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The Courageous DragonMan #1
It was a bright and sunny day in New York City. More specifically in lower Manhatten where the JPMorgan bank was located. It was just a normal day at the bank with people walking in and out of the building. But today was different, today the bank just received 2,000,000 dollars as it was moved from another bank. The bank owners thought it might have been a bad idea to move all that money with the crime rate the way it is. But there seemed to be nothing suspicious going on, so the bank owners decided to just lean back and relax, and not worry about the situation.
As the bank was running as usual, five heavily armored black vans drove up as everyone on the street stopped and looked or even glanced at the suspicious looking vehicles as they stopped in front of the bank and stayed parked there. Several policemen were standing outside of the bank as they looked over at the vans with the painted windows. The four cops around the bank gestured people to stand back as they walked forward as th
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.44
A/N: This chapter take place during "The Next Step". Enjoy.
Salem's Domain:
A pool of black slime in a dark red and purple land. A large paw emerges from within the slime and a Beowolf gradually crawls out, slime sliding off of it and onto the ground.
Several more dipictions of Beowolves and other Grimm being 'born' out of such pools. The land that surrounds it is mostly dark and desolate land made up of red ground, purple crystals, and a red and black clouded sky.
From the place windows in the middle of the area, Mercury and Emerald are looking out a window, watching from inside a high building. Emerald has her hand to her mouth while Mercury seems slightly disgusted. A gloved hand appears between two purple crystal formations and snaps its fingers.
A large windowed room, at the center of which is a long purple, crystal table. Four people sit at the table with seven chairs. One of them is Cinder. Emerald and Mercury move away from the window.
A man wa
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.43 Part II
Top of the Beacon Tower:
Cinder lands on her front and, as she slides, she pushes off the floor to get back on her feet and perform a back-handspring. Her smirk turns into a look of slight concern upon the sight of Pyrrha charging forward to slam her shield into Cinder's abdomen and push her over. As Cinder stumbles backwards, Pyrrha hits Cinder's right hand with the blunt end of her spear, then slashes Cinder's left hand with the spear's blade. She then spins around and slashes across Cinder's abdomen and legs.
Pyrrha spins around to attack again, but Cinder performs a backflip whilst kicking Pyrrha, with flames trailing behind her foot. The kick knocks Pyrrha into the air, and Pyrrha quickly rights herself. She flips her spear in her grip, holds it back, and then tosses it toward Cinder while firing the gun mechanism. Six fireballs appear around Cinder again, but they dissipate when Cinder backhands the spear away. Pyrrha's shield then flies toward her, and she hits
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.43 Part I
A/N: This takes place around during the events of 'End of the Beginning'.
The darkened corridor of the Vault under Beacon. Only flashes of green and vermilion are illuminated in the darkness. More flashes are shown as Ozpin and Cinder Fall clash weapons against each other. After a clash, Cinder slides back, using her hand to melt the floor below her, and summons ice crystals from the newly-formed substance, hurling them towards Ozpin. Ozpin deflects them all by moving at superhuman speed, and then darts forward and delivers a bunch of strikes at Cinder with his cane, with the last blow launching her back. Cinder then floats mid air by unleashing her Maiden power. Ozpin then slams his cane into the floor, forming a spherical force-field around him. Cinder then unleashes a powerful fire blast, with Ozpin leaping into the attack with the barrier protecting him. As he closes in on her.
Beacon: The Docks
Back out to the docks outside of Beacon
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Crowman
A/N: This story was written back in 2014 when I was still a noob to writing. Much of it is choppy and obviously borrowing a TON from Batman. But I thought it would be a shame for a story to go to waste. I hope you enjoy it.
It was nighttime in Sleep City. On a tall skyscraper there stood a man who is wearing a cape made out of black feathers, a titanium plague doctors mask with a black hood and red goggles, a suit that is made out of titanium as well that is a very dull or dark red color, and a pitch black crow symbol on his chest. He is the black vigilante, he is the phobia of all criminals, he is the flying dark spirit of the night, he is Crowman. The Crowman then received a police transmission from his radio transmitter in his mask as he listened.
*Come in all units! All units come in! The Taxidermist is at city hall holding Mayor Shay and at least six more people hostage, at least fifty men with guns are in the building armed and extremely dangerous!*
“Well that doesn&
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SharkMan: Predatory Pandemonium
A/N: Real quick before you read the story, just know this particular story was written in 2016 and isn't up to the best of writing standards nowadays for me. People who watch me most know me for my Ed Edd n Eddy and RWBY crossover FanFiction, but I would honestly like to move beyond that and start a comic book series with superheroes. This is one of the only stories I've written, and I hope you enjoy it.
It was daytime in Florida Miami where it was like any other day, where the superhero known as SharkMan fights off gangs, punks, dirty law enforcement, and other troubles of Miami. Theo Fisher was walking down the streets of Miami, having brown hair, blue eyes,and in his regular untucked baby blue button up shirt, white pants, and black shoes. He was carrying a suitcase full of marine life data, since he’s a marine biologist and all. As he was walking he looked around the city and saw a high number of men who were in sleeveless ripped leather jackets with a green paint
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.42 Part II
Beacon Elsewhere:
As the battle raged on between Ed-Zilla, King Sam, and the Grimm Dragon they all continued to fight. The Grimm Dragon and Salty Sam biting down on Ed-Zilla as Ed-Zilla roared in pain. He soon smacked the two monsters away as he was prepared for their next fight, Ed-Zilla grabbed the Dragon by the throat as he slammed it into the ground. The Dragon picked itself up as it started to breathe a powerful beam of fire at Ed-Zilla, knocking him into a large classroom of Beacon as the Dragon turned back around to continue it's fight with King Sam. Ed-Zilla picked himself back up as he looked around in the classroom he was thrown into. It was Dust class, giving him an idea. Back outside, King Sam and the Grimm Dragon were still fighting it out as the Dragon was breathing fire on Sam. But King Sam simply used the heavily platted armor on his back to block the flames as he turned back around and continued swiping at the beast with his claws. But as they were abo
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.42 Part I
A/N: This takes place around during the events of 'Heroes and Monsters'. I'd like to thank Lord Maximus for his help with this chapter. Enjoy.
Atlasian Airship:
the Dragon flies past the hijacked Atlesian Airship, as Ruby looks on, with the surrounding Griffons roaming the skies. A Griffon lands on the airship, but Ruby easily cuts it down with Crescent Rose, causing to disintegrate into black particles. But suddenly, she hears a snap, turning to see Neopolitan, now changing into her standard attire with a wave of light washing over her from bottom to top, as she winks after taking a picture of Ruby, sending it to a certain crime lord with the following text:
"Guess Who?"
"Oh, you can not be serious!" Said Roman as having realized his old foe is interfering yet again, the wanted criminal quickly picks up Melodic Cudgel and walks up to the top of the airship.
Beacon:
Right outside of Beacon's dining hall, Blake Belladonna backs away fro
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.41
A/N: This chapter take place during 'Battle of Beacon'. Enjoy.
The Fairgrounds:
The fairgrounds in chaos as civilians run away from the hordes of Grimm and the corpses. Atlesian Knight's are seen firing at the monsters of both varieties, and a vendor hides behind his booth when a group of Ursai run past. Blake and Weiss are then watching in horror of everything going on around them. Civilians continue to flee as Grimm continue to run amok, along with a couple trying to run away from a corpse that's chasing them on all fours as it tackles the man of the couple to the ground and starts mauling him, and a dead Creep on the ground starts to dissipate.
"I don't believe this..." Said Weiss looking around in horror, as she then remembers. "Eddy! We need to find him Blake!" Yelled Weiss turning to her Faunus friend as Blake pulls out her Scroll.
"Yang, are you okay?" Yang was running down the hallways of Beacon with Zwei as she answered.
"I'm fine. Is Ruby wit
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.40
A/N: This chapter take place during 'PvP'. Enjoy.
Ozpin's Office:
Professor Ozpin was walking back to his desk and pouring himself a drink from his teapot as he watches the Vytal Festival Tournament's roulette system deciding the next match.
"Alright, it's now time to begin the randomization process for our next fight!" Said Oobleck over the broadcast.
"It looks like our first contender is... Penny Polendina, from Atlas! And her opponent will be... Pyrrha Nikos, from Beacon!" Said Port as Ozpin seats himself behind his desk and takes a sip from his cup as he stares at the "randomized" fight to be.
Amity Colosseum:
Down in the arena of Amity Colosseum, Pyrrha is still looking hesitant and distracted while Penny politely salutes her opponent.
"Sal-u-tations, Pyrrha Nikos! It's an honor to finally meet you!" Said Penny, hands on her hips in excitement. The troubled Pyrrha doesn't respond, looking at her hands as she clenches them in attem
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.39
A/N: This chapter take place during 'Beginning of the End'. Enjoy.
Evil Tim's Lair:
It was already thirty minutes after Evil Tim messed with Ed's mind causing him to go on a rampage and getting arrested afterwards. Along with Double D, though, that was only Adam's doing. In the abandoned underground tunnels, the corpses installed a lighting system as several other corpses that were working for the big attack along with several Hybrids (Cyborg Grimm monsters that work for Evil Tim) hanging around and even doing some heavy lifting to complete the projects. In operation area, where everyone was standing there, including Daniel, Oxford, Salty Sam, Evil Tim, and Jib.
"Now that fool has been dealt with, we can move onto the next phase of our operations." Said Evil Tim as everyone around him was paying attention as Sam started to grow a bit angry
"Yeah... But now since Ed's imprisoned, it's gonna be a little harder for me to kill him." Said Sam.
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.38
A/N: This chapter take place during 'Fall'. Enjoy.
Ozpin's Office: The Next Day
Professor Ozpin is seated behind his desk across from Pyrrha, as the last rays of twilight come through the clock-decorated windows.
"Well, it comes as no surprise that they've chosen you to move on to the final round of the tournament. Your performance was exemplary." Said Ozpin as he gestures with his cane.
"Thank you, Professor Ozpin, but I would have never made it this far without my teammates." Said Pyrrha
"Personally, I think it's the other way around." Said Qrow from his spot leaning against a column in the back of the room, arms crossed.
"I'm sorry, but I don't believe we've been introduced." Said Pyrrha turning to him.
"Name's Qrow."
"Qrow is a trusted colleague of mine." Said Ozpin.
"Professor, if you don't mind me asking, why have you called me here?" Asked Pyrrha as she looks at Qrow for another moment before addressing her teacher again.
"Please,
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.37
A/N: This chapter take place during 'Never Miss a Beat'. And I would like to thank CollinGames for his OC's in this chapter. I will link his Fanfiction account below, Team FADE belongs to him. Enjoy.
RWBY's Dorm: In the Morning
As the sun peeked through the windows of team RWBY's dorm, Ruby hopped out of bed while Blake and Yang crawled out of bed. Ruby was already excited to see what's going to happen in the tournaments today. Ruby could barely contain her excitement as she walked to the door along with Blake and Yang. But Ruby stopped as she looked back at Weiss' bed to see that there was still a lump under the sheets, with a smile she dashed over to the sheets as she grabbed the sheets and ripped them off as she said.
"Rise and shine Wei-" But Ruby stopped as she looked at what was in the bed "Eh?..."
Eddy was sleeping in the middle of the bed snoring in his pajamas just waking up was Weiss very irritated, as she glare
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.36
A/N: This chapter take place during 'Lessons Learned'.
Amity ColosseumThe Next Day
The crowd in the Colosseum went absolutely wild as they sat down and watched the giant holographic screen go through it's double round randomization process.
"The randomization process is complete! Ladies and gentlemen, your doubles tournament fight!" Announced Port and as the announcement is heard, RWBY cheers with arms raised, EEE sitting next to team RWBY is giving their own round of applause and cheering, KRJ (Kevin, Rolf, and Jonny) were giving a round of applause as well with Rolf eating a hot dog, JNPR providing a round of applause as well, and SSSN is shown sitting in front row seats. Bolin and Nolan are talking to each other behind RWBY, Harvy and Opal are sitting behind EEE talking, and Dove is sitting behind JNPR. Cinder is standing in the rows of seats, now watching her teammates as she menacingly claps with a devious smirk si
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.35 Part II
A/N: Here's Part II of Chapter 35.
Beacon Courtyard: 
During 'It's a brawl in the Family'.
Weiss, Eddy, and Ruby were running up the main avenue towards the docking bays.
"Weiss just hold it, will ya? Who is she supposed to be?" Asked Eddy as he and Ruby caught up to Weiss.
"Winter." Said Weiss as she stops and smiles at the sight of the woman exiting the airship.
"Wait... Your sister?" Asked Ruby as Eddy stared in surprise, though how Weiss talked about Winter, he was definitely going to be cautious... Considering it was very similar how he would talk about his brother.
"Winter!" Yelled Weiss cupping her hands around her mouth as this caught the older woman's attention. The three students ran up to the woman as Weiss was still calling out to her.
"Winter! I'm so happy to see you! Oh..." Said Weiss pausing as the three approached her.
"Your presence honors us." Said Weiss suddenly curtsies.
Winter silently looked around Beacon as she then spoke. "Beacon...
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The MisEdventures of RWBY and EENE: Ch.35 Part I
A/N: This chapter take place during 'New Challengers...' and 'It's Brawl in the Family'. Enjoy.
City of Vale: During 'Round One', 'New Challengers...', and 'It's Brawl in the Family'.
Within the darker, more dingy and dangerous side of the glorious city of Vale. A man walks down the dungy streets with a comic book in his hands. 'The Curse of Evil Tim' it read. It would be unusual indeed for this man to be reading it, but he wasn't reading this for fun. He was doing his own investigating. Since he knows Ozpin and the other authority figures of the Atlas military and teachers of the academy were hiding something big from him. And he didn't like it when he's kept in the dark. Baron Semdi already looked over the comic book he got from Ed over a billion times and had no leads. But from what he read in the comic book... He usually manipulates others into helping him, like in the book how he manipulates others to get what he wants either fr
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It was a bright and sunny day in New York City. More specifically in lower Manhatten where the JPMorgan bank was located. It was just a normal day at the bank with people walking in and out of the building. But today was different, today the bank just received 2,000,000 dollars as it was moved from another bank. The bank owners thought it might have been a bad idea to move all that money with the crime rate the way it is. But there seemed to be nothing suspicious going on, so the bank owners decided to just lean back and relax, and not worry about the situation.

As the bank was running as usual, five heavily armored black vans drove up as everyone on the street stopped and looked or even glanced at the suspicious looking vehicles as they stopped in front of the bank and stayed parked there. Several policemen were standing outside of the bank as they looked over at the vans with the painted windows. The four cops around the bank gestured people to stand back as they walked forward as they pulled their pistols out. Aiming them at the vans as they walked closer.

"Hello? Whoever the driver is, step out of the vehicles!" Commanded the lead cop. But nothing happened as the cops slowly inched closer.

"Sir! Step out of the vehicles now!" Yelled the same cop as the cop on his left put his gun away and pulled out his nightstick as the cops inched closer.

"Get out of the vehicles or WE WILL BASH THOSE BLACKENED WINDOWS OUT!" Yelled the cop with the nightstick. As the cops inched closer, they stopped as the windows started to inch down. The police stopped as the van they were inching closer to left window rolled down a quarter of an inch, as the only thing that could be seen in the van was blackness.

But as the lead cop was about to speak, the barrel to a shotgun poked out of the crack and shot the lead cop.

(Bam!)

Right after that first shot, the crowd that started to gather retreated and started to run away as the windows from the rest of the vans started to roll down their windows and started to shoot at the rest of the cops with a hail of bullets.

(Bam! Bang! Tatta! Ratta! Bam! Bang! Tatta! Ratta! Bam! Bang! Tatta! Ratta! Bam! Bang! Tatta! Ratta!)

As all the cops dropped down dead, the people in the cars stopped firing as smoke seeped out of their barrels. Another moment passed before a much larger truck painted black pulled in as it started to position itself to aim directly in front of the bank.

Inside the bank, the bank tellers, the security guards, and the innocent people inside the bank were all on the ground after their windows were blown out by the gunfire. Several of them started to peek out only to see a huge truck shining it's headlights into the bank. One bank teller looked on in total shock.

"Is that- IS THAT A TRUCK!?" Yelled the bank teller, but before anyone could do anything else the truck drove straight at the bank at full power as it rammed through the front of the bank.

(KRASH!)

Glass, metal, and dust was everywhere as everyone in the bank were coughing or groaning in pain as some of them were unlucky enough to come in contact with the truck as it rammed through the front.

After that, the cop sirens could already be heard in the distance as the doors to the vans opened up as thugs in heavy body armor carrying military grade weapons and wearing different types of bulky masks. Many of them were cartoon demon masks, pig masks, nun masks, and white blank masks.

"Alright! Go! Go! Go!" Yelled one of the thugs as all of them managed to make their way into the bank.

As they made their way in, several security guards stood up as they pulled out their guns to try and stop the robbers.

"Hey! Stop or I'll-"

(Pow!)

The cop wasn't able to finish as a bullet silenced him. The security guards who managed to shoot several of the robbers still stood due to their body armor. Only two more security guards stood, standing on the other side of the room as they dashed forward with their guns locked on the robbers. But as they were about to shoot...

(FROOSH!)

Suddenly a blast of cold energy came out of nowhere and immediately froze the two security guards.

"Geez... these pigs never learn. Probably should'a become mall cops. They'd probably still be breathing if they were." Said the voice of a man as all the thugs looked over to see a man standing there beside the swinging open door of the massive truck. The man stood around 5'6 tall and wore a skin tight white and blue body suit with icicle designs all over it. White pieces of armor was strapped to his wrists, legs, and shoulders with white gloves and boots. The man had white fur around his collar with the only part of him exposed was his face. He was a Caucasian male with short brown hair, a go-tee, and a small scar under his right eye.

"Alright boys, let's get to work!" Said the man as he reached for his neck and grabbed the white mask around his neck as he pulled it up and over his head. Wearing a completely white mask that covered his entire face except for two eye-holes.

"Okay Sid- Wait! Wait! I didn't mean it! I didn't mea- AAAGH!" Screamed one of the thugs as he was frozen solid in a block of ice as the man in white held out his hand to him.

"I will say this only once... if ANY OF YOU MORONS CALL ME BY MY REAL NAME OR CALL EACH OTHER BY YOUR REAL NAMES I WILL NOT HESITATE THROWING YOU IN THE COOLER! UNDERSTAND!?" Yelled the man in white as they thugs fearfully nodded.

"My name is Snow-Strike... now, you four come with me to get the money! The rest of you keep your eyes out for the pigs. If they start getting nosy, start killing hostages." Said Snow-Strike as he and four other thugs walked deeper into the bank as the rest of the thugs were yelling as they got the rest of the people in the bank and started gagging and putting blindfolds around their eyes.

Soon, outside the bank police cars started to gather as cops set up a line and aimed their guns at the bank as the SWAT trucks just arrived. 

The negotiator stepped up as he looked around and inspected the situation in the bank through the windows. He couldn't see everything clearly but he could see that there were around fifteen hostages and six or more hostiles. Probably more. The negotiator looked over to his left at two other cops, one older and more experienced and one younger who looked like he only joined the police force a few months ago.

"You got any info?" Asked the negotiator to the older cop.

"Yeah, a bit. The assailants drove a truck into the bank and started taking guards, civilians, and staff hostage. With one confirmed fatality of a security guard. We believe that the assailants are in possession of advanced weaponry." Said the older cop.

"What kind of advanced?" Asked the negotiator as he started to ready his megaphone.

"One of the witnesses passing by during the attack said he saw a man in some kind of white suit freeze another assailant in a block of ice. Very advanced and dangerous." Said the older cop.

"Okay, first we'll-" But before the negotiator could respond, a flurry of bullets and gunfire started coming from the bank as the assailants started to open fire. The artillery they were using was so deadly and advanced that the bullets cut through the cop cars and SWAT vans like tissue paper.

(Bam! Bang! Tatta! Ratta! Bam! Bang! Tatta! Ratta! Bam! Bang! Tatta! Ratta! Bam! Bang! Tatta! Ratta!)

(BOOM! BOOM!)

As the gunfire rained down, two of the multiple cop cars exploded as police, SWAT members, and nearby civilians hit the ground. As the gunfire started to calm down, they police could hear the voice of one of the thugs yell out.

"LISTEN HERE PIGS! OUR WEAPONS ARE TOP QUALITY! IF YOU COPS DON'T BACK OFF WE'LL CUT YOU TO PIECES! AND IF WE SEE ANY SIGN OF SOME SWAT TRYING TO SNEAK IN, WE'LL KILL THE HOSTAGES AND ALL OF YOU! GOT IT!?" Yelled one of the thugs as the cops slowly started to pick themselves back up and look around at all the damage caused by the gunfire, and the injured cops and civilians being carried away.

"It's worse than we thought... With weapons like those, I don't know how we can-" But as the negotiator was about to speak, he and the surrounding cops heard a gush of wind as the negotiator stopped mid-sentence as all three of the cops felt a presence behind them.

"Don't worry, tell your men to fall back and get any other civilian in the zone of danger back. I will take care of it." Said a strong yet gentle and wise voice from behind the police. As the three turn their heads, they saw an 8'0 tall giant of a man in slick and shining metal armor, that very much resembled the modern equivalent of a knight. His chest had the red symbol of a dragon with it's wings spread out and his head pointed to the side with it's mouth open. The man was completely covered in armor, except for his reptilian wings, tail, and visor that revealed his orange slit reptile-like eyes. His hands ended in claws and has a holster for a large sword attached to his hip, and is wearing a helmet with two metal horn-like protrusions jutting out behind his head.

Before any of the police could reply, the man walked past them and walked up to the bank all by himself. As the three stared stunned, they quickly broke from their gazes as the negotiator spoke into his radio to tell the chef that they need to fall back. The younger cop still stared at the man clad in armor as he walked towards the bank. The older cop looked over at the younger one and spoke.

"So, I guess this is the first time you saw him in person, huh?"

"W-wait-! So you mean that's really-!?"

"Yes. He's DragonMan." Said the older cop as a second passed.

"Wow... He's bigger than I thought." Said the younger cop.

As the police pulled back, DragonMan stepped forward as the thugs looked out of the shattered windows and aimed their weapons.

"Hey, hey! What's going on here!?" Yelled one of the thugs.

"Don't you know who this is!? This is DragonMan you idiot!" Yelled another thug.

"So what!? Didn't you see what our weapons just did to that line of cops and SWAT!? We can take down this freak!" Yelled the first thug.

"Listen!" Said DragonMan as the thugs turned to face him continuing to walk forward. "I don't want there to be any more bloodshed then there has already been. This is your only warning, lie down your weapons and get on the ground or I will take things into my own hands."

"Are you suicidal or something!? Shoot him!" Yelled one of the thugs as the assailants aimed their weapons at DragonMan and started firing. But as the bullets headed straight towards DragonMan bounced off his armor as he dashed forwards at blinding speeds and smashed his way into the bank with pieces of the wall and dust flying everywhere.

"What the-!? Oof!" Groaned one of the thugs as DragonMan kicked him back and flew into the wall as DragonMan looked back at his other opponents as he easily one shoted all of them with punches and kicks as he caused them to fly through the air and grabbed one by the head and planted his face into the ground. As one of the thugs charged at DragonMan from behind, letting out a battle cry and shooting at him wildly was smacked back by DragonMan's tail as the thug flew into another wall.

As DragonMan was finished with the thugs, he knew there was one left as he yelled at DragonMan who was faced away from him.

"Hey! Freakshow! Your gonna let me leave or she dies!" DragonMan turned around with a calm expression as he saw the last thug holding a woman hostage with one hand and pressing the barrel of his gun against her skull with the other. 

"... Cowardly." Mumbled DragonMan as the man visibly got angrier and DragonMan raised his finger as the metal around his finger started to become red hot with a small flame blooming from the top of it. As the thug was about to pull the trigger, DragonMan flicked his burning finger as a small wave of fire dashed forward and swiftly cut the thugs assault rifle in two.

"What the hell-?!" Yelled the thug as his weapon started to become red hot itself as the thug dropped the ruined weapon as the woman ran away and DragonMan dashed forward and punched out the thug, knocking out his teeth. As the thug hit the floor, DragonMan looked over at the woman he just saved.

"Is there any more?" Asked DragonMan.

"I umm... Oh yeah, three went into the back. I think their in the vault." Said the woman.

"Okay, you and everyone else get yourselves out of here. The police are already nearby." Said DragonMan as the woman nodded and started to leave along with all the other hostages. As DragonMan was about to go into the back, he stepped on one of the rifles used as he reached down and picked up the advanced assault rifle and inspected it's craft.

"This gun seems familiar..." But as DragonMan looked as the side of the weapon, he saw something that made his eyes widen.

"What? No... how did these criminals even get a hold of these?" Asked DragonMan as he read the inscription on the gun that read 'Knight Corp'. As DragonMan read the inscription, he looked to his left to see one of the assailants sealed in a block of ice. As DragonMan was just about to guess who or what could've done something like this, he heard the sudden and loud sound of crystallizing monolithic ice shards charging forward. Right as DragonMan looked up the massive ice shards hit him right in the abdomen and sent him flying back out of the bank.

(SMASH!)

Ice shards grew and broke out of the bank as DragonMan was knocked into mid-air and fell on one of the remaining cop cars, crushing the top.

"I hoped this lizard wouldn't show up..." Said Snow-Strike as he walked out of the bank and held a fat bag of cash in each hand. "I didn't want this to drag out... But I will kill anyone who's stupid enough to get in my way."

Snow-Strike dropped his bags of money as the two final thugs ran over to Snow-Strike and stood by his side as DragonMan started to pick himself back up from the wreaked cop car.

"I'm not giving you a chance!" Yelled Snow-Strike as he dropped the bags and held his hands in front of him as he started to fire razor sharp ice shards out of his hands with the velocity of bullets. DragonMan blocked the attack with his arms as he started to charged forward towards Snow-Strike as he moved in a zig-zag motion to try and throw off the villains aim.

As DragonMan got to him, DragonMan swung his fists to try and get a hit on him. But Snow-Strike managed to dodge most of the heroes attacks, but as DragonMan pulled his fist back to land another hit, Snow-Strike held his hands in the air and quickly materialized a massive ice club that weighed about several tons. But using the momentum of his arms, Snow-Strike brought it down on DragonMan's head as the club shattered.

(CRASH!)

As DragonMan was disoriented from the hit, Snow-Strike brought both hands together to his left as he formed a massive ice axe as he used his momentum to swing the massive ice axe at DragonMan who flew back and into the building nearby.

(WHOOP!)

(SMASH!)


"And to actually think I took you seriously for a moment!" Yelled Snow-Strike as he aimed his palms to the ground to create a safe ice tower he stood on that was about twenty feet tall. As he looked at the hole in the wall that he knocked DragonMan through, he laughed as he aimed his palms forward and started going full force as he unleashed everything and assaulted the hole with extremely cold air that could freeze anything and thousands of razor sharp ice shards that could cut a brick in two. But as Snow-Strike continued to fire, he noticed DragonMan who was stepping forward through the barrage of cold air and ice with the arms he held in front of his face and the rest of him starting to be covered in ice. Snow-Strike just intensified his deadly barrage as the hero was about to be frozen over soon.

But as it appeared like it was about to be the end of DragonMan, his eyes opened up as they glowed with intense and powerful flames leaking from them. Snow-Strike started to notice this as the smile under his mask started to face.

"What!? What's going on?!" That's when DragonMan's entire body started to erupt in flames as it instantly melted all the ice away and completely shielded DragonMan from Snow-Strikes barrage. DragonMan then spread his arms as he released a massive burst of flames that annihilated Snow-Strikes cold blast and blew him back.

(FRUSH!)

The villains stumbled a bit on his ice structure before looking back down at DragonMan, who looked at Snow-Strike with an angry expression.

"No! How did he do that!? What in the-" But before Snow-Strike could finish his sentence DragonMan charged forward and punched the ice structure Snow-Strike made once as it shattered into a hundred pieces as Snow-Strike fell down where DragonMan knocked him back with one punch as the villain was sent flying to the ground.

DragonMan walked up to the defeated villain as he grabbed him by the collar of his costume and lifted him up off the ground as the villains feet dangled off the ground helplessly. Being eye-to-eye with the knight.

"If you like to talk so much, tell me, where did you get your weaponized suit from?" Asked DragonMan as the beaten villain caughed a bit before laughing.

"I guess it's time for plan B." Said Snow-Strike as he used his left finger to press a button on his right hand, making a beeping sound.

"What are you planning? What ar-" But DragonMan was interrupted mid-sentence as he heard a creaking metal noise from behind him. He looked behind him to see the trailer connected to the truck that crashed into the bank rock back and forth as the metal on is started to bend. As the metal on the trailer looked like it was about to reach it's limit... The black trailer burst open as something big jumped from the shattered trailer and into the air before landing on the road.

As the dust cleared, DragonMan, the surrounding cops, and the semi-conscious Snow-Strike saw what that mysterious thing was. The best way to describe it was call it a spider tank, it was massive with four legs and multiple artillery weaponry on top of it, including a large turret in the middle. It possessed four red robotic eyes in front of it as it locked onto DragonMan.

DragonMan growled as he placed the defeated villain on the ground before standing back up and walking in the middle of the road to stare down the robot. The robot locked on it's machine guns at DragonMan who leaped out of the way and jumped fifty feet into the air and on the side of a building as the robot followed and continued to shoot at DragonMan who ran across the side of the building before leaping off and blasting several balls of fire right at the robot from his hands.

(FRUSH! FRUSH!)

But it barely slowed down the robot as DragonMan landed on the road as he dashed towards the robot once again. The robot turned to face DragonMan as it released around twenty heat-seeking missiles as DragonMan's eyes widened as the missiles headed towards him. But he continued to run forward as he expertly dodged many of the missiles as he charged at the spider tank. But as he got close, the robot lifted one of it's front legs and hit DragonMan as he flew sideways. Splitting a car in two with how fast he was flying and crashing into another building.

(CRASH!)

But as DragonMan looked back up from where he was sent flying, he saw the heat-seeking missiles were still heading for him. DragonMan acted fast as he stood up and spun around as he ran up the building he crashed into as the missiles followed him. As DragonMan made it to the top, he spread his wings as he flew into the sky with all the missiles following. He continued to fly as he looked back as the missiles as he threw his right hand at them and blasted a blaze of fire at them as all the missiles blew up in mid air. But as that problem was taken care of, an unnaturally powerful blast of air hit DragonMan as he started to spiral out of control and fly towards the ground. But as DragonMan was spiraling out of control, he caught sight of the robot with an experimental weapon on it that was meant to fire air currents at hyperspeed to destroy aircraft's. He recognized it.

As DragonMan headed towards the ground, he used his jet blasts on his hands to make sure he crashes right in front of the robot.

(CROOSH!)

DragonMan landed right in front of the robot and amazingly manage to land on his feet as he grabbed the robot by one of it's legs as he lifted the twenty ton robot into the air and started to spin it around and around with incredible strength, before letting go and making it fly down the road as the flying robot crashed through cars, lamp poles, bits of the road, and more before finally stopping and landing on top of it's back. The robot's legs wiggled around a little like a bug or turtle that was placed on it's back and can't move anymore.

But the robot managed to get back on it's legs as it was scratched up and badly damaged. It looked around for a second before spotting DragonMan again who was standing several dozen feet down the road from it. The robot started to target DragonMan again as DragonMan reached for his side and grabbed the hilt of the sword on his side before pulling the straight sword out and aim it at the robot. The robot readied it's massive turret as it locked on DragonMan. A moment passed before DragonMan charged forward. The robot started to fire it's machine guns as DragonMan swung his sword as the speed of sound as he blocked every single bullet from touching him.

(RATATATARATATATA! RATATATARATATATA! RATATATARATATATA! RATATATARATATATA!)

The turret was ready as the spider tank fired the tank shell straight at DragonMan. But as the shell was heading straight at DragonMan, he just cut the shell in half as he continued to charge forward and swing his blade. DragonMan was standing right behind the robot as he faced away from it and panted as he and the robot stood there for a second. But after another second, the robot split in half and fell on the ground.

(...Shreek! Blunk!)

As DragonMan stood there, he turned back around to face the robot as he placed his sword back into it's holder as he walked forward. DragonMan crouched down as he started to examine the robot, he definitely recognized the design and that experimental wind cannon that was used on him. He reached down and ripped out one of the red eyes of the robot as he examined it, hoping that the name of the company wasn't what he believe it was.

"Knight Corp, just like the guns... How did they get a hold of this technology? I'll do some more research back at the lair." Said DragonMan as he stood back up and looked back around the ruined street as police and SWAT started to enter the area, as DragonMan looked over and saw Snow-Strike getting pulled up onto his feet by police as he got handcuffs slapped on him and walked him to the police cars. DragonMan gave the cops and the ravaged battlefield one last look before spreading his wings and flying away.

The Dragon Lair:

DragonMan flew through the air and over the ocean, only a mile away from the city itself as he came across a few tiny islands only off the coast of Manhattan with the biggest island having a huge mansion on top of it with only a bridge connecting it to Manhattan. As DragonMan flew around, he looked down and searched all around the water as he finally spotted the dark hole in the seabed floor. He stopped hovered over the ocean for a moment before folding his wings and diving into the water and through the black hole. He uses his tail to propel him faster and faster through the narrow hole as the tunnel had never ending twists and turns as DragonMan continued to swim faster and faster as DragonMan finally spotted a light in front of him as he swims even faster as instantly all the water around him disappeared as his momentum carried him through the exit of the hole and out of the tunnel. The exit led DragonMan to the Dragon Lair as he spread his wings and lightly made his way down to the many large and expansive reinforced catwalks that held computers, and elevator, tables filled with science equipment, shelves upon shelves filled with equipment and more.

DragonMan walked to the center piece of the catwalks where his computer, table and cabinets of files and leads, case where he keeps his armor, and medical table with supplies are located. The lair was filled with lighting from down below where the lava was located, but it didn't fill up the lair with deadly gases or an insane amount of heat that would melt anything. As DragonMan continued to walk forward, he spotted an old woman who was around her mid 50's with black pants and a tuxedo on. Clearly a butler with her brown and white hair tied up in a bun with an annoyed look on her face as she stared at DragonMan who continued to walk forward.

"How was your day today, Master William? You look like you just went through a blender." Commented the butler with a french accent as she stood up as the rugged and damaged DragonMan walked forward as he grabbed his helmet with his hands.

"Hello, Elise. Nothing much, it was mostly the same." Said William as he took his helmet off to fully reveal his reptilian face with orange slit eyes, a head more similarly shaped to a dinosaur rather then a human, a flat nose similar to a lizard, and row upon row of razor sharp teeth hidden under his scaly lips.

"'Nothing much' could hurt you and pierce your armor like that and cause those wounds. What happened to you?" Asked Elise in a more stern voice as William placed his helmet on a table nearby and started to take his armor off.

"A spider and a snowman." Said William ad Elise gave him a confused look as she looked over his wounds that were already rapidly healing.

"Pardon?" Asked Elise.

"It was a big mechanical spider and a criminal who somehow got a hold of a suit that manipulate ice." Said DragonMan as he continued to take his armor off.

"Well, if that didn't kill you the lava below us definitely will." Said Elise as she got some alcohol wipes and started to wipe down several of Will's larger wounds to prevent infection.

"Elise, I told you over and over. The machine below us is meant for conditions like this. It uses the heat energy from the very same lava below us to power the lair and the force field over the lava that protects us from the heat and smoke." Said Will as he took of his last piece of armor and placed it all on one table in pieces. All he was wearing now was a black skin suit that covered his whole body except for his hands, head, neck tail, and wings as he looked down at Elise.

"Besides, I got something that's far more troublesome than lava." Said Will as he pulled out the same red robotic eye he took from the spider tank and held it up to Elise could see, reading 'Knight Corp.' on the side.

"Where did you get that?" Asked Elise as DragonMan walked over and placed it on the side of the large computer as he spoke. "It was one of the eyes of the robot I fought, they also had advanced firearms with the Knight Corp name on it as well."

DragonMan then shrank down as his reptilian features became more human with his tail and wings retracting into his backside with his scales turning into human skin with Will's hair growing back until he completely transformed back into a human. Even as a Human, Will stood around 6'1 tall. He was Caucasian, in very fit condition, around his early to mid 30's, had puffy black wedge-shaped sideburns, long black slickback hair with several patches sticking up that give the appearance of small spines, green eyes, and had a face with years of experience on it.

"Well, that's not good. You've only been doing this for three years to try and bring honor to your parents. Doing your vigilante work and trying to run the Knight Corp industry as officiantly as you could to honor them as much as you could. If it gets out that these criminals used weapons from your company, it could all be ruined. Plus, many more innocent people can get hurt or even die because of these hooligans." Said Elise as William sat in his computer chair and started to type away on it.

"Yes... when they passed, they left their company in my hands... and... and..." William began to trail off as his typing on his computer became slower and slower. A visible look of sadness was on Will's face as he looked at his computer screen. As Will began to remember back to the day where he saw the life drain away from his parents and died right in front of him. As he continued to reminisce, Will felt a hand on his shoulder as he continued to look at the computer screen.

"I miss them too, and I promised them that I will never leave your side." Said Elise as Will closed his eyes and nodded his head before looking back up at his computer and continued to type away, pulling up Knight Corp files of weapons that were still in the experimental stages. As he than pulled up folders with the picture of the same black rifles the thugs were using and the spider tank that he fought.

"The DH-845, a semi-automatic rifle that can hold 300 rounds of ammunition with specially designed bullets that can pierce right through a tank. And the Crawler-3S6 Model-6, a specially designed tank with the ability to travel through any type of terrain, crawl up vertical surfaces, able to recognize and adapt to threats, and equipped with the best artillery weapons along with an experimental air cannon that blasts guest of air that are meant to take down planes. These weapons are still in the experimental stages, it's impossible for anyone to get a hold of them." Said William as he pulled out a drawer on the side as he reached in and pulled out a cigar, putting it in his mouth and using a lighter to light up the end of it.

"Impossible for anyone who's not working at Knight Corp. Only high class personnel have access to that level of weaponry. As much as I hate to say it, there might be a traitor among the personnel." Said Elise as William stood back up form his chair and walked over to the same table where he left his damage armor at, as he looked beside them to see a pile of neat folded clothes and shoes as William picked them up and started to change.

"I agreed. I'll do some investigation on the stolen weapons later. But for now, It's time for William Knight to shine." Said William as he finished putting on the red tie to his white button up shirt as he heard ringing beside him. Will looked over to see his phone on the table ringing as he reached for it and picked it up and answered the call.

"Hello?" Asked William.

"WILL! WHERE ARE YOU!? You were scheduled to meet with General Earnest Powers and other military high-ranking personnel today and give them a tour around Knight Labs! You were supposed to be here twenty minutes ago! What kept you so long!?" Yelled a woman's voice on the other end of the phone.

"I'm sorry, Valerie. Must've forgotten the meeting, I was tangled up with something earlier." Said Will.

"How in the world do you keep forgetting important meetings like-... Nevermind, you need to be here within ten minutes or else we can kiss that military contract goodbye." Said Valerie.

"Don't worry Valerie, I'll be there." Said Will as he hung up and placed the phone in his pocket at he walked over to the elevator with Elise following him.

"You know, you can't keep doing this do her. She is your assistant after all." Commented Elise as both walked into the elevator.

"It's not easy to balance vigilante work with being the CEO of a massive company you know. But I've known Valerie for a long time, she will calm down. Perhaps I'll take her out for coffee after the meeting." Said Will as the doors to the elevator closed as Elise smiled at Will.

"Perhaps then you'll ask her the question?" Said Elise as William stared straight ahead with his straight poker face.

"... I don't know what your talking about." Said Will as the elevator went up and out of the Dragon Lair.

Unknown:

In a blank concrete room with only several pieces of old and damaged furniture spread about, there is one long table in the middle of the room with several dozen hardened criminals standing on one side was a speakerphone and two impressively built gentlemen standing on both sides of it. Many of the criminals looked a bit frightened and nervous as they stood there.

"I just heard back from what happened at the bank and the weapons... care to explain who screwed up?" Asked a disguised voice from the phonespeaker, unable to tell whether they were a man or a woman.

"Look, sir... We didn't know that DragonMan would show up, and we didn't think he would beat Daly with that ice suit... Let along that huge freaking spider tank!" Said the man in the middle of the criminals who appeared to be their leader.

"You had a simple job, get in, get the money, and get out... Daly is lucky he's in jail or else I would make an example out of him here and now. I don't give you these advanced weapons so you can loose them and constantly fail me! I NEED that money!" Growled the disguised voice over the phone in anger before taking a deep breath to compose themselves.

"Sir, look, we promise we won't fail you again, we'll be under the radar and we'll get that money for you! I promise! I'll make sure everything goes smoothly, and if that overgrown lizard shows up again... We'll kill him! I swear." Said the leader as the voice remained silent for a moment as the two gentlemen next to the phonespeaker reached down below the tables and pulled up large black brief cases as they lay them out on the table and pop open the latches, swinging the cases open to reveal a slander blue rifle and a bulky silver rifle.

"You swear? You see, I'd like to believe you... Except you didn't keep Daly and the rest of those morons of yours in line and look where they are now! You and this little pathetic gang was nothing until I showed up and gave you weapons, all I ask in return is to do what I say. But if you can't even keep your men in check, I'm afraid I can't trust you." Said the voice in an incredibly threatening tone as the faces of all the criminals, especially the leader went pale.

"Look, I-I'm sorry, okay? I'll keep an eye on my guys, we WON'T mess up again I promise! You can trust me!" Said the leader as the voice remained silent for a moment.

"Really? I can trust you? So, stealing several of the weapons I gave you and planning to take a plane out of country and sell them for a fortune is the definition of trust to you?" Asked the voice as the leader gained a look of absolute terror on his face.

"But... wait, how did-... look, it's not what you think. I-"

"I can't deal with any of your bull@#$% anymore... Now, pay close attention..." Said the voice as the gentleman on the right reached down and picked up the slender blue rifle as he aimed it at the leader of the gang. Before the leader or any of the criminals could've reacted, the man pulled the trigger and shot a bolt of lightning straight at the leader as it borrowed a hole in his chest.

(Craka-Pew!)

The leader then fell on his knees with the smoking hole in his chest, before falling flat on his face as all the criminals and the two gentlemen looked down at the corpse with surprised and shocked expressions. A moment of silence passed before the voice spoke up.

"What was that? Which gun did you use?" Asked the voice.

"Uhh... the blue one." Said the man on the right who was unsure of himself.

"... You were SUPPOSED to use the silver air rifle NOT the blue lightning rifle. I just wanted to scare him and keep him in line, NOT to kill him! *Sigh*... Now we're short another man." Said the voice as the right gentlemen placed the blue cannon back down.

"Sorry, boss." Said the gentleman.

"... Who's second in command?" Asked the voice as a younger thug stepped up who was obviously nervous and raised his hand.

"M-Me, boss...." Said the young criminal.

"Okay, your the leader of your little group now. Try to get more men, we seem to be running low on them..." Said the voice as the man on the left picked up the silver rifle and tossed it through the air at the new leader who caught it and looked down at it.

"There are three more trucks parked in the back with more weapons, I don't care how but you NEED to get that money!" Yelled the voice as all the criminals in the group gave a frightened 'Yes boss.' in unison.

"And if you see DragonMan again, I assure you, with the weapons I'm supplying you with next time you see him he will DIE. And no one will stand in my way..." Said the voice as they hung up.
The Courageous DragonMan #1
This is the first issue of my new series The Courageous DragonMan! The first hero of Origin Comics, and I really did try to write the story to the best of my abilities. I'm honestly looking for some honest critics to try and help me improve my work. So don't be afraid to tell my any criticism you may have with the story, I want to make my writing as perfect as possible. Thanks for reading.
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I am done with RWBY. I guess you could say it was the last few episodes of Volume 6 that really got under my skin and got me to stop watching the show entirely. My complaint is every other complaint you've heard about RWBY... The villains are nonthreatening, the plot is nonsensical with subplots leading to nowhere, new characters just pop out of nowhere to suddenly be important to the plot, the characters are flat, boring, unlikable, and stupid, etc, etc, etc... Many of you probably know the complaints. Your also probably guessing that I stopped watching the show at Episode 12 or Episode 13 Vol 6. Yeah, I actually stopped watching at the very end of Episode 11 when that fanbaiting Bumblebee shit popped up. I honestly just stuck around to see how the Vol would end, and of course it was awful. With the disrespectful way they killed Adam to the Leviathan Grimm being one-shoted by the same giant robot that Teams RWBY and JNPR were taking on with no trouble. Miles and Kerry are idiots. They couldn't write a good and coherent story if their life depended on it. And I think they know this with the stupid idea of turning Adam into a pathetic obsessed ex-boyfriend instead of an intimidating and ruthless revolutionary who wants Faunus rights no matter the cost. They know they messed up, and yet they still refuse to admit that anything is wrong and just call anyone who tries to criticize them "jerks".

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Earlier in the show, around Vol 4 I tried reasoning with myself that Miles and Kerry just made a few mistakes and they'll get better at it as time moves on. We just finished Vol 6 and it was garbage. Miles and Kerry refuse to take criticism and they refuse to change, even lowing themselves to the point of accepting fan requests by bringing Neo back for no other reason than for fanservice and obnoxiously shoving Bumblebee down every viewers throats because the fans wanted it. Unprofessional, no writing talent, insecure, immature, and not fit to write any show, let alone RWBY. I'm done defending these two and giving them chances over and over when they constantly mess up with no remorse and no desire to do better. Although, even though Miles and Kerry are still heavily to blame for the butchering of RWBY, the fandom is kind of to blame as well. Pressuring Miles, Kerry, and the rest of the CRWBY to being back Neo along, many of them eating up whatever crap Miles and Kerry write thus encouraging them to believe the delusion that they are still good writers, and many of the RWBY fans have this cult or hive mind mentality of verbally attacking anyone who doesn't like the decisions Miles, Kerry, and the CRWBY made. Every time I shared my thoughts about it, there is always at least one person who replies with "yes and they will watch it you know why they are not crazy nitpickers and they dont base there everything to hating the show and you and this guy are not watching anymore who gives a fuck you think you are the majority of the fans or something you are not you crazy fools wont be missed" (That is the actual unedited reply this guy wrote me. I'm not joking).

If your going to leave a comment, please I ask you to be civil and not act like a moron like this guy was. Please if your going to write a counter argument, just try to be civil in your argument. If you still like the show for whatever reason, then that's fine. It's none of my business if you like something that I don't, watch to your hearts content. All I ask is that to just be a little more critical of the show and listen to a persons arguments of why they don't like the show. I'll just leave a few links to videos of really good and well thought out arguments of people who share my opinions.










I'm sure you've already heard about the tragic passing of the legend Stephen Hillenberg, the well-known creator of SpongeBob. As we all know, we all grew up with SpongeBob and I don't think I need to say that SpongeBob is a massive phenomenon, and even after almost two decades SpongeBob is still one of the most recognized and beloved cartoons out there. Just like every other millennial out there, I loved SpongeBob. Next to Ed Edd N Eddy, SpongeBob is probably one of my all time favorite cartoons, and I'm sure for millions of more millennials out there they feel the exact same way. SpongeBob is really up there with some of the greatest cartoons ever made like The Simpsons, the Looney Toons, South Park, and more. Just like Stan Lee who tragically passed away not too long ago, Stephen Hillenberg will never be forgotten and has made a show that will most likely live on for a long, long, time. Rest in peace Stephen Hillenberg, and thank you for making my childhood, and many others childhoods fantastic. You will never be forgotten.
This isn't going to be a long journal entry, and I doubt anyone's going to read it. But I just want to get this off my chest. As everyone knew, Stan Lee was the creator of Marvel along with Jack Kirby who grew up on Long Island. Just like me actually... Ever since I was little, I've always loved the Sam Raimi Spider-Man movies and the rerun of the original 1960's Spider-Man Amazing Fantasy series since I was little. As I got a little older and read more comic books and superhero movies it really encouraged me and inspired me to create my own superheroes, knowing that Stan Lee was an inspiring writer who lived on Long Island NY just like me and who had many ideas for superheroes and characters really inspired me to still write and better my writing. Stan Lee was like the grandpa of the comic book industry who still wanted to be hip and cool, and I'm pretty sure I can speak for many people when I say he was. A friendly energetic man who was filled with creativity and kindness, and I'm just so glad many of Stan Lee's creations like Spider-Man, X-Men, Fantastic Four, Black Panther, IronMan, and many others became movies that he himself cameo'd in before passing away. There really will never be another man like him. And I hope I can walk in his foot steps and be like him some day. Rest in peace Stan Lee. And one last time... EXCELSIOR!
I never really post any journal entries. In fact this is the first journal entry I'm ever posting. Hooray... Anyway, the reason I'm typing this out is because there's something I just want to talk about.

For the past four or three years I've worked in a Haunted House. Of course it was a seasonal job and only lasted the quarter end of September, all of October, and the first quarter half of November. I got my first job at that Haunted House and I've been going there every year since to scare people and get paid for it. The Haunted park that I worked at has around six attractions. And I worked at the attraction that was pirate themed. It was basically dressing up as Zombie Pirates and jumping out and scaring people in an elaborate pirate themed gulf course. My first time doing it, I was 16 as I was young and nervous, but quickly got used to it as I became more familiar with the workings of the haunted house and how to scare people. It was honestly pretty fun. There are usually two types of people working there; The first were kids who only worked there and did the minimalist of work in order to get money. Because the place I worked at was super easy to get hired at. Just fill out an application and your hired. The second type were people who really enjoyed all the costumes and makeup and scaring people. I was one of those people who enjoyed scaring people and really getting into character. Working at the pirate attraction, I even worked hard to sound much more like a pirate and worked very hard to scare people. The staff there were pretty cool too. Staff around my level and a bit higher were pretty cool and friendly. Though the heads of the park I worked at were kind of assholes. And I'll tell you why later.

Although it can be a good way to get money, like any other job being an actor at a haunted house can have a few downsides of their own. First, on Fridays and Saturdays we start work at 7:30 and end when the last person leaves the park. The ticket booth closes at 12:00 at midnight, we have to scare every single person in the park before we can hang up our costumes and go home. I'm pretty sure you can tell that working that long and being on your toes for the next group of costumers to walk for 6+ hours all night can get a little tiring. Another problem is costumers. Honestly, most costumers are alright, they're just regular people who want a good scare. Nothing wrong with that. Although, we also get the funny guys, the drunks, the idiots, the tough guys, the flailers (People with overwhelming fear who use it as an excuse to flail around violently as they damage props, hurt actors, hurt other costumers, and even hurt themselves. That includes running.), and many more idiots and assholes who make our job harder than it already is. Now, I understand many of you reading this have probably have had much, much, MUCH WORSE job experiences then me. I'm sure you might've had jobs where costumers and management treat you like human trash for no reason other than they think they can. I understand I don't have the worse job experiences in the world. Hell, even some of my co-workers got the worse crap end of the stick when they get punched or even seriously injured by some jackass costumer. But I still want to... "talk" about my experiences. 

I worked there in 2015, 2016, 2017, and now, 2018. Obviously, I've worked at the park for a little while. And to be honest, 2015 to 2017 never really had any actual incidents. Of course there were people flailing around, tough guys who said "this isn't scary", "you suck at your job", "look at this sh*t. This ain't scary" and other phases that either someone trying WAY too hard to prove that their not scared when they actually are and just doesn't want to show it, and people who actually aren't scared but feel the need to act like dickheads anyway. Drunk morons who stumble through the haunted house and can be a danger to themselves or others. Funny guys who make bad or stupid or really dirty jokes actors already heard before about them or props and unintentionally annoy actors. And many more costumers like that. But there was honestly was never a real bad incident with any of them. Until 2018.

There were some changes to the park at they replaced the pirates attraction that I usually worked at with an Asylum themed attraction. There were a lot of animatronics and props in it and it was pretty cool, but that's when problems started. The dressing room that we now dressed up in was also used by the other houses as it was incredibly nasty and cramped. Also, three of the haunted attractions (Asylum included) were all in one massive building with a high ceiling as all the houses were structured in these mazes and walls that separated the houses. When the houses were opened the building was FILLED with so much noise from the multiple attractions that it was disorienting and hard to hear. But the worse part of the day was the costumers. Good god, I have no idea how or way, but almost every single costumer who came in were all 31 flavors of asshole. They ran around and destroyed props, flailed around because of "overwhelming fear" and hurt others and knocked people over. Hell when I scared three girls, a group of dumbasses ran past them because of "overwhelming fear" and knocked them down as one girl hit the back of her head on the concrete floor. Luckily, I think that girl is alright. And nothing bad happened to her. But seriously, whoever's reading this. If you go to a haunted house with your friends or family DO NOT FUCKING RUN OR FLAIL AROUND LIKE A RETARD! They tell you not to run though these things for a reason, and not hurting yourself or others IS IT.

There were plenty of "funny guys" who were some of the most disrespectful and irritating morons on the east coast. They try to make lame and graphic jokes about anything, and would usually play around with the props and mock the actors who are tired and irritated enough already. They may even get physical with an actor to make a joke. I know that people usually have different responses to fear, and I know that making jokes is usually one of them to lighten up the mood and make something scary, not seem as scary. But at the very least, watch your mouth and keep in mind that the stupid and most likely dirty joke your making to an actor may not be as funny. In fact, it's usually incredibly annoying. Either keep the joke small or keep or mouth shut. Oh yeah, and always keep your hands to your damn self.

Speaking of keeping your hands to yourself, we move onto the idiots, the drunks, and people who are just the pure embodiment of being an asshole. People who feel the need to touch the actors and even grab them by the crouch, the ass, the face, the head, and even the fucking neck. One of the female actors told me some jackass grabbed her by the throat to make sure she wasn't a prop. Another actor was punched in the gut by a drunk woman. The cops were called several times because some pervert would usually grab the female actresses by the ass. There are meathead idiots who look at actors and challenge them to a fist fight because they are massive pussies. Some costumers are crazy enough to bring knives and threaten the actors with them. Luckily this only happened twice and nobody was hurt. Hell, when I tried to tell some guy in his group to stop touching the props and move along, he said "what are you gonna do about it?", "I'll do whatever I want.", "You can't tell me what to do." And stuff like that. When I told him to please not do it again and that he can get in trouble for that, he threatened to knock me out and his female friend said something like "Oh yeah, you abuse your power working in this sad little f*cking job because your a f*cking loser with nothing better to do."

... I'm a 19 year old trying to make some money in a haunted house because I couldn't find any other job and working an honest job, and you threaten to knock me out and say that I'm "abusing my power because I have nothing better to do"... Yeah, classy. These people were around their mid-20's to 30's. Hopefully they grow up soon and learn respect before they piss off the wrong person.

There were a few more, like a few teens who scouted the house to make sure nothing would pop up and scare them. I told them that they need to move along because they were holding up other groups, as the lead kid ran ahead and mockingly mimicked my voice as his friends walked through my room.

And of course, the drunks. Drunks can make up 60-90% of these bad costumers. They can stumble around and get hurt, they can assault actors, they make extremely inappropriate jokes, they can flail around and get hurt, bring their goddamn drinks into the haunted house (Yeah, I'm not kidding). Speaking of, that brings up why I think the owners are assholes as well. In the park itself, there is a bar that people can drink at, get drunk, and still walk through the haunted houses. And the higher ups at the park think this idiocy is a good idea. Mainly because it makes them more money and because of that, the actors have to suffer. They only kick out a drunk or drunks if an actor or other guest complains about them to security. I would honestly quit the job here and now if I didn't need the money. But sadly, that's not how things work.

I don't know if there is anybody out there who worked at a haunted house and have experiences like this. But i'd like to hear it if your willing to share. Thanks for reading.
I am done with RWBY. I guess you could say it was the last few episodes of Volume 6 that really got under my skin and got me to stop watching the show entirely. My complaint is every other complaint you've heard about RWBY... The villains are nonthreatening, the plot is nonsensical with subplots leading to nowhere, new characters just pop out of nowhere to suddenly be important to the plot, the characters are flat, boring, unlikable, and stupid, etc, etc, etc... Many of you probably know the complaints. Your also probably guessing that I stopped watching the show at Episode 12 or Episode 13 Vol 6. Yeah, I actually stopped watching at the very end of Episode 11 when that fanbaiting Bumblebee shit popped up. I honestly just stuck around to see how the Vol would end, and of course it was awful. With the disrespectful way they killed Adam to the Leviathan Grimm being one-shoted by the same giant robot that Teams RWBY and JNPR were taking on with no trouble. Miles and Kerry are idiots. They couldn't write a good and coherent story if their life depended on it. And I think they know this with the stupid idea of turning Adam into a pathetic obsessed ex-boyfriend instead of an intimidating and ruthless revolutionary who wants Faunus rights no matter the cost. They know they messed up, and yet they still refuse to admit that anything is wrong and just call anyone who tries to criticize them "jerks".

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Earlier in the show, around Vol 4 I tried reasoning with myself that Miles and Kerry just made a few mistakes and they'll get better at it as time moves on. We just finished Vol 6 and it was garbage. Miles and Kerry refuse to take criticism and they refuse to change, even lowing themselves to the point of accepting fan requests by bringing Neo back for no other reason than for fanservice and obnoxiously shoving Bumblebee down every viewers throats because the fans wanted it. Unprofessional, no writing talent, insecure, immature, and not fit to write any show, let alone RWBY. I'm done defending these two and giving them chances over and over when they constantly mess up with no remorse and no desire to do better. Although, even though Miles and Kerry are still heavily to blame for the butchering of RWBY, the fandom is kind of to blame as well. Pressuring Miles, Kerry, and the rest of the CRWBY to being back Neo along, many of them eating up whatever crap Miles and Kerry write thus encouraging them to believe the delusion that they are still good writers, and many of the RWBY fans have this cult or hive mind mentality of verbally attacking anyone who doesn't like the decisions Miles, Kerry, and the CRWBY made. Every time I shared my thoughts about it, there is always at least one person who replies with "yes and they will watch it you know why they are not crazy nitpickers and they dont base there everything to hating the show and you and this guy are not watching anymore who gives a fuck you think you are the majority of the fans or something you are not you crazy fools wont be missed" (That is the actual unedited reply this guy wrote me. I'm not joking).

If your going to leave a comment, please I ask you to be civil and not act like a moron like this guy was. Please if your going to write a counter argument, just try to be civil in your argument. If you still like the show for whatever reason, then that's fine. It's none of my business if you like something that I don't, watch to your hearts content. All I ask is that to just be a little more critical of the show and listen to a persons arguments of why they don't like the show. I'll just leave a few links to videos of really good and well thought out arguments of people who share my opinions.










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