Positive Feature Poem: Autumn
nature's embers embellish the forest
with golden sparks in the light of the sun
the leaves sing with the shifting hues
as the earth prepares for the silent white
may the blessings of the times fill our being
until new life begins anew at the dawning of spring
Positive Feature Poem: Rainbow
Partnered with my Fifty-eighth volume of Positive Feature.
This poem was unexpectedly a lot more complex than I anticipated. I've been frustrated by the simplicity of past poems, but I'm really glad this turned out so much better. I don't use big words as often as I'd like. So I'm glad I was able to experiment and create what I believe is effective storytelling. I hope you agree.
Poem and Feature (c) RTNightmare
The best part is that I AM really proud of it, so I feel like I truly earned it. While I do think my first DD was good, I don't think it was quite on the level of this one. But a year has passed so I have grown.