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IT'S THE BOIIIIIS!! :iconcelebrateplz: I'm so happy they're back too! :'D (Okay now for an actual critique) I am in love with this style, the lack of bl...


Well, here I am again, giving you a well deserved critique on a fantastic piece! Let's get started! So positives, I adore your style, n...

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Okay so, I really like this pic! The purple tint you've got going on is great, you pulled it off well with the moonlight. I will say th...


So um, epic doesn't quite do this justice, but it's the closest word I've got to accurately describe this incredible scene. I mean, thi...

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I'm done
Author's Note: Just some random vent stuff. Again, this felt important so, enjoy or at least learn from this? It's not romantic, but you can see it like that if you want, doesn't matter to me. I guess you'll only get it if you've been through it, so don't worry about reading all the way through if it doesn't resonate by the third paragraph.
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I am finished. I'm completely and utterly done with you. I know that's not what you expected to hear, but if you cared about me half as much as you care about yourself, you'd have seen it coming. Then again, if you halfway cared about me, I wouldn't be done with you, now would I? But the fact remains: I'm truly done. With you. With this pathetic excuse for a relationship. With this routine of ours. This song and dance that flows out of you in waves and down on me like a tsunami, drowning me in your self-absorbed, entitled little world.
All your problems, all your issues, all your opinions, take up all my time. Everythi
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Charmy Nonsense News - Chpt.16 and Beyond
This stuff is spoilers for Charmy Nonsense Chapter 14, so if you haven't read that, don't read this okay?
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Seriously don't read this if you're not caught up.
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Dude, I'm warning you.
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Okay, if you really want to be spoiled.
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Just remember you wanted this.
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Nah, I'm just kidding, it's not that big a deal if you're spoiled XDDD
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Okay! So Mighty and Ray! Let's talk a little about them! Well, I guess it's easier to tell you who they aren't first.
NOT FROM SONIC MANIA PLUS
They aren't the Mighty and Ray in Sonic Mania Plus, similar to how Modern Sonic and Modern Tails aren't Classic Sonic and Classic Tails. I regard Mania Plus as the Classic Mighty and Ray, which is why I said at the end of Chapter 14, I'd introduce you guys to the MODERN Mighty and Ray.
NOT FROM THE ARCHIE COMICS
Also, I might not have made this clear before, but I HATE ARCHIE COMICS AND I DON'T READ THEM. When they first came out all the way in the 90's, that's wh
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Charmy Nonsense 15 (E) : Charmy Tries Stealth
Author's Note: Finally, we're back with Espio's serious story! Please read Chapter 5 before reading this chapter because this is a direct continuation of that story. And Chapter 25 will be a direct continuation for this chapter. So look forward to that one when I get around to writing it. XDDDD
Been waiting a long time to get this to you guys, I really hope you like! X333

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The warm sunrise filtered into existence like a looming commandment, one he dreaded to acknowledge. Thin yellow rays shot through the blinds-covered window and shined against his cold scales, breaking his concentration. Magenta eyelids contorted at the light beams, the force of their luminescence palpable and pressing the chameleon's head backward a bit. His surroundings returned to his attention, the meditative position he froze himself in reluctantly melted and he felt the exhaustion of his extremities for the first time. Slowly, his eyes peeled open and the somber ninja was
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Charmy Nonsense 14: Charmy and the Intern 3/3
Alright! It's time to end this mini-arc of hilarity! Espio wants to join in on the fun, but is fun the only thing he has in mind? Well, let's find out! Enjoy! Oh and don't think I forgot about that tantalizing surprise I've been teasing~ X3
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"You--- you--- you--- YOU WHAAAAAAAT?!" Charmy shouted, causing Espio to snatch him out of Mighty's old room, where Lil' Louie lay unconscious, and rush them to Charmy's bedroom. The young bee was still in shock as the ninja peered over the door frame to see if they were alone before shutting the door.
"I want in. On the pranking" he clarified as he turned to the still bewildered Charmy. For a stretch of time, Charmy remained paralyzed, his mouth unhinged and his eyes bulging out of his skull. The chameleon simply stared back stoically and waited for his smaller teammate to unfreeze himself. When he did, an uncouth laugh roared out of his tiny lungs.
"HAHAHAHA! Yeah, okay Espio. YOU want to help ME prank
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Charmy Nonsense 13: Charmy and the Intern 2/3
All the pranks are from one of my favorite childhood books, Captain Underpants! George and Harold are my spirit guides and they have never steered me wrong! XDDD Enjoy!
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An all nighter. Charmy had to pull an all nighter, outside, washing Lil' Louie's rusty, crust box of a car. His hands were sore and calloused like he'd just dug a ditch, his tiny arms were like wet noodles hanging from his shoulders, and he swore he'd never get the smell of car wax out of his nose. The sun rose just as he finished polishing Harold's hubcaps. Or rather, the spot where the hub caps would be if Harold had them.
Exhausted wings carried little Charmy up to his bedroom window, just as he entered the colorful mess of a room, his strength left him and he dropped face first on his bed. The young bee's body lightly bounced atop the springy cushion, before the warm embrace of sleep cuddled him unconscious.
A wild grin split Charmy's blanket buried face as he let his mind wander
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Charmy Nonsense 12: Charmy and the Intern 1/3
Did you guys miss me as much as I missed you? Because I really missed you guys. ^^ Things have been crazy, obviously. Crazy like, going to the hospital at 10pm and leaving at 4am crazy. But everything's good now (thanks for your continued support :D) and I finally have time to work on my favorite fanfiction. C: I'm planning on squeezing in as many chapters as I can before school starts so, get ready for some chapter dumps! Enjoy, everybody!
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"VECTOR, WHERE ARE THE WC'S?!" Espio asked behind various large stacks of papers, his patience worn thin.
"WHAT THE HECK DO YA NEED OUR WC'S FOR?! I THOUGHT THAT'S WHY WE GOT ALL DEM RECIEPTS!" Vector responded back from his closet upstairs, as he typed on a 30 year old, barely functioning calculator. The numbers he crunched seemed to be crunching him at that point.
"How many times must I explain this?!" Espio said to himself, the words steaming as they left his gritted teeth. "RECEIPTS AREN'T FOR TAXES, THEY'RE FO
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A One-Sided Relationship
This came out of nowhere and has nothing to do with Charmy Nonsense or anything, but this feels important, so I’m just going to post it. This is my honest description of how a one sided relationship feels. (Romantic or Platonic)
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First comes the explosions. The overwhelming shock of meeting someone you are absolutely crazy about. The feeling of unbridled heat and intensity, the desire to be theirs, not for them to be yours. Yes, the vast false pride you take in bending and breaking yourself to assist them or please them, even slightly. The rush of butterflies you get when they grace you with their presence. The inferno that supersedes all when they choose to say a small thank you or acknowledge your efforts at all. These are the explosions that blossom the relationship.
Next up is the vertigo paralysis. The confusion of the relationship when you realize your position in it. You realize you’re the one doing everything to keep the
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Charmy Nonsense: Charmy meets an ancient deity
Author's Notes: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand we're back. XDDDDDD
This takes place right after the events of Sonic Adventure. Since they weren't in that game, I wanted to write how I think the Chaotix would react to Chaos and Tikal. That being said, I feel the need to explain: Tikal isn't dead. She isn't a ghost or a spirit, she's an actual living character. See end notes for the evidence backing this up.

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An airplane flew across the sky, searching for something hidden between the clouds. The detective trio: Vector, Espio, and Charmy were its only occupants besides the pilot. Normally, this would have been a luxury out of their fiscal range, but the Chaotix helped this pilot once before so he owed them a favor.
It had been a long time since their last visit to Knuckles' island, the legendary Angel Island. Last time they were there, it was right after the Fighting tournament they all participated in. None of them won, but the after par
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Charmy Nonsense: Charmy and the sunglasses pig (V)
Author's Note: Okay, serious story time. Hope you enjoy.
Update 8/22/2018: I'm going to list songs that go with most of Vector's chapters that fit directly into the theme of the story and help illustrate the inner feelings of the characters. This is optional, obviously, but in case you're interested, I will have a song in the beginning author notes of his chapters for you to put on loop as you read. Some songs will have profanity, but I will put a warning before I mention the song, so no worries. ;3
The song for this chapter is Bread and Water by Sheila Nicholls. Pop it into Youtube and loop it for maximum emotional experience. :D

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It was a crisp morning when the call came in. A young dancer was reported missing since last night. It hadn't been 24 hours so the police hadn't taken the case, the parents begged for Vector's help over the phone. That was all it took to get them out the door. The club was located in the shadiest part of downtown C
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Charmy Nonsense 9: Charmy and the Halloween Party
Author's Note: Whaaaat? A Halloween themed story in November? What are the odds?! XDDDDD this is what happens when I try to do a holiday themed fic, I'm late and people get awkward about how late it is. Well ya know what?! I don't care, Halloween is whenever I say it is! B/ (sorry, enjoy you guys XDDD)
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Charmy floated along, on his way to Amy's Halloween party, in a costume too gaudy and colorful to clearly distinguish for adults, but immediately recognized by children as Super Duper Scooper, the Ice Cream Hero. Charmy was too excited to see all of his friends at Amy's place, he just knew they would flip over his costume. Plus, you know, candy.
He was almost there, turning a corner swiftly ready to meet up with Vector Espio and everyone else... but something stopped him. Someone, actually.
Standing just a few yards from Amy's apartment, Charmy's eyes immediately latched onto the silhouette of a man, a human, staring at the place w
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