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Serpamia Flare Strip 024 - Redrawn

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This redrawn page is pretty much panel-for-panel (though with a different layout of course) in terms of composition, poses and angles. Of course some major fixes include the perspective of backgrounds (in the original you can see the river flowing behind Kylie which... actually makes no sense unless the river warps reality :'D) and some perspective fixes on Kylie and Cain doing the rock-hopping thing (though I probably still don't have it down perfectly >_>) AND I reduced the perspective warping on Kylie's hand in the third panel...

Okay so I made a lot of fixes but those are all technical XD; the content is pretty much the same!

... Though I did do a dialogue tweak here and there, just to snip things and make it flow better whenever possible. XP

Anyway, glad this one is done, but 25 and 26 are monsters (containing literal ones too) so those might take slightly longer to redraw. I'm gonna be so glad to be able to get to my old PSD files, I'm sure. >_>a

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anakareninart's avatar
You've improved so much!! I love the page, great colors and dialogue! n.n