

Update of my character(Soulafein Saerah - Wood elf Barbarian)
Name: Soulafein Saerah
Race: Wood Elf
Class: Barbarian
Aligment: CG
Background: Urchin
Strength: 17
Dexterity: 14
Constitution: 14
Intelligence: 8
Wisdom: 14
Charisma: 10
His fury flares up like dry grass and his swords strikes like lightning. But high willpower allow him to take control over his rage. He is great hunter and pathfinder with keen senses.
Now he wears Red Dragonscale armor, Ring of Free Action an Twinned Flametongue (Homebrew: Two Swords as one magic item).
Chibi Soulafein by talented
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Another chibi by talented
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Other characters from our party:
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Name: Soulafein Saerah
Race: Wood Elf
Class: Barbarian
Aligment: CG
Background: Urchin
Strength: 17
Dexterity: 14
Constitution: 14
Intelligence: 8
Wisdom: 14
Charisma: 10
His fury flares up like dry grass and his swords strikes like lightning. But high willpower allow him to take control over his rage. He is great hunter and pathfinder with keen senses.
Now he wears Red Dragonscale armor, Ring of Free Action an Twinned Flametongue (Homebrew: Two Swords as one magic item).
Chibi Soulafein by talented


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Another chibi by talented

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Other characters from our party:
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~ Brass
First things first: I see your work popping up now and then in the groups I follow for some time now, and I have to say your progress is hard to miss! Your range of values is richer, your poses more daring (^ case in point). I'm happy for you!
But since this wouldn't be a critique if I didn't have anything more useful to say than praise, here are a couple of things I think leave some room for improvement:
for starters, but if you want to keep your foot down and call in a 'personal preference' I understand that, I think you went a little overboard with muscle mass - in the upper arm, specifically. It is enormous, compared to his face.
The leg I can deal with - he's holding it up like that, pumping that quadriceps (which is already a big muscle) so naturally, it should look pretty thick. But that gigantic bicep, to me, is a bit too much. That whole upper arm looks, upon closer inspection, like there's been some oversight. I think the deltoid is supposed to go between the tricep and bicep, but let me find a link or two for you: Arm Construction Notes.
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The other thing that looks 'off' is the nearer hand looking not as big as the suggested perspective (when I look at the faraway hand and the size of the huge arm I talked about above) asks for. But the faraway hand is problematic in another way, also: it, and its sword do not really overlap, or aren't really overlapped by anything, so there's no way of quantifying how far away it is, exactly: it only makes a subtle tangent with the outlines of the cloak (which is something artists should avoid, ideally: tangents confuse the eye and make a composition harder to read. So if you're not going to have overlap, try to leave enough space between, at least).
That's all I have, really. I hope I didn't come across as being overly harsh.
Have a wonderful 2018!
Made note about left hand.
Cheers!