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Soulafein Saerah - Wood Elf Barbarian by s0ulafein Soulafein Saerah - Wood Elf Barbarian by s0ulafein
Update of my character(Soulafein Saerah - Wood elf Barbarian)

Name: Soulafein Saerah
Race: Wood Elf
Class: Barbarian
Aligment: CG
Background: Urchin
Strength: 17
Dexterity: 14
Constitution: 14
Intelligence: 8
Wisdom: 14
Charisma: 10

His fury flares up like dry grass and his swords strikes like lightning. But high willpower allow him to take control over his rage. He is great hunter and pathfinder with keen senses.
Now he wears Red Dragonscale armor, Ring of Free Action an Twinned Flametongue (Homebrew: Two Swords as one magic item).

Chibi Soulafein by talented :icongoichiro: :  gift Saerah by goichiro
  Soulafein saerah by goichiro

Another chibi by talented :iconmatschkuchn: :  Raffle price - s0ulafein by Matschkuchn

Other characters from our party:
Buhovert The Victorious - Halfling Paladin by s0ulafein  Aeron Silverleaf 2.0 - High Elf Warlock/Cleric by s0ulafein  Komei Kunmin 2.0 - Human Ranger by s0ulafein 
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:iconkirtashika:
kirtashika Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
loveeeeeeeee it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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s0ulafein Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Tohru hugs Kisa-chan [V1] 
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BrassDragon Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dreamy sigh Saerah looks so badass in this pose.

~ Brass
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s0ulafein Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bunny Emoji-87 (Thanks) [V5] *Free Icon/Emote* Molang (I Love It!) 
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Zaphkiellane Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome posing, makes this look very dynamic. You can almost feel it move. 
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s0ulafein Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D (Big Grin) Thanks! He is very fast and I tried to express it.
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Eva-B-Blue Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2018
Much care was put into this. It pleases my eyeballs :^)
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s0ulafein Featured By Owner Edited Jan 22, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! I did my best!Nod 
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:iconjtmercronin:
JTmercronin Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
This piece exudes dynamic energy. It reminds me of the 1990s classics.
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s0ulafein Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D (Big Grin) 
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BATTLEFAIRIES Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2018
Hello there! You have been visited by a Critique Ninja! We stealthily roam the site, looking to leave thoughtful and useful criticism, as per the spirit of CRITmas. Mind if I just hop on to business, then? Just swooping in and out again - that is the Ninja way...!

First things first: I see your work popping up now and then in the groups I follow for some time now, and I have to say your progress is hard to miss! Your range of values is richer, your poses more daring (^ case in point). I'm happy for you!

But since this wouldn't be a critique if I didn't have anything more useful to say than praise, here are a couple of things I think leave some room for improvement:

for starters, but if you want to keep your foot down and call in a 'personal preference' I understand that, I think you went a little overboard with muscle mass - in the upper arm, specifically. It is enormous, compared to his face.
The leg I can deal with - he's holding it up like that, pumping that quadriceps (which is already a big muscle) so naturally, it should look pretty thick. But that gigantic bicep, to me, is a bit too much. That whole upper arm looks, upon closer inspection, like there's been some oversight. I think the deltoid is supposed to go between the tricep and bicep, but let me find a link or two for you: Arm Construction Notes.
www.google.be/imgres?imgurl=ht…

The other thing that looks 'off' is the nearer hand looking not as big as the suggested perspective (when I look at the faraway hand and the size of the huge arm I talked about above) asks for. But the faraway hand is problematic in another way, also: it, and its sword do not really overlap, or aren't really overlapped by anything, so there's no way of quantifying how far away it is, exactly: it only makes a subtle tangent with the outlines of the cloak (which is something artists should avoid, ideally: tangents confuse the eye and make a composition harder to read. So if you're not going to have overlap, try to leave enough space between, at least).

That's all I have, really. I hope I didn't come across as being overly harsh.
Have a wonderful 2018!
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s0ulafein Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for your critique. I've already discussed the right arm with one of my friends and he showed me the same arm examples :D (Big Grin)
Made note about left hand.Nod 
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BATTLEFAIRIES Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018
Yeah arms are my personal bane as well when drawing (which is FUNNY because 'bane' is pronounced exactly like the dutch word for 'leg'!)

Cheers!
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s0ulafein Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D (Big Grin) 
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White-Rose-Brian Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2017   Digital Artist
Very nice. I have a lineup of RPG characters if you want to come see it in my gallery.
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s0ulafein Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! Checked it out!;) (Wink) 
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candemarzat Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ooh, I like the new design a lot more! you've clearly improved a ton, and the outfit reads more badass now :)
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s0ulafein Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks!Hug 
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candemarzat Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem! :)
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C-0-R-E Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I initially thought his name was "Sarah".
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s0ulafein Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:) (Smile) 
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