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Mostly, I think this art is really well done. But there are some things that could be improved on.

One of them is the shading. It's a bit off, and is too soft in some areas (such as the arms behind the chest, it just look like it's a bit sunk in).

The outlines that you have used on some of the parts could have been a tad cleaner, but otherwise they're fine.

All in all, this is amazing, but there are some improvements to make.


(Please don't get insulted by this! It's just an honest opinion and you shouldn't take these things too seriously ;v<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>