Your work has certainly improved over your older works. I have seen the other stuff you have drawn previously the shading and even minor details are improved to the point that I can barely recognize it at first and the nude image of this over on HF that DA would never let you post is also stunningly impressive. You have much better shading and us few lines to show the person's body parts. Its a really impressive drawing that reminds me so ,much of really high end comic book characters. I honestly can't wait to commission you and read this story you are working on
I hope to keep improving and refining my multiple styles in the years to come.
I love how alive this character feels. The messy clothes, the maybe smiling / maybe about to murder someone expression, the bones and musculature and relaxed stance - they are bright and cheerful and maybe about to punch someone. There’s a great amount of detail on the hair and clothes, especially the shoes.
I have two very minor concerns. First, unless they’re running I don’t see why their hair would be whipping back and forth like that, and they look too stationary to be running … but maybe the hair is lifting on its own from anger? And it’s better to show the hair than let it hide behind the back, although now I like the idea of the character wearing that braid like a scarf. Second, their right leg looks twisted or bent backward at the knee in a painful way. Their left leg is also bent but looks like a relaxed lean.
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