel xDD

Technically it's not the best idea to eat before sleep, but eh, she knows what she's doing, I hope xD
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Sally-Ce|Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm… bruise on leg… coincidence? ;>
I'm glad you do!! :D

Haha! Well, she tends to act before she thinks. cx
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Bluethealpha|Hobbyist General Artist
Go run and hide thumper! Sorry meya, no thumper today! lol
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Sally-Ce|Hobbyist General Artist
YES! It's probably for the best!! D': Haha! Meya, better luck next time. cx
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I knew it!!!!! XD
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Sally-Ce|Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! ;D
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kaschill7|Professional Writer
XD 'poor meya' indeed!.
the whole thing looks great :D i especially love the first picture!
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Sally-Ce|Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :D I'm really glad you do! ;3
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