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Two things. 
One: in Panel 5 Mikey's chin is behind his collar. I can understand that, that could happen considering the angle, but it make's him look as if he has no neck. I'm wondering if maybe moving his head back a little would have fixed that. Then you could show a little more of his neck and still have his chin behind the collar. Although that might make it look like his collar was HUGE. 
Two: Kylie's chin does the same thing in panel 7, or does it? It's almost to close to tell what its doing.

Hehe. Can't wait to see when they find out about each other more.     ^._.^    ~._.~