I see them on the +Watch feed! Gave it a visual run-through. I suppose the character with whom we are to empathize is that woman on page five with the binoculars who is jumping. Will start translating the dialogue so I know what's going on. LOL.
I have been following Lorenzo Etherington (Etherington Brothers) who has a kickstarter to market his drawing books these past months. Now that I start to understand how it works, I think you should look into it for MC. Maybe contact him? Here's his page https://www.deviantart.com/etheringtonbrothers