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FFF finally done. I didn't want to spam people, so I crammed all 3 reviews into one flash file, haha. Hope these reviews are informative! :) This was my first time doing flash, so if there are any glitches, please let me know!

Yuumei's flash tutorial was a huge help: [link]

Games:
Thanatos Contract: [link]
That Cheap and Sacred Thing: [link]
Rapunzel: [link]
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angelofstars Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011
hey thar again ovo
I was wondering how you made this ovo .
I was trying to attempt to do something like this for a game/ story
=v=;. Too bad i don't know how to use Flash Dl .
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KatimusPrime Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, thank you so much for the review! I'll try to make the sprites match the backgrounds a little better in Episode 2 of Thanatos Contract. :>
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, no problem!
I really did like the sprites and backgrounds individually, though. : ) Looking forward to episode 2...super desperately! XD I want to know what happens!
Ah, by the way, I have to ask...is Virgil's name inspired by Dante's Inferno in any way?
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KatimusPrime Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Thanks. Actually, the backgrounds are the way they are because :iconzetachi: wanted to make them match the art a little better. I guess it had the opposite effect. ^^

I'm still waiting on the script for the second one, myself. XD

And as far as character naming goes, that was completely on :iconzetachi:, so I have no idea where he got the names. I had almost nothing to do with the actual writing except for a pointer here and there. ^^
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, I see. Well, the review is all my opinion, so I'm sure there are people who think the sprites and backgrounds work well! ^^;
Ahaha, I'll have to ask ~Zetachi about the naming! 8D
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KatimusPrime Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Is all good. Reviews either way are still publicity. :>
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Zetachi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011
To be completely honest, no, Virgil's name did not come from Dante's Inferno. I'm embarrassed to say that I have never read it. >_>; Were you able to make connections to it, though?
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahaha, not really. I didn't really make many connections, other than my suspicion that Mr. Smiles isn't quite human.
Dante's Inferno is about a man going down to hell and then back out. XD Virgil is the name of his guide down in hell. :)
Ahaha, I was about to say it'd be such a huge coincidence if you were inspired by the Inferno, because I have OCs inspired by the story!
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Zetachi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011
Ah! I might have to give it a read sometime, as I feel like such a horrible English major for not having read most of the classics. >_< But yeah, sorry about that. And who knows, perhaps you'll find out Mr. Smiles's true identity in the next episode... ;)
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, no worries! No one can read everything!
Ufufufu, I'm looking forward to that!
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Zetachi Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
Thank you very much for the review! :)
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem! :)
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carosene Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Student Writer
Hoooooooooooly crap so pretty. o.o
This is great analysis... o.o
(I'm like "Oh, I didn't realize I did that so well... XD" and "Oops, totes right, that kind of sucks. o.o")

I'd love to have discussions with you! X3

Good luck in the contest! :D
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, thank you! I thought it was a little plain. XD
Yeah, a lot of this review is just my own opinion, though! Everyone feels differently about these sorts of things, so it's super hard for me to score. OTL;

Ahaha, I actually called up a friend after finishing and was like "DUDE PLAY THIS GAME I need to have some in depth discussion about all the significance and hidden meanings behind everything!"

Thank you! :heart:
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carosene Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Student Writer
Well of course, but all critics are is professional opinion-givers. X3

Oh that's awesome! XD I hope your friend obeyed you properly!
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahaha, I'm not so sure about professional, but...! 8D
I do too...I should probably nag her again some time. :)
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carosene Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Student Writer
Lol. X3 Do it! :D
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HiddenWings07 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Pfft, your review compilation beats mine of TCAST like...oh I don't know, a hundred times over? :XD:

Oh hey, your opinion on the art and music for TCAST partially coincide with mine! :dance: And props on taking the initiative to use flash as a tool; that must have taken some difficulty. Great job! c:
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, no, haha...it's just a little spiffied up with flash. XD;;;

Yep, I saw your review for TCAST and thought "ahaha, I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks that..." :)
Yuumei's tutorial helped a lot though, so it made learning flash a lot easier. :)
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HiddenWings07 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Great minds think alike. :dummy:

And I love ~yummei's work! I remember seeing that tutorial and wondering if I'd ever take on the challenge of using flash one day. Probably not. =v=;
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoo! :la:

Yep, I never thought I'd try it out, but this was the perfect opportunity. 8D It was relatively painless too, so her tutorial really works! :)
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HiddenWings07 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
When you say it like that, it really makes me want to try my hand at flash! ouo; But I really shouldn't, because my computer's a dinosaur and school going to start really soon.
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, good luck if you do decide to try it!
It didn't take me too much time to put this together, but I've worked in flash a little before so...I don't know. XD
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HiddenWings07 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! c:
And I'll keep that in mind.
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Blizz-Mii Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:worship:
I bow down to your great innovative idea of a flash compilation and amazing reviews with so much depth! :D :heart:
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahaha, thank you! :) I hope the reviews were helpful for their creators/prospective players! :heart:
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angelofstars Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011
awesomeeeeee ! ;D .
Wow, this is amazing! ;o;
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, thank you! :) I hope the reviews are helpful!
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angelofstars Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011
They are@! Plus its in a flash version! I must say, splendid idea! ^^ .
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! :) I just really wanted to try out flash and this seemed like the perfect opportunity!
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JDWasabi Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome review! I'll be sure to check these out!

Thank you!
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :) I hope you enjoy playing them! The creators really put a lot of work into them. :heart:
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JDWasabi Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
They're on my 'to play' list XD It just so happens that I'm making a VN based game as well (but with loads more puzzles and programmins in Flash) for class so it was unfortunate that the timings just wouldn't work for me XD Oh well next time!

Looking forward to playing these for inspiration! :heart:
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahaha, wow! Sounds like a lot of work; good luck on it! :)
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JDWasabi Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I've played Thanatos Contract that was interesting especially with the twist at the end! Now playing TCAST XD and enjoying it so far haha. Well, be on the look out for a project named 'Hungry Whispers' in the Visual Novel group soon which will include puzzles!

Thanks! :)
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sachixakechi Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, I'm glad you tried out some of the games! :)
I'll look forward to it!
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